Originally posted by Faroth
Victor jumped at Phynisis, and slashed at him with his Force-focused stone sword. Then he started a backflip, but Phynisis blocked the saber and kicked him back into a tree.
((OOC: Ok Faroth, you are a pretty good roleplayer, all I have to say is:
"but Phynisis blocked the saber and kicked him back into a tree."
That can be counted as roleplaying for another character. You have not a clue what I wanted Phynisis to do, so please stick to moving for Victor 😛 ))
Originally posted by Pal_Jetsam06
Phynisis had just struck a jedi against a tree and he was advancing on Pal. Pal kept his focus then he sprang at Phynisis spinnig in the air like a drill. Phynisis parried Pal's attack but Pal quickly recovered with a backflip and slash at Phynisis's back Phynisis brought back his saber to meet Pal's blow they clashed sabers then began a series of jabs and combos at eachother until Pal shot a forcefireball and jumped back to the safety of the other jedi.
((OOC: Ok your turn Mister "This is but a small example of my crafty wirting. -smirk- I hope it satisfies you. 😬
You spelt Writing wrong 😛
Ok Lets see what I can do with this one, I am going to make corrections and comment on it ok?
Originally posted by Pal_Jetsam06
Phynisis had just struck a jedi against a tree and he was advancing on Pal.What if I don't want to advance on you? You are only one of hundreds of Jedi in the room.
Pal kept his focus then he sprang at Phynisis spinnig in the air like a drill. Phynisis parried Pal's attack
Nice grammer, but we still have the same problem with roleplaying for another character 😬
but Pal quickly recovered with a backflip and slash at Phynisis's back Phynisis brought back his saber to meet Pal's blow they clashed sabers then began a series of jabs and combos at eachother until Pal shot a forcefireball and jumped back to the safety of the other jedi.
That entire sequence is based on roleplaying for another character. Read the rules at the beginning of the roleplay please.
((OOC: Read the rules, and don't roleplay for fellow characters please. John. .Aliies, am I being to harsh 😬 ))
Willan had only just realised it was morning. He had been chasing the figure in black all night and was blinking away sleep and his usually boyish face was dirty and wet. He hoped beyond hope someone had discovered the fact that Cody, the small Jedi youngling, was missing and that someone would soon be out here helping him save Cody and stop Project Z before it was too late and there were no Jedi at all. Willan desperately sent out a force message in hopes one of the jedi would here it
Check Youngling Cody's room and please help !
((i'm so sorry for not responding for a long time. i've been busy with a lot of things, and i have no clue how my character should meet up with the rest of the Dark Jedi))
Hours passed when Jenn was finally able to leave from her Master's presence. She was now going to prove her worth by assassinating one of her Master's long time enemy. She boarded the ship, telling the pilot to take off immediately. A hood covered her face, so the pilot never saw what she looked like. Underneath her robes she had both her lightsabers, and she kept her hands close in fear of something going wrong.
Sitting down for too long never really interested Jenn too much. She soon began pacing back and forth, making the other passengers nervous. Never taking her hood off also made them more scared of her. She seldomly spoke, which wasn't too surprising, since she was no longer her old self. Anger boiled up in her, as she thought of the days of long ago. She had thought that her memories were long gone, but truth be told, they were still there.
"Jedi Master, we have arrived at Coruscant." said the pilot over the intercom. "Problem is we cannot land yet."
She angrily pushed the button that allowed her to speak with the pilot.
"Make no mistake Captain," she said in a low dangerous voice. "I am no Jedi Master. I am an Apprentice to the Sith."
Jenn did not care if the ship couldn't land or not. She at last threw her robes off, revealing her long auburn hair, that she had braided. Wearing black clothes always suited her, but in this case, they were more simple, clothing that normal people would wear. Pushing a button had allowed her to open the hatch to the ship. Yells of panic were heard over everything else.
"If anyone dares touch my robes, they shall learn what it means to deal with someone who has the dark side of the Force. Do I make myself clear?"
Waiting for no answer, she jumped off the ship, not caring how high they were off from the ground. Using the Force, she was able to land safely on the ground. Guards that guarded the landing docks came running over to where she landed.
The guards that came running over noticed that she weilded two lightsabers, which they assumed that she was a Jedi Master. One of them came up, bowing to her.
"Master Jedi," he started quickly. "The Council has requested all Jedi Masters to report for an urgent meeting."
With quick reflexes, and before any of the guards could train their guns on her, she had her two lightsabers out. Igniting them, she revealed that she was no Jedi Master, but a Dark Jedi. She first thrusted her lightsaber into the guard's chest, making him fall to the ground.
Shooting at Jenn, they were trying to stop her from going any further. She was slowly running out of options. She was on the top level of Coruscant, which meant that the only real way of escaping would be to jump from the top level, hoping that she had enough strength to allow her to land safely.
Not having a lot of time to debate, she slowly backed to the edge of the docking area. She held her two lightsabers, (still ignited) and crossed them over her breast. She then leaned backwards, and fell. Bullets were flying her way, almost hitting their mark. Only one was able to graze her leg, but she kept the temptation to scream out in pain.
Pal stood with the other Jedi, light saber at the ready. Seeing that the Sith were not attacking he closed his eyes and concentrated all his energy. The world around him was a grey mist spinnig around him. It spun faster and faster and faster until Pal's strength in the force seemed to almost burst. Pal opened his eyes and leaped at Phynisis.
"PAL! SOREN" Ala'ii yelled, "Hold your positions; Elli, take his left flank...
"John'Bak'Or on his right and Young Victor with me on his fore, form up stand to Soresu... no Ataru!" her words were as the vicious bark of a military-disciplined commander.
She concentrated for a moment... letting everything go into her thoughts and discarding them through the force; without a gesture or even a single movement save for the slight sigh if her breathing, the ground rumbled violently.
The soft turf underfoot gave way and cracked gapingly as the large trees in the area issued a gut-wrenching crack and the sound of a man's neck being snapped as they were barbarically torn from their firm grip on the ground, their deep roots whipping and flailing about as they either came loose under tension or simply snapped.
five trees in the immediate vicinity broke in two as the entire foliage around them began to swirl over their heads, forming a spout like a natural storm; rocks and small boulders too joined the fray as Ala'ii just stood their with her eyes closed and her face in a calm and peaceful expression...
Then she opened her eyes...
Her completely blue eyes were literally aflame, cracking energy tore from out her pupils and ignited the air around them in a spectacular large blue firebal her eyes had now become.
her momentary-placid expression suddenly replaced with a twisted snarl that looked quite disfiguring for one such as her.
The entire array of rubble, dirt and organic matter swirled around and formed up behind her as she slowly raised her hand; her fist was clenched and leveled at Phynisis...
with a startling roar that was amplified in her throat unwillingly by the force, she flew out her fingers and her airborne weapory catapulted towards the Sith with break-neck speed, missing all of her companions and charging directly at her adversary.
In the split moments that followed, she unsheathed her freezing Echani-Vibrosword and sprinted at Phynisis, yelling to her fellow combatants, "WITH ME, CHARGE!" her sword was leveled with it's tip directed at his heart and time itself seemed to slow in the wake of her long strides...
Pal charged along side Ala'ii, twirling his saber over his head. His hood had fallen off, letting his golden hair wave in his face reflecting his blue saber. Pal's energy was fully primed and he felt as angry as ever, as if it would satisfy his suffering if he killed these Sith. Then time stopped for him and he remembered back so long ago...
"Pal, come." said Samyaza, Pal's master.
Pal came qucikly and looked to where she was pointing - a wrecked speeder lay in the sand.
"Looks like a Sith speeder." said Pal.
"Yes it certainly does," said Samyaza, looking up at Pal. Her features were so elegant, so perfect. Pal blushed thinking of such things. Samyaza only smiled at Pal and looked back to the wreckage. "Hmm," she stroked her chin then looked around. "He must be here somewhere..."
Suddenly a figure jumped out of nowhere, but before he could do anything Samyaza had ignited her light saber and chopped off the man's hands. He fell to his knees, a look of pure innocents on his face. When Samyaza lifted her light saber to strike the man's face was a mask of horror. It made Pal want to cry.
"No." Pal said, staring at Samyaza.
"Pal you don't understand," Samyaza said sharply.
"He must live."
Samyaza ignored him and lifted her saber. Pal could not bear to see the man die. He lost all saneness and slashed Samyaza across the heart, just as she was about to kill the man.
She looked at Pal, as if asking why.
Then she fell. Dead.
Pal's senses rushed back and he fell to his knees weeping and holding her in his arms. When he finally looked up the man was gone.
Suddenly Pal was back on the battlefield. Ala'ii was yelling next to him and Phynisis was infront of him.
john leaped to phynisis' right side, spinning his sabers at an extremely fast rate. 8 slashes a second.....10 slashes.....now 12 slashes. he continued to advance.
suddenly one of his sabers came loose. it fell from his left hand. he switched his tail saber to his empty hand and continued his assult on phynisis. locdked locked sabers with the sith breifly, then kicked his legs from under hi mwith his tail. he bakfliped on to his free hand and recovered. 'this guy is fast' the lizard thought.
((okay thanks. i have an idea to get me there, so in a few post i'll be on the uncharted moon, hopefully. oh, and just to let everyone know, i'm leaving for the weekend, and i won't have computer access. i'll be back on sunday.))
Falling still from the top level, Jenn used the force to guide herself once more into landing safely. The level she was on was near the very bottom. No one could be seen at all, which she thought wasn't that strange. She had to get to the top, as quick as possible, but knew that was going to be hard to do. Maybe she could find an abandoned transport that led to the top.
Then she saw something move to her left, which had gotten her attention. Lightsabers still ignited in hand, she walked cautiously towards the noise. With a quick motion she swiped the air, and then something had emitted a loud piercing scream. She had killed a droid which probably was looking for its Master.
Relaxing a little, she continued to look for a transport to the upper level. Night was slowly overpowering the day, which meant that she didn't have much time left before the gangsters came. She wasn't worried about them, she just didn't want to have to waste time in killing them.
Within a few minutes, she found a transport that semi worked, and she was able to get it to bring her to the level she needed to be on. Maybe going to the Jedi Temple wasn't such a bad idea. She could show her Master and the other Dark Jedi that she was loyal to the Sith, and could do whatever was asked of her.
((more later. i'm not suppose to be on right now. hehehe))
john continued the attack on phynisis, moving as one with the team. the sith was fast, but he was weakening under the forces of 8 ((is that, 8??)) jedi. well, 7 jedi and 1 unknown ally. john decided to reserve judgement on ala'ii, for the moment.
he continued his attack. (who is gonna kill him?? coz this fight has gone a fair while now. ill give phynisis till wind comes bak then we might vote on whos killing him)