Alex:The Story of a Teenager

Originally posted by Solo
That was the shittiest, most poorly written thing I've ever read you stupid ***. You ruined my day, and that of my family and everyone else I know. Fall over and die ball-licker. Don't disgrace me with a reply either.

P.S. Learn how to spell and use commas you ****in' piece of shit, faggity ball lappin' pussy.

Originally posted by Solo
P.S. You want me to piss off, into your mouth, because you're a *** like that you stupid ass ball-licker. Your story is not getting any better and is just you wallowing in your shitty ****in' pussy ass self. **** you, and no you can't suck my balls anytime soon so stop asking.

Originally posted by Solo
I bet you'd like it if I was an ass so then you could tap it, you stupid queer ball-licking pussy. Continue your story.

Relax, or you're getting reported.

I haven't read the story yet, but I will soon. 😉

Ive already reported him 😕

Originally posted by Brunette Angel
I thought that his girlfriend was Alexis...
But, I do like your story - it's really turning out well.
Keep it up

OMG!This is so hard.I have rpgs going on plus this.I keep getting the names confused.Michelle is the name of someone else in an rpg.Alexis is correct.

Btw,thanks for the support.

No prob, just keep it up and don't get too stressed!!

Alex sat during the next three periods which inlcuded:English,Geography,and Physics,wondering who sent him the letter.He kept looking around the class trying to spot anyone looking at him or perhaps checking him out or anything that signified someone in their class having some sort of attraction to him.He was unsuccessful and decided that if the girl was in their class she was really good at keeping her emotions to herself and not making her crush noticeable.After the three long and boring periods came lunch.Alex walked out of Physics bored out of his mind.His physics teacher,My Samson,had the unique ability to actually make students want to fall asleep at the sound of his boring and toneless voice.He spoke almost as if he was a zombie and had no enthusiasim in the subject he taught.Alex walked down the hall to the cafeteria by himself.Alexis had gone with her friends to a brief cheer meeting for the big pep rally that was going to take place the following day promoting the big Thursday night basketball game between Sherry High and their rival, Arstor Academy.She had said she would meet him in the cafeteria in about fifteen minutes giving Alex a few minutes by himself as he walked to the lunchroom to think about the subject of the mysterious note.

When he arrived at the lunchroom he found his group of friends already sitting at a table near the door eating lunch.

"Hey Alex!What's cracking?!" John roared over the loud cafeteria.John was Alex's best friend and could be a bit of a goofball sometimes but also knew how to be a really good friend and had helped Alex out in alot of his toughest times."Nothin much home bro!" Alex joked as he took a seat next to him and five of his other friends.

"Hey,wheres Alexis?" Jennifer asked.Jennifer was a short,brown haired,blue eyed girl that Alex had made friends with as a freshman.Like John,she was also one of his good friends and was one of the only girls besides Michelle he could relate with and have fun with.She was also very pretty and had the cutest personality."She's in a cheer meating.She'll be here in a few minutes" Alex said.

"Hey Alex why dont you button up your shirt about 50 more notches.You look like a pale-bonned skeez" Melody had crack.Meoldy was the mean girl in the group.She knew everything about everyone and always had the rudest insults to crack even though she always claimed she was "Just Kidding".She was tall with longe blond hair,green eyes,and whitest and straighest teeth in the school.She had that look about her that made her look extremely nice but after awhile you start to notice theres more to the pie than meets the eye.Alex didnt like her,but accepted her in the group because she was a friend of Alexis and Raquels.Raquel was a another friend of Alex and Alex's.She was always funny and bright around Alex but for some reason he always thought she was double-side despite her nice girl approach.She was pretty.One of those small girls that guys just like to hug and cuddle with,she was also a bit of an airhead and just earlier that day had mentioned to the teacher while asking her a question that chicken came out of cows.The whole class laughed but she didnt get the joke till about five minutes after.

At last there was Michael.A tall,athletic pretty boy who's main goals in life where sports,parties,and his friends and family.He was smart but didnt work on a education and based his future on a possible basketball scholarship when he graduated from highschool.He sat beside michael not paying attention to Alex but concentraing on his left-over pizza from the night before.

"Uh are you gonna get something to eat or is the skinny ass look working for you?" Melody asked.Alex felt like he was going to burst but he kept his cool and just said "I'm waiting for Alexis"."Whatever" Melody replied as she went back to eating her salad.

i like it, but try not to get Alexis mixed up with 'Michelle'

Where did I do that?

I apologize on the behalf of the posts before this one.

Originally posted by Cringe

What do you mean on the past tense thing?

when referring to time.....

I am going to the cinema...
I have gone to the cinema...

I know its a bit basic, but thats what Darkc is going on about.. your using the wrong words in some places....

"Alex got back to class and saw the Ms Groggy already beginning the Math lesson.He walked in and started walking up the steps to his seat on the 5th row.

"Uh Mr Bannecker.Why are you late? she asked,apparently trying to put him on the spot so he could be embarrased.She loved doing this.Making kids miserable at the worst times was her specialty.Fortunately enough,Alex was a pretty popular kid and nobody would mess with him for being made out to be a fool."

Should read....

Alex got back into class, and saw that Ms Groggy had already begun the Math lesson. He walked in late and started to climb up the steps to his seat in the 5th row.

"Uh Mr Bannecker. Why are you late? she asked, putting him on the spot so he would be embarrased. She loved doing this, making kids miserable at the worst times was her specialty. Fortunately though, Alex was a pretty popular kid. Nobody would mess with him for being made out to be a fool.

Personally you should put a space after a fullstop...
Try using a thesaurus... alot of this reads like its for a 10year old... try to use bigger words to increase your vocab... alot of longer english words give alot of class to a book when used correctly...

Oh.I dont really see the mistakes made in the parts you mentioned 😕 sorry.

A few minutes went by.Alex sat there not paying attention to Jennifer's and Melody's argument on whose make-up was better.Melody had been arguing that her's enhanced her eyes and gave her a darker,almost mocha like skin tone.She also mentioned it helped her not look as pale and sickly as Alex,but he ignored the comment.Jennifer said that her make-up gave her face a more pinkish look and that was better than looking like fudgsicle.Melody didnt respond,realizing she had been told.

Alex then saw Alexis walk threw the cafeteria door.She spotted them and walked over to the table and took a seat across from Alex by Jennifer."Hey guys!" Alexis said with enthusiasim,"Geuss What?!"."Pigs can fly!" John cracked."No.This is way better" Alexis said with a big smile on her face."What is it?" Alex finally chirped in."I was just at the cheer meating and......." Alexis was cut of by Melody's sudden shock."There was a cheer meeting today?!" Melody said sounding very suprised."Uh-Yeah" Alexis said, "No one told you?"."No,no one told me!" Melody screeched."Ok well chill.I guess Janelle forgot" Alexis said with a solemn look on her face.Janelle was the leader of the cheer squad and therefore was in charge of planning things and calling meetings and whatever it was they did."Anyways,Janelle is moving to Cambridge in two weeks and the coach said it's very possible I could become the new cheer captain!".Alex's eyes widened "Thats amazing!Congratulations Alexis that so cool"."Well nothings official yet,but the coach said it was definately a possibility if nothing better comes up"."Who could be better than you?"Alex said cheerfully."Thanks" Alexis said,blushing.

Alex glanced over at Melody.She sat there smiling but Alex knew that she was furious deep down inside.Alexis had gotten the heads up by the coach and Melody hadn't.Alex knew he should be enjoying this moment.Knowing that Melody had gotten dissed majorly,but he knew that this wasnt good.If there was one person you didnt want to have on your bad side it was Melody.Even if Alexis was a good friend of Melody that wouldnt stop her jealousy from getting in the way with her reasoning.

Alex got up from his seat and asked Alexis if she was hungry.She said she was and they walked to the end of the lunch line."You know she's furious right now" Alex said straightforwardly."I know" Alexis said not looking at all suprised."Well im just saying you should be careful.You know how Melody can get when she's jealous.You remember Ashley Crawshore right?". Alexis Nodded."Melody damn near ruined her life after she found out she had a crush on Sean".Sean was Melody's ex-boyfriend in Jr High.When Melody found out one of the class geeks liked her boyfriend and wouldnt back down from trying to go after him she spreaded a lie throughout the school that Melody was a lesbian.Melody was so humiliated that she transferred schools."Dont worry.Im not stupid.I know how Melody can be and im prepared in case she tries anything"."Why do you even hang out with her?" Alex asked puzzled.Alex had always asked Alexis that question but she never seemed to give an answer to him other than they go way back and everyone has there flaws and everyones made their mistakes so there's no use in breaking a friendship over a few things.Alex thought that sound foolish seeing that Melody would do it in a heart beat if Alexis did something she didnt like.Alex didnt know if Alexis was just blind or naive,but he knew that if she kept hanging out around with the a life-ruiner it wasnt going to be long before she became the next victim.

-Its not rushed
-I dont care about spelling and grammar for now
-I did the best I can with paragraphs because I didnt want to do script form

What do you mean on the past tense thing?

umm... you should care about these things...since you ignore these things in your writing this is why it sucks... not only that the whole story itself just reeks

😐 you wanted me to post this in here .. so here you go.. 😐

Thank you.Keeping reply to my story pointing out any other errors 🙂.

Even though it may have a few mistakes, I'm really enjoying your story. It has a good plot to it so far. I have noticed that as people give you criticism, you use it and make your story even better. It's really coming along. Keep it up!

~Thanks alot.Here's another bit for ya'll.I've already pre-wrote the summarys for the next few bits so I know where the storys heading and am not just randomly coming up with stuff 😄~

After Alex and Alexis where finshed with lunch Alex decided to walk Alexis back to homeroom. Alexis told Jennifer to save her a seat when she got to class. Melody had get what she missed from the meeting from the cheer coach.

Alex and Alexis walked down a noisy hallyway. Kids where scrambling, trying to get there books and themselves to class before the bell rang. Alex and Alexis walked along the the middle of the hallways. They where really fustrated because they where trying to talk but they couldnt because paper airplanes kept getting thrown around the room.Occasionally one of Alex's basketball friends would throw one at him.He playfully threw it back, hitting them on the forehead everytime. People kept rushing by him and Alexis though so they barely had any room to breathe, let alone carry on a conversation.

"Why dont we take a shortcut through the Gym?" Alex asked.

"Ok.Anything to get out of this madness" Alexis said,sounding releaved.

Five minutes before class was always the worst time to be in the hallways. Everyone was scrambling, trying to get to their lockers and get there books out so they didnt have to be late. It was also a time when pranksters walked around tripping people,hiding backpacks,and tossing paper airplanes at an unsuspecting head. Hardly anyone took the gym shortcut and this gave Alex and Alexis some breathing room and space as they walked.

"So do you want to come over today after school?Maybe stay over for a few hours and have dinner with me and my parents?" Alexis asked.

Alex thought of the number. The mysterious girl that wanted him to call her because she had a crush on him. He couldnt go.He had to stop it right now before word got out. Cooldon High was a very gossip- pron school and Alex was very familiar on how to watch his back. "I cant Alexis.I have this thing with my mom and...." Alex didnt get to finish his sentence.

Alexis sighed "Oh."

"I would if I could Alexis but me and my mom are going to a-uh-movie" Alex said,realizing he had stalled.He hoped Alexis hadnt caught it.

"Well....maybe tommorow?" Alexis asked nervously.

"Yeah!Tommorow would be great" Alex said reassuringly.

"Ok cool.I'll tell me my mom" Alexis said starting to sound cheerful.

By now Alex had walked Alexis to homeroom. Alot of kids where already sitting down. Class still had about thirty second until the bell rang. Alex could see Jennifer waving to Alexis. He could see she had saved him a seat.

"You'd better go or else Ms. Regnart's gonna tear you a new one" Alex said jokingly.

Alexis laughed "Ok.See ya after school." She leaned in and gave him a big kiss.

"Thanks" Alex said, replying to the kiss.

"Anytime" Alexis said as she walked away.

Anytime,Alex thought.Yeah ok.

New bit coming in a few days 😄

I'm in the process of writing a few pieces for the future.

Okay!
I can't wait!

😄

~Heres quite a lengthy piece because im gonna be gone for a day 😄~

Alex walked along the hallway on his way to the locker room. He met up with John who was on his way there too.

"Hey!" Alex called out.John was only a few feet ahead of him but he was walking fast and didnt see Alex.John turned around and faced Alex.

"Hey" he said as Alex caught up with him

"Pumped up for Thursday," John commented. "I almost got my jumpshot perfected for the big game" John said shooting an air ball with his hands.They both laughed."You pshyiced or what?".

"Yeah,I am. I really thing we're going to win this time" Alex said,trying to sound ethusiastic even though he still had Alexis and the number in his mind.

They made it to the locker room door and stepped inside.The air smelled of sweat mixed with bad spray deoderant.He saw the guys had already started.Most of them just sat on the benches talking to the other guys even though they where already dressed.Alex couldnt imagine who would want to stay in this room longer than they have to.

" Nice game point Monday! " one of the seniors yelled from across the room. "Yeah nice game point " another guy yelled. Alex smiled nervously, not liking being put on the spot. "You gonna do that again in the game tommorow? " another kid in Alex's classed asked.

" I'll do my best "Alex said trying to shake the attention.

Him and John quickly got dressed and left the locker room. The air outside smelt so good compared to the dingy sweat caused by the guys in the locker room.They began walking towards the gym again.

" So have you asked Amanda to the dance on Friday yet? " Alex asked John with a smile on his face.

John laughed "No not yet. I dont know if I can. She's really hot and nice and stuff and i'm well me." John said starting to sound serious. " Do you think she would say yes? " John asked.

"Yeah" Alex said encouragingly. " Ask her out dude. She's totally crushin on you man." Alex didnt know this for a fact but he was trying to give John some confidence so he could just get on with it.

" Yeah ok. Maybe I will " John said starting to sound confident again. "I'll show her some of that Johny Boy charm" he said jokingly.Alex laughed.

They reached the gymnasium where they had P.E. everyday and they took a seat on the bleachers.By now there where already fifteen kids there so Alex and John had to take a seat near the front.

" So you going with Alexis to the dance? " John asked.

" NO!" Alex said sarcastically. "I'm going with my other girlfriend who i've been seeing for eight months." John and Alex laughed. "Hey where's Michael?"

"I dont know.I havent seen him since lunch.He said he had some business to take care of and you know what that means " John said grinning.

" How does that guy get to make-out with every hot girl in school?! " Alex asked frustrated.

John laughed "I dont know but he manages"

Alex grinned.Then he heard a kid yelling behind him. He saw two kids from his class playing keep away with one of the mathletes pairs of glasses.

"Give it back!" the kid yelled.

"Get it yourself" one of the bullies called back.

Alex got up and ran to the kids. " Give it back to him " Alex demanded.He wasn't afraid.He was dealing with simple class outcast.He could handle them.

"Or what?" one of them asked snarling.

John got up and backed Alex up. "Or else you'll have every other Jr. Varsity basketball player waiting for you outside after school. "

The bully's sat there snarling and then gave the glasses back to the little kid.Alex and John backed away without saying another word.

"Jerks" John muttered as they walked back to their seats.They saw Michael making his way from the entrance across the gym.He walked up to them.

"Oh my God! That girl in 11th grade.Whats her name? Uh....Alisa Travis.Dude she is like.......awesome!" Michael said with a big smile on his face.He saw Alex and John where not showing any excitment. "Whats eating you guys ? "he asked.

"Stupid bully's , " John replied. "We just had to care of some.Why cant they ever pick on somebody who can defend themselves?Instead in they have to pick on....math nerds."

"Oh.well I just made-out with the hottest girls in school so....."

"Yeah,Congrats" Alex said showing no action behind the words.

"Fine then" Michael took a seat next to them. "Dont be happy for me.Jeez!"

"Sorry," Alex replied. "Stupid bullys just get on my nerves."

"Yeah,I know what you mean" Michael replied.

After P.E. Alex,John, and Michael lefted the gym and got changed in the locker room.The air was hot and wet as the sweaty students got changed.Alex,John, and Michael put on their cloths and quickly left.

" They need some ventilation in there or something " Alex complained.

"For real" John replied.

They usually met Melody,Alexis,and Jennifer in front of the school so they started walking there but they didnt have to walked for long before they saw them heading there themselves.

"Hey!" Alex called out.

"Hey" Alexis replied turning around.

"Oh shoot! I forgot my P.E. shirt in the locker room" Alex exclaimed exhuastedly. "Alexis,can you take my backpack to the front for me?"

"Sure" Alexis replied.

Alex ran off to the locker room.

Alexis and the group walked to the front of the school.Alexis stopped.

"I forgot my geometry book in Ms Groggy's classroom.I need to go get it " she said.

"Too late. You know Ms Groggy leaves right at three" Melody said.

Alexis smacked herself playfully in the head. "Thats right.What am I going to do? I didnt do my homework in study hall "

" Borrow Alex's " Melody suggested.

"Yeah,I dont think he'll mind.He finished his homework in class today" Alexis said cheerfully.She reached in Alex's backpack and got his book.She put it in her backpack and continued to walk towards the front of the school.They got there and sat on some benches while they waited for their parents.John and Michael sat on the grass talking about the basketball game that was going to happen on Thursday.Melody,Jennifer, and Alexis talked about the dance and what they where going to wear. Jennifer said she had already bought a yellow,sunflowered like dress with white dandilions on it. Melody said she was wearing a simple black dress her parents had imported from Italy for her birthday. Alexis said she was wearing a red,silk dress with a black shaw. They all giggled.Exclaiming how good they where going to look.

Alex then walked out and joined them.

"What are you ladies talking about ? " Alex asked.

"Just girl stuff " Alexis replied giggling.

"You werent talking about me where you "Alex asked with a grin.

"No, idiot,we where talking about what we're going to wear to the dance Friday " Melody said smirking.

"Oh well......." Alex was in the middle of a comeback when he was interrupted by his mom's car honk. "Oh, I have to go. I'll talk to ya'll lata " He walked to Alexis and gave her a kiss. "Call me " he said in her ear. He walked towards his car.

"Cya Alex! " John and Michael called out.

Alex waved not looking back.

"That messed up." he heard John and Michael comment.

"Just kiddin" Alex turned around and yelled back.

He got in his mom's escalade and began to shut the door.

"WAIT ALEX I...." Alex's car door shut in the middle of Alexis sentence. " got your geometry book " Alexis said to herself now that he couldnt hear her.

I like it