Originally posted by ladygrim
😐 wow😐
I had perfect meter and rhyme, but my story didnt make much sense, it was about me like going to a restaraunt and like eating some steak and corn bread.....then i meet up with chubaka and yoda..and then we meet some ppl named mick and rick...then i eventually go home 😐
Originally posted by taftsounds interesting 😐
I had [b]perfect meter and rhyme, but my story didnt make much sense, it was about me like going to a restaraunt and like eating some steak and corn bread.....then i meet up with chubaka and yoda..and then we meet some ppl named mick and rick...then i eventually go home 😐 [/B]
Come with me to eat some steak and corn bread
We'll have sauce, potatoes and some soda
We shall gourge until were stupid and dead
And meet up with Chubaka and Yoda
Then we shall hitch a ride with Mick and Rick
But first go to the restroom and the sink
But since we ate so much of that there steak
We are going to make that bathroom stink
On our way back from the place to my house
Mick and Rick went to the store to buy food
As we leave from the store, Rick sees a mouse
Then Mick and Rick jump on top of the hood
To see that it was just a really small house
Now Chubaka, Yoda, and I are home
Now I finish this poorly written poem
Originally posted by taft
Come with me to eat some steak and corn bread
We'll have sauce, potatoes and some soda
We shall gourge until were stupid and dead
And meet up with Chubaka and YodaThen we shall hitch a ride with Mick and Rick
But first go to the restroom and the sink
But since we ate so much of that there steak
We are going to make that bathroom stinkOn our way back from the place to my house
Mick and Rick went to the store to buy food
As we leave from the store, Rick sees a mouse
Then Mick and Rick jump on top of the hood
To see that it was just a really small houseNow Chubaka, Yoda, and I are home
Now I finish this poorly written poem