The Luck of the Devil
I don't usually exhibit my stuff on here, but I thought I'd try you all out on this piece I've just finished:
Pointing a loaded shotgun at another man’s head was something that no longer stirred thought or emotion in Johnny Grant.
“P…please…don’t kill me-” stuttered the plate of human jelly at his feet. Johnny narrowed his eyes slightly, but his expression remained stoical. His victim looked barely old enough to shave more than once a week, yet the opulent apartment in which they stood, was seemingly his.
He knew his type all too well- born into money, a wealthy father paying him through college, feeding him with enough funds to reside in an ostentatious bachelor-pad such as this; and more than likely receiving a fat, ill-deserved student grant too; most of which would feed a cocaine habit, or buy the occasional cheap whore.
He glared derisively; the boy was now omitting a pathetic mewing sound, as though battling to stifle a sob. The superficial creature at his feet was every bit the kind of victim he could happily steal from, without so much as a speck of guilt to scrub from his conscience in the aftermath.
Johnny lowered his weapon, and tucked it safely into his leather jacket. “Give the blubbering a rest will ya! I’m not gonna kill yer,” he growled. Incidentally, he had never taken a human life; the gun he just stowed safely in his jacket had never even been fired- it was merely a prop he used when the need arose.
I must be getting sloppy; he had thought when the boy had walked in and caught him in the act. Ordinarily, he possessed the sleek, surreptitious grace of a passing shadow during routine burglaries; but this time, things had almost gone seriously awry.
Johnny took a menacing step forward, knowing full well how intimidating he could be when his victims allowed him the upper hand. He gripped the boy beneath the chin, and pried him from the floor. “I’m a thief, not a murderer…but breathe a word of this to the police…” He didn’t finish his sentence, but then, he didn’t have to- the look of stark terror in the boy’s watery eyes, and his unintelligible mutterings told Johnny that he fully understood the insinuation. He threw the boy to the plush carpet, and resumed the nights work.
As he began his escape down the darkened stairwell, the shadowy sleekness that had abandoned him earlier, appeared to have returned. He felt at one with the shadows, draped in them as though they were a cloak. His sneakers barely made a sound upon the linoleum flooring, and his senses felt impeccably attuned.
The jewel in the crown of this job was undoubtedly the huge state-of-the-art plasma screen television, covered with a black bin-liner and tucked under his arm; he clung to the trophy as though it were an original copy of the Mona-Lisa.
As he stepped out onto the low-lit backstreet, a moderate wind swept through his long, unkempt hair. The sound of distant traffic whooshed like a flowing river, and luminous light and thumping music spilled from bars and nightclubs.
His head shot from one direction to another, and only when he had ascertained his solitude did he release a deep exhalation. That familiar feeling of satisfaction, which comes hand in hand with a job well done, rose within him as he crept through the shadows. His pace gradually increased, until his footsteps were clearly audible against the concrete…but he had thrown caution to the wind prematurely.
The thief felt his bowels freeze, and his skin erupt with goose-pricks when he heard the high pitched scream of an approaching police siren. Adrenaline filled him like an unhealthy dosage of an invigorating drug and he broke into a sprint.
The thought that the approaching police vehicle was merely passing by, on its way to the scene of an entirely different crime did occur to him, but he knew he could not afford to take any chances; especially when the perfect place to hide out lay right under his nose- The Swan and Attic Pub.