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chapter 1
broom fast
Harry awoke with a start at the sound of his alarm clock at 5:00 in the morning. It took him a while to realize why he had set his clock to such an early time until he saw the invitation on the bed side table.
😍 you are invited to the wedding of Mr.and Mrs.Bill Weasley
on July 25th...................
harry jumped out of bed packed his bag and grabed his firebolt and set off for the front door of the dursley house.he had reached the front door went a voice came behind him.
where is master leaving to,it was kreature.kreature said harry i'll be gone for a few days and when i'm gone you are too treat the durlseys as if you would treat me.
the elf smiled wickedly at harry and walked off.harry was hoping that kreature had found the loophole in his command.even thought harry can use magic outside of school he couldn't use his on muggles or the ministry will be after him.harry casted the cloaking charm on himself.
harry stepped off the front stoop and soared throught the air.the fire bolt was wicked fast but he wanted to get to rons house faster so he pulled a box of powder which looked like floo powder.the box was labeld:
broom fast
increases you brooms speed by %50
harry grabbed a hand ful and dashed it at the back of his broom and he was off into the nights sky his surroundinds where a blur he would soon be home ............his real home
to be continued
Originally posted by TheSun
Please don't, that first was awful. No speech marks, you misspelled Kreacher, and you used expressions like 'wicked fast'. Try something a little less complicated next time.
it dont matter if he miss spelld the word, he is just stating what he thinks will happen....... but you need to give it more discription... like sights, smells, what he is thinking.... but good try..
and yes i know i cant spell ether
Harry was awoked the next moring by the smell of mrs.weasleys cooking harry didn't have a good night sleep the night before but how could he resist the smell,somehow he managed to get out of bed.
when he reached the landing he found himself face to face with ginny harrys stomach turned. harry had been at the weasleys house for 3 days and he had been avoiding her.
harry walked pass her without saying a word.they talk about it eventually.............................
to be continued
Originally posted by biggesthpfan
it would be cheating to use broom fast in a qudditch game
Originally posted by biggesthpfan
well who cares... i don't give a **** about wat you say bitches
Originally posted by biggesthpfan
f.uck you all
Oh.
I give you another few days to a week before you're banned. 😐
Happy Hunting. 😊
Terrible, sorry.
I don't give a damn if you cannot spell. I can't either (Dyslexic). But if you are writing a story there should be no spelling or grammatical errors. It's called "proof reading". Where is your puncuation? Makes it hard to read.
1. Keacher lives at hogwarts. I doubt harry would be allowed to/want to have him at the Dursleys
2. The Dursleys house doesn't have a stoop
3. "Stoop" is american.
4. "Wicked Fast" is a terrible phrase to use in a story unless it is speech.
Good points:
It was short.