Harry Potter: Book Seventh

Started by lalalander72 pages

Thanks. The dream part was supposed to be confusing, but maybe it was in a way I hadn't intended. 😛

Dammit... that sentence should say, "...that he knew what Lucius was struggling to say." Thanks for pointing that out! 😄 [/B][/QUOTE]

hey, you're really good. I can write, but I usually can only write when something I really like comes to mind. An essay I can write and all, but I'm not sure about a Harry Potter Book. There's so many critics, so far you're doing really great! They want things to go their [I]own[/I] way. You probably know what I mean and all. 😉 well, thanks for correcting that sentece. It makes things much more clear. thx angain, and buh-bye.

when are u updating? just a general idea, if ur not sure. thx.

OMFG! You are truly a master of the Harry Potter literature. I must worship you!
-adds to watched threads-

any idea when the next part will be up?

Don't ask when he's going to post; Command it.

*Ahem*

Post, Damn You. 😐

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😂 yer wot ever barker says

**agrees with barker**

Too busy watching the fourth movie. 😛

Originally posted by H. S. 6
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While his wailing continued, Snape remained sneering. The Dark Lord would know by morning—if he already did not—that Azkaban was no longer harboring any prisoners; in other words, the Death Eaters that remained there would no longer have a ready excuse not to see him once again. However, Snape had a sick feeling in his stomach that he knew what Severus was struggling to say.

Finally, after Lucius’s sobs had become a whisper compared to what they were, Snape spoke. “I can do nothing for the boy,” he pronounced carefully. “He wouldn’t have done it, and the Dark Lord’s orders were clear. The mission had to be fulfilled, or else the work your son had done during the year would have amounted to nothing. Draco knows where he stands—he knows what could happen; you don’t need to worry about that.”

There was a moment of silence to let this information sink in. Lucius looked up with bulging, fearful eyes, and then, in a whisper barely audible over the rumble of thunder outside, said, “Where is he?”

“Draco is with Him. The Dark Lord has ordered that the boy stay—”

Lucius’s eyes narrowed, his lips turning to a sour frown. “Where is he?!”
“If you would let me finish, I would…” Snape started.

“That isn't who I mean,” he said. And curiously, Lucius’s frown transformed to a smile—an ugly, smug, insane smile. “You know,” he declared, and then broke into a fit of mad laughs. “You KNOW!” he gleefully hollered.

“Oh…” he continued. “will He be mad when he has found out—”

Snape waved his wand, and Lucius was instantly silenced.

*****

It was happening again. Harry could see himself, standing yards away. There was a never-ending blackness around him; the air twisted and swirled around him, convoluting as if in a great wind, although he could feel nothing, smell nothing, hear nothing. All he could see was himself; or rather, an imitation of himself, for he knew—although he couldn’t tell how he knew—that he had a body here. He could move no limbs, nor see any, but he could tell somehow that the Harry Potter that stared at him now with unblinking eyes was not him specifically, but yet a pale replication of his own self.

There was an unexpected flash of brilliant white light, and suddenly, Harry felt he was alive again. His surrounding was no longer of strict darkness; in fact, it was completely opposite. All around him was blinding white, as if he was standing on the horizon of a great star. He could suddenly hear and feel again. He whirled about, wondering where he was.

And then the screams started. They were loud, terrible. They flowed about the atmosphere around him, tormenting him. He began to run. He fled, pumping unseen legs. After seconds or days he didn’t know, but soon Harry could see that reflection of himself, moving ever-farther away, even as he ran as fast he could. Once he knew he wouldn’t reach it, he closed his eyes, opening a non-existent mouth in a silent scream.

His body was on fire. The light was closing in—no, the darkness. It was suffocating. There was nothing around him. Nothing—nobody—in this world to help him. He thought his body would break, and then…

He snapped upright in bed, drenched in a cold sweat. He was gasping for air; his heart pounded in his ribcage, fighting, it seemed, to escape. His body was hot and his head was bursting with pain. His scar seemed to be on fire; it burned so to sear the flesh on his forehead. He cried out a moment, and then held it in agony.

Finally, after a minute of this, his breathing had slowed and the fire in his skull had lessened to an insistent ache. He calmed, and just as he realized he had been dreaming, and he now sat in a bed across the room from a snoring Ron Weasley, there was a loud CRACK. It sounded as if it had come from just outside the bedroom window.

Without hesitating, Harry pulled off the covers and leaped out of the bed, moving to the only window in the upstairs room, and throwing it open. The room had become quite loud by now, as when the strange noise occurred, it set the previously-sleeping form of the owl Pigwidgeon to screeching. Pig was now circling the room, hooting and hollering in its shrill owl’s voice. This caused Hedwig to wake, who looked about the room with a indignant stare.

“Silencio!” muttered Harry, aiming his wand at the small bird fluttering wildly around the room near the ceiling. At once, the screeching stopped; Pig looked confused for a moment, and continued to hover above Harry.

By then, Ron had woken. He was sitting up with groggy eyes. “Wha…?” he mumbled aloud.

“Nothing, Ron. Somebody… I just thought I heard something. Go back to sleep,” answered Harry, but truly his mind was racing. Had someone just Disapparated outside the house? But why now? The sun hadn’t even risen yet; the dark was a deep blue, almost black, and from beyond the veil of space hundreds of stars sparkled and twinkled. Why would somebody leave now?

Harry threw a robe over his pajamas. Ron had already fallen back asleep. Doesn’t matter… thought Harry. Probably somebody from the Order. I’ll check anyway, he reassured himself.

The house was quiet as he made his way down the stairs to the living room. Nobody else seemed to be awake; even Crookshanks, Hermione’s pet cat, sat curled in a ball on the couch, sleeping soundly.

Tiptoeing, Harry made his way to the back door of the house. The yard was what the window in Ron’s bedroom overlooked; if somebody had either Apparated or Disapparated, they would have done it from here.

Cautiously, he opened the back door. The summer night air was warm and damp; crickets chirped in the darkness. Looking about, Harry could notice nothing out of the ordinary.

A quick check around won’t hurt, he reasoned with himself, and stepped out onto the springy grass.

He walked until he turned the corner of the house, letting himself out of the small gate that led to the front yard, where he came upon the row of hedges that sat on the side of the Burrow. There was a scampering of feet, and then something chuckled. “Lumos!” Harry said in a voice that was barely a whisper. The wand ignited, and the light reached the bushes just in time for Harry to recognize a pair of stumpy, horned gnome legs.

He smiled for a moment, remembering when, five years ago, he, Ron, and the twins were sent to de-gnome the Weasley’s garden by grabbing the little guys by the legs and hurling them over the far fence.

He surveyed the yard once again, and finally decided to go back. He turned, passing through the gate and moving towards the back door. Just as Harry was about to re-enter the house, however, his illuminated wand caused something to shimmer on the ground a few yards away. He caught the sparkle of light in the corner of his eye, and whirled around to see what it was.

Something was lying in the grass. He hurried over to it, bending down to see what it was. Using his wand’s light, he picked the small object up. It was a vial of some sort—it seemed ordinary enough, with a small lidded top. The thing that interested Harry, though, was that it was full of something. A potion, was it? He couldn’t tell in the dim light, although he could feel by the shifting weight of it that it had to be some sort of liquid.

Had a member of the Order Disapparated here in the back yard, and, in the process, dropped a vial of potion? Harry knew he couldn’t answer that question now; he couldn’t even tell what sort of potion was in the vial. He decided that, in the morning, he would ask Professor McGonagall if anybody had Disapparated during the night.

He made his way to the back door and into the house. Just as he was leaving the kitchen, the light flicked on.

Whirling about, Harry came face to face with Ginny. “What are you—” he began.

“I heard the owls. And I might ask you the same question.” She was wearing pale pink pajamas; her auburn hair was tied in a loose pony tail, which hung down her back.

“I thought I heard somebody—I thought somebody Disapparated in the backyard,” he admitted. “I found this.” He held up the vial, meaning to hand it to Ginny. With the kitchen light, though, he could get a better look at the contents within for the first time.

He brought his arm back, holding the small container up closer to his eyes. A look of shocked comprehension came over his face, and Ginny gasped. “Harry…” she said. “Is that—”

“I… I think so.” But it was obvious now. The liquid inside was a swirling mass of silver. It twirled and twisted, even as he held the vial still. “It’s—it’s a memory!”

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Short, but.... leave me alone. 😛

Its Wonderful (obviously) but its not long enough...We want more! lol.

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*Shaves* 😐

Excellent writing, yet again.

beautiful. great writing more more more!*clap* *clap* bravo!

great as usual, cant wait to see the memory!! 🤣

Beautiful... I mean, the only tiny thing I could criticise was there were a few "Americanisms" but that's not really a problem!

Thanks to everyone! 😄

Originally posted by Knightfall93
Beautiful... I mean, the only tiny thing I could criticise was there were a few "Americanisms" but that's not really a problem!

Sorry for my American influence. I try to go through, but I have a hard time knowing exactly what sounds "American", or even what doesn't sound British. 😛

I [u] need [/u] more!!!!! sory..just another craving.

Originally posted by H. S. 6

Sorry for my American influence. I try to go through, but I have a hard time knowing exactly what sounds "American", or even what doesn't sound British. 😛

Find a Brit Potter Beta Reader.

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Originally posted by Barker
Find a Brit Potter Beta Reader.

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That's what I should do. 🪩

But I'd need to find someone that I trusted, spoke English, and was English. 😛

You can PM it to me before hand, if you want, HS.