harry Potter and Dumbledore's Secret: book 7

Started by Scotty Brockman9 pages

Im a new fan. I love it great story. Post more soon please.

(aww i love new fans!)

i love your story its great!! especially with the new characters keep it going 💃

(thanks alot for the good comments!)

are you going to post again??

(not until monday...i'm at my dads adn don't have my stuff here so...yah sorry)

k just make sure you post on monday 🤣

CANT WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!

u sed monday

ok here's the thing i;m super sick right now and can't hardly type and that sntance took me ten mins literally. so...yah tomorrow for sure.

k just post some more when you can 🧑‍⚕️

(okay here goes..it kind of sucks but meh)
Harry finally came over the shock and stood to his feet. He dressed in his warmest clothes not sure of how they'd get to Li's House. He grabbed his trunk and dragged it down the stairs to the common room where Li and Ashley were huttled in a corner.
“Finally, come on we're late.” She grabbed the other side of Harry's trunk and help out the common room and out into the grounds.
In the center of the white field stood a large carriage being pulled by three black horses.
“We're taking this to your house?” Harry asked, sort of surprised.
“ No Silly, we're taking this to hogsmeade where we can apperate.” Li responded climbing into the carriage. Harry hosted his trunk up and climbed in after.
To Harry's surprise the carriage was completely full, between all the Dumbledore's, harry and the trunks there was absolutely no room for Harry to sit down. He sighed disappointed and sat down on his trunk.
The ride was short and sweet, and the large group climbed out eagerly. They all quickly looked around and one by one disappeared into thin air.
“ Come on Harry take my hand, I'll guide you there.” Li said smiling.
Harry quite embarrassed he needed assistance took her hand and then they were off.
Harry landed rather hard on the lawn in front of an enormous Victorian style house painted purple with yellow frames.

(alittle extra for those who might want to see another form of my writting- faith struck in general fiction section is my latest)

I liked it update soon!

Chapter seven part 3?:

He stood up, slightly brushing off the dirt on his jeans. He stood slightly shock at the sight before him, since he was unsure of what he expected. He watched Li and her family enter the house one by one, and after a brief moment alone on the lawn, he ran up to join Li.
He opened the large oak front door and stepped inside the tinniest room ever, not only was it crowded with six other people, it was only a few feet in diameter. HE noticed everyone slipping off their shoes and placing them in cubbys with their name above the opening.Harry undid his laces and took off his sneakers unsure of where to put them. He gave up and left them in front of an empty cubby, quickly making sure to follow after Li.
They both stepped through a tiny door in a corner of the “shoe room” into an extravagant living room. The couches were slightly over sized, their walls were decked with paintings and art, each drawn by a family member and some what like the Weasley family each family member had a picture on the far wall with a note of their where abouts. He watched Li's switch from travelling to Home.
“ Oi Li, this the boyfriend?” Screamed a guy from the top of the stairs.
“Alex, shut your trap!” She screamed.
Harry quite taken back by the sudden outburst, took a few steps back and tried to hide. A tall, blond, freckled boy came running down the stairs, grabbing Li around the waist and spinning her around, before walking over to Harry and taking his hand against Harry's will.
“:Hi there Harry, I'm Alex Li's Cousin.” Alex said
“Oh you're more then that, you're my best friend.”

WHAT you call that an update lol..

Update soon and check mine out you know what it is

i call it a part of an on going story that is never ending in my mind. Sorry yah it's not very exciting or anything but i'm still sick..and wated to get some stuff out there.

It was okay just not much but at least u updated!

Chapter seven part 4:
Harry sighed to himself and shook Alex's hand before behind pulled off by other people. Finally the tugging and tossing stopped and Li took harry through the house. It was a four storie house, each floor with a bathroom and atleast 3 bedrooms. Harry's room was the smallest room on the top floor right next to Seth's and James' rooms. HE dropped off his trunk and tried to find his way back down stairs. Li soon appeared in a doorway and pulled Harry aside.
“finally time for me.” She said kissing him.
“I know what you mean.” He said smiling, “I'm all familied out.”
Li smiled and giggled slightly. “Well don't worry there isn't anyone left to meet.”

awwwwwwwww i luved it update soon!!!