Originally posted by Cringe
Because I decided to match something up with your sig 🙂
well your Alex story is just plain stupid (I actually started to read it) it was horrible...you need to learn to spell...and you sentence structure is even worse...learn to write.
and you make the most pointless and gayest threads on this forum
Originally posted by Morning_Glory
well you Alex story is just plain stupid (I actually started to read it) it was horrible...you need to learn to spell...and you sentence structure is even worse...learn to write.and you make the most pointless and gayest threads on this forum
you know what cracks me up about his story is the 1st few lines before that horrible excuse of a story even begins
Hi my name is Josh and it's always been a dream of mine to make that one story or RPG that everyone loves
how sad is that.. that it was his dream to destroy the English language..and the fact that he dreams about RPG is beyond gay ....
-Its not rushed
-I dont care about spelling and grammar for now
-I did the best I can with paragraphs because I didnt want to do script formWhat do you mean on the past tense thing?
umm... you should care about these things...since you ignore these things in your writing this is why it sucks... not only that the whole story itself just reeks
Thanks MG those are lovely comment that should be placed in my thread to prevent going off-topic.Please do leave examples of where I went wrong in my story.Give quotes and such.That would really help.
Btw,the dreaming part was a exageration.I do want to right a good story though and im trying.Sorry if I didnt do as could as i'd hoped seeing as how its my first try 🙂
Originally posted by KillTheLight
congratulations 😐 and where exactly did i dispute this?
Originally posted by KillTheLight
wow if you find her sig gay you have major issues 😐
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you still don't see it do you..😐 I was obviously referring to your comment about MG's sig..so the 'her' in that sentence is MG and does not challenge your type of gender or sexuality in anyway😐😐😐I cant believe i needed to break that down for you.. because your to incompetent to read a simple comment properly..😬
Thanks MG those are lovely comment that should be placed in my thread to prevent going off-topic.Please do leave examples of where I went wrong in my story.Give quotes and such.That would really help.Btw,the dreaming part was a exageration.I do want to right a good story though and im trying.Sorry if I didnt do as could as i'd hoped seeing as how its my first try
dont tell me what to do...
and my 8 yr old niece can write better than you ...the whole story line is just complete crap...