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Ok, I'm going to try this out.

To Kill The Pain
All these drugs all this weed
Its all around it helps to feed
to feed the hunger of my pain
I've got nothing to lose, nothing to gain.

They say its bad and to stay away
but I get more ****ed up every day
They say its easy to just say "no"
but for me its the only way to go.

I need the high to kill the pain
I need the feeling to keep me sane
All these drugs are what I love
all these drugs are what I cant get enough of.

I really dont know what to say about your poem. 😕

I know I'm terrible at this aren't I 🙁

Pushed Away
I look back now
And shed a tear
Those pushed away
Who came so near?
Who touched my heart?
And touched my soul
I left them out
To take control

I was scared, I was unsure,
Loved them all, but never told.
Scared of fear, And all alone,
Left outside, and in the cold.

I couldn't tell them
Thoughts of mind
Silence screaming
Binding time
I look back now
And cringed that I
Couldn't see the truth from lies

If you knew who I once was
Listen carefully because
If i pushed you far from me
It was for your sake I let it be
And now I want to say sorry

I loved you once
As only time can tell
And love you now
I torment in my hell
For not ringing your bell
And admitting that I fell?
In love with you

Originally posted by ShapedByWords
I really dont know what to say about your poem. 😕

Originally posted by French Tip
I know I'm terrible at this aren't I 🙁

Pushed Away
I look back now
And shed a tear
Those pushed away
Who came so near?
Who touched my heart?
And touched my soul
I left them out
To take control

I was scared, I was unsure,
Loved them all, but never told.
Scared of fear, And all alone,
Left outside, and in the cold.

I couldn't tell them
Thoughts of mind
Silence screaming
Binding time
I look back now
And cringed that I
Couldn't see the truth from lies

If you knew who I once was
Listen carefully because
If i pushed you far from me
It was for your sake I let it be
And now I want to say sorry

I loved you once
As only time can tell
And love you now
I torment in my hell
For not ringing your bell
And admitting that I fell?
In love with you

...and don't belittle youself so quick! let me be the judge of that 😛

it's good, kinda freestyle-ish. soooo...are you, just like everyone else in this forum writing from experience?

pushed away is actually one i wrote for my friend. But the first was about me

Originally posted by French Tip
pushed away is actually one i wrote for my friend. But the first was about me

Originally posted by French Tip
Ok, I'm going to try this out.

To Kill The Pain
All these drugs all this weed
Its all around it helps to feed
to feed the hunger of my pain
I've got nothing to lose, nothing to gain.

They say its bad and to stay away
but I get more ****ed up every day
They say its easy to just say "no"
but for me its the only way to go.

I need the high to kill the pain
I need the feeling to keep me sane
All these drugs are what I love
all these drugs are what I cant get enough of.

You Mean So Much

You mean so much to me
More than I could ever say
And even if you don't believe me
I mean it in every way

Whenever were together
Nothing can go wrong
And I'm starting to think
That with you is where I belong

Whenever we are together
I thank God that I'm alive
With you by my side
I think I can survive

You take away my sadness
You take away my pain
This feeling when I'm with you
Is nothing I can explain

I wish that I could be with you
All throughout each day
Therefore the smile on my face
Would never have to go away

I know you understand
That I'm in a constant fight
And your one main reason
Why my life is worth the fight

You’ve always been there for me
No matter what I’ve gone through
So I just want to take this time to say
Thank you and I love you…

Originally posted by Fëanor
well, if you don't have anything constructive to say...then don't say it!

Originally posted by French Tip
You Mean So Much

You mean so much to me
More than I could ever say
And even if you don't believe me
I mean it in every way

Whenever were together
Nothing can go wrong
And I'm starting to think
That with you is where I belong

Whenever we are together
I thank God that I'm alive
With you by my side
I think I can survive

You take away my sadness
You take away my pain
This feeling when I'm with you
Is nothing I can explain

I wish that I could be with you
All throughout each day
Therefore the smile on my face
Would never have to go away

I know you understand
That I'm in a constant fight
And your one main reason
Why my life is worth the fight

You’ve always been there for me
No matter what I’ve gone through
So I just want to take this time to say
Thank you and I love you…

Thanks Coldfire

Those Men
Sex is a sensation
Caused by temptation
When a man stick his foundation
Into a girl's separation
To increase the population
For the future generation
Do you understand this conversation???
Or do you need a demonstration???
One night of pleasure
Nine months of pain
Two days of labor
A baby to blame
When a guy says "I LOVE YOU"
Do you think that's true???
But when you say "IM PREGNANT"
He says "**** YOU"

ouch. not all guys are like that...but wait its is titled "those men" huh? I am lil slow today.

They call me addiction

They call me addiction
i'm what creeps in your brain
i can take over your life
i can make you go insane
alcohol, meth
heroin or pot
i can change you
into something your not
once your hooked on me
you can't forget
i can slowly kill you
with maybe a cigarette
i change lives everyday
but i really don't care
because once i'm with you
i am always there
i may cause murders
and put people in debt
but it was their choice
from the moment we met
so please remember
that this isn't fiction
i am the disease
and they call me addiction

At least you come with a warning label 😛

good work 🙂

lol Thanks

I hope to read more from you soon

I've had a writers block. I just cant think

Well, it happens to the best of us.

Originally posted by French Tip
Thanks Coldfire

Those Men
Sex is a sensation
Caused by temptation
When a man stick his foundation
Into a girl's separation
To increase the population
For the future generation
Do you understand this conversation???
Or do you need a demonstration???
One night of pleasure
Nine months of pain
Two days of labor
A baby to blame
When a guy says "I LOVE YOU"
Do you think that's true???
But when you say "IM PREGNANT"
He says "**** YOU"

I love this poem, I learned it when I was in middle school... my mum freaked out when I started singing it! But it's weird how I can read it now and not find it offensive, or the slightest bit funny. God, I used to think I was so mature 🙄

Originally posted by Syren
I love this poem, I learned it when I was in middle school... my mum freaked out when I started singing it! But it's weird how I can read it now and not find it offensive, or the slightest bit funny. God, I used to think I was so mature 🙄

Omg! I just heard me (male) room mate saying it and I thought it was so fing funny...and yet so true. I had to post it 😛

It's excellent, I wish I knew the person who came up with it so I could thank them 😂