Originally posted by GoukiLy - gym says:
Care to elaborate further please?
Originally posted by The Grey Fox
Ly - gym says:
Give me a storyline to write about lol
Ami-Jay says:
ok heres the setting
Ami-Jay says:
its a quiet remote village
Ami-Jay says:
around 200 people live there
Ly - gym says:
ok
Ami-Jay says:
theres this guy called James
Ami-Jay says:
he's around 23-27
Ami-Jay says:
and he has psychiatric problems, but because of the morals of the town and stuff, nobody believe him
Ami-Jay says:
and he at the end of a small secluded street, where 4 other people live
Ami-Jay says:
and he starts getting obsessed with this girl who lives opposite to him
Ami-Jay says:
but the thing is, she's only 14
Ami-Jay says:
so it shows he does have problems
Ami-Jay says:
and cause of these problems, he slowly sinks into madness
Ly - gym says:
I need a town name..
Ly - gym says:
ok..
Ami-Jay says:
the towns is called Stavely
Ami-Jay says:
and he spends his days taking pictures of this girl and plastering the room with them
Ami-Jay says:
so next
Ami-Jay says:
now eventually
Ami-Jay says:
he knows he can't have her cause sh'es too young
Ami-Jay says:
and he turns to drugs
Ami-Jay says:
heroin, specifically
Ami-Jay says:
and throughout the novel, he becomes more and more detached and more obsessed with the girl, and his heroin addiction
Ami-Jay says:
so eventually he becomes a complete wreck
Ami-Jay says:
he tries to find a psychologist, but nobody will help him
Ami-Jay says:
he ends up becoming so detached that he goes out of his mind
Ami-Jay says:
and after a heroin overdose, he goes into a state of unconciousness
Ami-Jay says:
3 days later, he wakes up out of it
Ami-Jay says:
and he goes otuside; he feels new, and fresh
Ami-Jay says:
his life begins again, and he wanders into town only to be informed by the girls parents that the girl died in a scooter accident
Ami-Jay says:
he loses his mind
Ami-Jay says:
totally
Ami-Jay says:
he shouts at the whole village how it was their fault
Ami-Jay says:
and that she could have been saved if it weren't for their stupid morals
Ami-Jay says:
he gets angry and attacks someone, and the local police officer tries to stop him
Ami-Jay says:
the man grabs the police officers gun and uses it to kill himself/free himself
Ami-Jay says:
from all the pain that life caused him
Ami-Jay says:
and... thats it
Rename James to Taft and its solid 👆
Originally posted by The Grey FoxInteresting and thank you for elaborating sir.
Ly - gym says:
Give me a storyline to write about lol
Ami-Jay says:
ok heres the setting
Ami-Jay says:
its a quiet remote village
Ami-Jay says:
around 200 people live there
Ly - gym says:
ok
Ami-Jay says:
theres this guy called James
Ami-Jay says:
he's around 23-27
Ami-Jay says:
and he has psychiatric problems, but because of the morals of the town and stuff, nobody believe him
Ami-Jay says:
and he at the end of a small secluded street, where 4 other people live
Ami-Jay says:
and he starts getting obsessed with this girl who lives opposite to him
Ami-Jay says:
but the thing is, she's only 14
Ami-Jay says:
so it shows he does have problems
Ami-Jay says:
and cause of these problems, he slowly sinks into madness
Ly - gym says:
I need a town name..
Ly - gym says:
ok..
Ami-Jay says:
the towns is called Stavely
Ami-Jay says:
and he spends his days taking pictures of this girl and plastering the room with them
Ami-Jay says:
so next
Ami-Jay says:
now eventually
Ami-Jay says:
he knows he can't have her cause sh'es too young
Ami-Jay says:
and he turns to drugs
Ami-Jay says:
heroin, specifically
Ami-Jay says:
and throughout the novel, he becomes more and more detached and more obsessed with the girl, and his heroin addiction
Ami-Jay says:
so eventually he becomes a complete wreck
Ami-Jay says:
he tries to find a psychologist, but nobody will help him
Ami-Jay says:
he ends up becoming so detached that he goes out of his mind
Ami-Jay says:
and after a heroin overdose, he goes into a state of unconciousness
Ami-Jay says:
3 days later, he wakes up out of it
Ami-Jay says:
and he goes otuside; he feels new, and fresh
Ami-Jay says:
his life begins again, and he wanders into town only to be informed by the girls parents that the girl died in a scooter accident
Ami-Jay says:
he loses his mind
Ami-Jay says:
totally
Ami-Jay says:
he shouts at the whole village how it was their fault
Ami-Jay says:
and that she could have been saved if it weren't for their stupid morals
Ami-Jay says:
he gets angry and attacks someone, and the local police officer tries to stop him
Ami-Jay says:
the man grabs the police officers gun and uses it to kill himself/free himself
Ami-Jay says:
from all the pain that life caused him
Ami-Jay says:
and... thats it