Harry Potter and the Triwizard Cup

Originally posted by deathgod
post more. the story interesting

i agree, it's very interesting

your a good auther 🙂

Thanks, the next part will be up in about 2 hours.

Originally posted by The Ones
Thanks, the next part will be up in about 2 hours.

😉

Sorry for the long wait. ive almost finished the next bit. it should be up soon.

Oh and ive put in some hints of what will happen later. but there very discreetly put in.

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Lots of Stuff has been cut out of this with good reason. Anyway heres the next bit.

The Hogwarts Express pulled into Hogsmede station, ejecting mass amounts of smoke as it did so. The doors opened and a bunch of children ranging from 11-17 came flocking out of the train. The atmosphere was ecstatic.
“First years over here!” a voice bellowed out of nowhere. Ron and Hermione started to walk to there usual place when another voice called out
“Seventh years, this way”. This caused an up rise of whispers and confusement, but Ron, Hermione and the other seventh years obeyed. A crowd gathered and in the midst stood Professor McGonagall, Head Mistress of Hogwarts.
“Gather round in a circle please” she asked. “Now, its best if you hold hands” she advised. They did as they were told and held hands.
“Professor?”, Hermione asked. “Yes Miss Granger?” Professor McGonagall responded. “What are we doing?” Hermione continued.
“We are going to Archdale Academy, for the Triwizard Tournament” She replied as they disappeared with a loud crack
Harry breathed heavily, his hands bleeding from climbing. He was exhausted. He reached the top of the cliff and clambered over it. He smacked down and took out his bottle of ‘never-run-out’ water and drank it. He heard a large shout exclaiming: “MARMORDA!” a stream of white smoke blew over Harry’s head and into the sky. The white smoke exploded leaving a large green skull with a serpent as a tongue “the dark mark” Harry whispered as his scar hurt more than ever. He looked around there was nobody in sight until he spotted at least 200 large men in robes with skull-like masks heading toward him. He quickly pulled his invisibility cloak and put it on. He waited for them to pass. One of them broke of from the group and walked to where Harry was. He looked down to Harry. The Death Eater jumped back and pulled out his wand. Harry was already holding his “Imperio!” The death eater said. Harry lost all line of thought and control of his body. “Take of the cloak” the Death Eater said. Harry did as he commanded. “Follow me” He said. Harry couldn’t stop himself. He had now joined the Death Eaters on there march

Good. Just remember to begin a new paragraph every time a new character speaks.

thanks. glad you like it

plssss continue plssss continue plssss continue plssss continue

almost finished the next part. i will post within the next 100 hours or so

Originally posted by The Ones
almost finished the next part. i will post within the next 100 hours or so

please continue, its really good

pooooooooooooooooooost............lol

im making modifications to the next part. im trying my hardest to lengthen the story and not make it go down hill

I'll be waiting when it comes. 😄

me too, keep it it its really good stuff

but harry can fight off da impirios cures

but its still verry good

post more plz

i will when ive got the next part the way i want it

Originally posted by The Ones
i will when ive got the next part the way i want it

*gets down on knees* do we have to beg you! this stuff is gold!!