Darker/Lighter Side of love

Why

Why, why, why it's always why.
Can't something just be; just leave
it alone should replace why.

Enjoy it while you can. Never think
past square one. The futures what brings
things to it's bitter end.

They say

They say I seem distant: I am, I live
in the clouds, because the world offers
only the worse.

And it's because of you!

Judge mend

My judge mend has become clouded
and my days weary, since the day you
lied to me

My life eyes dull, my conversations silent
and my love lost.

My writing depressed: I once asked why
God always gives us what we need most.
Now I ask no more.

I just lie and say ”everything is as it should be”
but it's not. It's lost!

Dreams

A dream is everlasting:
for it shows us what we want.
Nightmares are everlasting:
for it shows us the worse .

But I dream a mixture,
everyday:
for I dream of you.

Your what I want
and yet there's no hope
when I think of
you.

Animal Rights

Why we wake is,
why we sleep.

Why we care is,
why we don't.

We don't care,
we wake,
we sleep.

These are the animal
rights. But where not:
animals don't love.

This is what makes us
human.

This is what we life for everyday:
to love and be
loved.

Seasons (Original)

Seasons come and go,
your tastes chance,
your life chances.

But I'm everlasting,
I never come and go,
my likes and dislikes
are as they are, and
my life never chances.

Yet still you abuse. My faint hart,
My faint Hart can't stand this anymore.

Yet I stay,
devoted to you,
I wake and fall asleep
thinking of you.

But still your love stays unfair.

I held her

I held her till she slept,
I held her while she slept,
I love her more than a mother
can love her own child.

She slept in my arms,
till my phone rang,
she woke lost in the land,
of dreams.

She slipped back to her position,
gave her a little kiss,
lay-ed there watching,
the movie.

I left late,
but I wish I never did
I wish I could stay,
I felt so very much loved.

The touch

The touch of her skin,
as soft as a snow flake.

Holding her,
running my fingers,
all over her back,
enjoying every moment,
tougher as long as time
would let.

Writing

I write about you in the form,
of poems. Yes I know
it's nothing like,
the greats

But still I write,
to tell you what you mean,
how much I love and care for you,
and how leaving you everyday hurts more

than physical pain;
more than you would know,
but tomorrow I shall see you again.
And my life will have,
the form of a love poem.

Seasons

Seasons come and go,
your tastes chance,
your life chances.

But I'm everlasting,
I never come and go,
my likes and dislikes
are as they are, and
my life never chances.

So this I promise:
I'll always be there,
I'll always care,
and forever I shall
love you.

Mind

Why is it,
that you can't,
move on to higher,
ground.

Why are we here,
and not there.
Why is point b,
so far away.

Friends,
but something more,
a couple,
but something less.

Awake,
but asleep.
Asleep,
but awake.

Dreaming of more,
and no more than that.

Animal rights, and Seasons were okay poems, the love poems were kind of cliche though, spread them around so it doesn't seem like you've tired the subject in one foul swoop.

Originally posted by intoxicatedpoet
Animal rights, and Seasons were okay poems, the love poems were kind of cliche though, spread them around so it doesn't seem like you've tired the subject in one foul swoop.

Thanks for the input. I'll do so and here's another one:

Porslyn

You dropped me like a stone,
but like porslynd I broke,

You bluntly told me,
it's over, and I could say nothing.

I see now that,
I meant nothing, but You meant,
everything.

But now it's over,
and I'm left with
the broken
pieces.

And for that,
I'll hate you.

and:

Happiness

It's the first time in,
many a year that I feel,
sane, happy from inside,
to the other reaces.

I've emptyed the dark,
corners of my mind,
I'm renewed.

And only this feeling,
can last.

Your work has raw potential, but it's difficult to grasp the real concepts as you tend to spell quite irregularly... I suggest you check all of your spellings before submitting your work and then we can give a fairer judgement on your poems.

I liked, personally, 'Animal Rights' and 'Writing'... you show real promise 👆

Thank you. It's wonderful when others see something in you.

And any advice you could give besides my horrible spelling please do

Originally posted by aristotle
Thank you. It's wonderful when others see something in you.

And any advice you could give besides my horrible spelling please do

Hmm, gonna drop some new stuff on us? Please?

By tomorrow evening

Originally posted by aristotle
By tomorrow evening

Forgiven

You've been forgiven,
before you said sorry,

You'll never have to say it,
again.

For you must know by now,
that I'll always hold you close,
and never shall I hold anything,
against you.

Ever

Have you ever,
felt that feeling.

That feeling that hurts,
deep inside the heart,
the feeling that deprives,
you of all comfort.

Have you ever,
felt lost, broken
and forgotten.

Well I hope you never had,
and never will.

But if you do,
I pray that you survive,
and that you'll be touched,
by an angel soon after..

God

God you've shown me,
so many things.

But as I grasp these,
images of happiness,
you deprive me.

Why do You show me these pictures,
if you won't let me touch the stars.

Your cruel towards me,
but yet I must pray,
yet I must believe,

Oh God don't let me,
die empty.

Let this poem be my
prayer.

Time

Time is a delicate thing,
It has no flaws nor weakens,
It is our father and our mother,

When you’re born it takes your name,
Dates it all and is always present in all,
You do.

Unlike certain people whom you place,
On pedestals for all to see,
These mere mortals are un-compared.

Mortals

We are all born and we all shall die,
At which time we do not know,
But like all mere men you fear it,
And your faces hid behind a mask,

So it’s time you understood,
The basics:
“You’re going to die,
And it could happen,
Any day. So why do
You waste time waiting
It’s time you lived”

I’m not trying to coach you,
Since it’s not me whom fathers you,
It’s not me whom mothers you.

But wake at once,
Live your life,
For no one else can life it,
For you

I liked Ever the most out of all of these 😊 Sadly I know that feeling...

Well then I hope an angel will touch your heart. But I must say that feeling almost destroyed me completely

Originally posted by aristotle
Well then I hope an angel will touch your heart. But I must say that feeling almost destroyed me completely

Almost destroyed me too 🙁

God

He's supposed to be everywhere,
but he's nowhere,
he left me falling into darkness,
running and laughing.
Me the fool.

He's like my father,
showing me and telling me story's
giving me dreams ideals,
beautiful dreams oh,
but so lost-you b@stards,
you both father figures.

Yet your both dead to me

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Look into my eye's,
what do you see?
Nothing I know it's because,
my soul as evaporated.

My eyes dull,
my heart stone cold,
my words blunt.

I have chosen to evade you,
for I hate all that you stand for,
what you promised,
what you never gave me.

Your nothing more than a fable,
your nothing but a fairy-tale,
love your not present your,
GONE

Isn't it strange what live gives you when your walking. I always say "Lifes like a walk. And sometimes life pushes you over and just maybe just maybe he'll help you up"

Help comes in time of need,
it's not always what you want,
but it's always what you need.

Don't second doubt, do!
Ask and you'll receive,
demand and you'll get.

Love and you'll be loved hate, and you'll be hated.
Rather receive than take.

Wait and you will be left behind,
rush and you'll get lost,
you must live with all consequences,
when you made a decision.

I love you!

past danger is a thrill,
past here is there,
between today and tomorrow is choices.

Your my choice,
Us above doubt,
now above the future.

A mistake could be made,
but like mountains it could be conquered.

I would rather say I tried,
than say I missed out.

hey

i just wanted to say something

its seems to me like many poems are in free verse

so she can spell it how she feels

just wanted to say that

i love them