My Grammar Assignment!

Originally posted by FeceMan
"She doesn't have a family; it will be like she never existed."

That part?

No it's the "but I know what didn'T kill her....smoking!" .....great episode indeed. Althouhg, isn't like every second of Family Guy jsut hilarious,

That everyone for all the constructive critism and the good reviews.

The grammar mistakes are partly because the original version is double spaced and for your convience I fixed that for online.So there probaly alot of mistakes where things dont quite fit.

This is a real professional paper.Its a highschool assignment.We where asked to write a short report on a period in someones life.

This isnt meant to be a political paper.

Originally posted by Cringe
That everyone for all the constructive critism and the good reviews.

The grammar mistakes are partly because the original version is double spaced and for your convience I fixed that for online.So there probaly alot of mistakes where things dont quite fit.

This is a real professional paper.Its a highschool assignment.We where asked to write a short report on a period in someones life.

This isnt meant to be a political paper.

What do you mean.I edited that paper about five times.And so did one of my teachers.

Originally posted by Cringe
What do you mean.I edited that paper about five times.And so did one of my teachers.

"No, the grammar mistakes are because you have poor grammar, and you--as well as your teacher--have lackluster training in editing and revising writing."

Oh,ok.

Originally posted by Cringe
Oh,ok.

You are supposed to get angry at me! You are supposed to yell at me and everyone can have a good chuckle about our verbal sparring. You can't just NOT get mad!

I just really think it has something to do with the way I formatted it for the website because I checked that thing over and over again.

Originally posted by FeceMan
What the hell?

You are supposed to get angry at me! You are supposed to yell at me and everyone can have a good chuckle about our verbal sparring. You can't just NOT get mad!

Oh no.....they discovered your secret.....run Shitman...RUN

Originally posted by Cringe
I just really think it has something to do with the way I formatted it for the website because I checked that thing over and over again.

Originally posted by Cringe
I just really think it has something to do with the way I formatted it for the website because I checked that thing over and over again.

There are actually several mistakes of grammar and spelling in the essay. I wouldn't have much faith in that teacher.

I have a great grammar teacher which is why I find it hard to believe that she wouldnt have noticed but then again I added some more stuff after she gave me her revisions.

I see.

What was the purpose of it anyway, just a random assignment?

I geuss so.I spent quite a bit of time on it though.It took alot of time to find a website that talked about the bad points in Bush's college life instead of praising him.

Originally posted by Cringe
I geuss so.I spent quite a bit of time on it though.It took alot of time to find a website that talked about the bad points in Bush's college life instead of praising him.

That's odd. You would think that you would have no trouble at all.

I didnt think I would either.It was either glorifying his time at the white house or just saying the facts with no negativity behind the words.And alot of the times I couldnt even find stuff on his college life.

Originally posted by Bardock42
Oh no.....they discovered your secret.....run Shitman...RUN

omg I almost pissed my pants reading this, holy crap that made me laugh, bonus points to you 😂

My english teacher is an essay nazi, she literally forces us to write by a book, something called the Art of Writing or something.

wow.Whats funny about my teacher is she's a grammer teacher but yet she mispronounces words more than any human being I know.(more than GWB 😖)