potter poem

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Harry potter poetry

Harry potter grew up a young lad
His life with the Dursleys was very sad
When Hagrid told him he was a wizard
His mind was raging like a blizzard

He then boarded the Hogwarts express
Thinking about the Dursleys less n less
He met a red haired boy called Ron
They were best mates from then on

In boats they sailed across the lake
Ahead of them stood a castle
It was Hogwarts no mistake

Then came a girl called Hermione (with very bushy hair)
She was very clever
It just didn’t seem fair
They befriended her however

There was a horrible slytherin, Draco
Who Harry did not like
There was something about Draco, he did not know
So he told him to take a hike

Many more adventures were on there way
Each getting better by the day
They had discovered a three headed dog (fluffy)
I did not think he was lovely

They then discovered it was guarding a trap door
And so they went to explore
It was guarding the philosopher’s stone
The reason why was unknown

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nice poem!really 🙂

so down they went through the trap door
they had never done any thing like this before
the dog was enchanted to fall asleep
down they crept without a peep

they fell into some devil,s snare
Hermione shouted"you have to relax"
as the snare was tightening round their backs
finally they were free, even more prepared

then came the giant chess board
looks like ere gonna hvto play Ron roared
the game was over
ron had hurt his shoulder

so on harry went to do it alone
thru the next door he could hear a moan

there in the middle stood a man
were a very big mirror stood in front

then came a pain in his scar
that only ment one thing
the dark lord wasn't very far

but how could it be that the person
in front of him wasn't what he had expected indeed

wow mint

Great!! The ryming was good, the whole thing was good. It could be improved, but there are no real areas.

cheers m8