Originally posted by Syren
It's the 5th eyesThe last update was brilliant, well done. Just a point; Harry sounded almost American at one point... careful, old bean. Must retain the Brit-ness 😄
Please, if you have any suggestions, tell me. That's definitely one area I struggle with, and I could use the help. 😮
hey i like your story
i have started my own after i read DarkC's Deathly Hallows and Green Flamed Torch
would you read mine and tell me what you think
i hope it is cool enough for your and dark's eyes, oh and Barker too, but he has already read it i think... 😄