The Dagger of Glory

This story does not have a particular main character. There are many. Please comment on it and be honest.

June Silta sat at her desk studying for her exams. She was working herself too hard,as some said but she hopes to get into Oxford University,England. She lived in Canada , and though she had a lot of choices, she chose Oxford. It was late at night and a blanket of darkness covered the earth as the lights suddenly went out."Mom? Dad?"she called. Their was no response. She went downstairs stumblig and found a torchlight at the bottom of the staircase. Her wavy , dark brown hair kept getting in her eyes as she made her way to the sitting room. Terror filled her dark brown eyes as she gasped in horror at the sight before her.On the walls of the sitting room was written in fresh blood:

Beware for the Darkness shall return
This time to succeed with its desires
All the side of the light will forever be gone
Never to return again.

She had no clue what it meant but knew it wasn't good."Mom..."she said weakly her voice breaking. A loud noise banged in the silence of the night. She turned around and found her feet cemented to the floor. Her parents lay before her , lifeless and their faces look empty , as though their soulds no longer existed.A sudden sharp pain in the back of her head made her fall to the floor , unconsious.

Dark grey clouds covered the sky as the winds howled like ghosts.Rain poured mercilessly down on the earths surface as lighning flased like daggers throughout the sky and thunder roared hungrily.All this was taking place as Jason Cutter was searching frantically in the back of his house in the garden for something he had misplaced earlier in the day.The rain and lighting nor the fact that there was a thunder storm bothered him. Her sighed , giving up and sat on a bench.

He thought of June and How she was probably studying her mind away. Suddenly , the ringing of the phone was barely audible in the storm. Fortunately the phone line had not stopped working yet. He answered it. he man on the other line said
,"I am terribly sorry about this , but your friend , June is currently in the hospital.It appears her parents were murdered and she was also stabbed in the stomach by a dagger and wounded in the head. She was alive when we got there , thankfully.We still have hope for her."

The phone fell out of Jason's hand when he heard this.Shock emanated from his eyes as the words seemed to repeat over and over in his head. In a flash , he bolted throught the front door throwing his coat over his and ran out into the rain.The Hospital was a distance away but the thought of June kept him going.He 15 minutes later he stumbled and fell on the road , but there were no cars so he lay there breathing heavily.He was tired to death , cold , hungry and his head was pounding. He found his strenght and got back up. And ran the rest of the way He pushed the doors of the hospital open and ran to the desk.

"J-June Silta," he told the lady at the desk.

She checked something on her computer then said , ''Sorry,but you can't see her at the moment."

Just then , a doctor came up to him. "Jason Cutters?" he asked.

"Yes, where is June, how is she?" he asked worriedly

"June , i am afraid is not in such good condition.I assure you we will do as best as we can to save her. You are welcome to stay over the night if you want," said the doctor kindly.

"No , I want to see her. Or at least tell me her chances of survival," demanded Jason.

"I am afraid that is not possible." said the doctor apologetically.

Angrily , Jason threw himself down on one of the couches and decided to wait as the doctor suggested.He didn't know what he would without June if she died. The had been friends since pre-school and remained best friends since then. He was wide awake and attentive to what was going on around him , and though he appeared angry in the outside, he was really screaming in pain and sorrow on the inside.

brilliant, really really brilliant

There is more but unless anyone comments on whether they like it or not and want more, i'm not posting.

expert advise told from the wise...((i've always wanted to say that.))
don't make stories for others enjoyment, do it for yourself, it'll help a lot. plus i don't count anymore...🙁

It's good! Please post more. I wanna know what happens to June!!

A few hours later, the doctor came back and Jason rose from his chair so fast that he almost knocked it over. “I am quite relieved to say, that although June will be in the hospital for a few weeks she will be ok. She will forever be scarred by this memory, but she’ll be alright.” Relief and happiness hit Jason with such force that he felt dizzy for a moment.

“Where is she? Can I see her now?” asked Jason. Just then another teenaged girl, probably the same age as Jason and June rushed through the doors, her blonde hair flying behind her. “Aria!” Jason addressed the girl.

“Jason, I came as soon as I could. I would have been here sooner but…where is she? How is she?” said Aria.

“Aria, calm down. She’s going to be ok,” said Jason gently. She smiled happily.

“You may see her now,” said a doctor. He led them to the room in which June was being kept. However, their hearts sank when they saw her. June's skin was pale , her body limp and weak.

“She doesn’t look to good…” said Jason worriedly.

“No, but she will survive,” said the doctor.

“Are you sure?” said Aria who had grasped Jason’s arm for support.

It's amazing! Please keep posting. ✅

AWESOMED! The world really needs some more wonderful, talented authors like yourself! I'll certainly be looking forward to more!

I need more!

Originally posted by ~*Lover_girl1*~
There is more but unless anyone comments on whether they like it or not and want more, i'm not posting.

Originally posted by Shadow x 20
If that's the reason you're writing this story then you need to stop now. Write stories for yourself not anyone else.

No, thats not why.

then...

could have used a better beginning, and quite a bit more detail i think. but it's good really really good.

Look who is posing a beta now. lol.

lol. i used to do this to people all the time, but they had hated me for it, so that is really why i hate betas, because one person would be apprecitated, and i wouldn't.