Enlightenment

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Enlightenment

I see
the emptiness in the fullness of illusion;

I feel
the nothingness in nature's embrace,

I taste
the somethingness of selflessness
when you love me as part of you.

I smell
the fragrance of freedom from judgement
when you place me beside you.

I hear
the resonance of giving in your open voice.

I am aware
that all the world need is loving and kindness.

🙂 I likes it, simple and powerful....

Namaste Wonderer,

I like your poem and its strong referance to Buddhist ideology, but being one myself, this would make me a little bias.

Metta,
lil b

Thanks for the kind words. My poetry have become a lot simpler...and if I may, more striking than my previously all too convoluted and complex jumble of mere words(those poems under the name of Philosophicus).

Here's another one:

Inside the void
you will find yourself no self; you will not find yourself.

Through the misty void and beyond its continuum
there is only finding; then realising; then floating bliss.

Having become one with the rhythm
of the void of all being
there will be only being with no form; no dukkha

and we will be a possibility of purest peace

hey man good poetry, you should think about doing some ZEN, iv'e found it very good, i do a standing version in karate.
iv'e broadended my fields by employing still techniques.
i think is that what your talking about in the first, being so yourself that your aware of your own concionsness. sort of live watching yourself through the part of yorself you never knew you had.

boxed OOoo the mind boggle!