Shadows in the Sun

Brittany was being carried by Jack and as the air started to get colder, she no longer felt the pain of her ankle.

- "Jack, I think I can walk now, besides I don't want you to get tired because of me" - Brittany said.

"Alr..." Jack stopped as he came out of the tunnel and gazed upon a city made up of crystal.

Brittany looked at the city with Jack. She couldn't believe her eyes.

- "Have you seen anything like this? It's beautiful isn't it?" - Brittany asked Jack.

Jack just nodded and he sat Brittany down to her feet. It was as though something was calling him but he ran with all his speed down the path to the city.

Originally posted by Dyingstar29
(( just make one )) yes i guess * walks quietly behind him*

Balkan headed down the path and entered the city of crystal.

Brittany got up as she saw Jack run into the city.

- "Jack wait!" - Brittany said running behind him trying to catch up to him.

Jack entered the city and looked around. High above the city was a huge orb of blue energy just floating there. A man in a red cloak stopped Jack.
"Who dares enter this sacred city?"
"I am Jack O'Neil," Jack replied.

Originally posted by MysticMyths
(Someone i know from gaiaonline.com..I think Dyingstar is Judas...)

Brittany stops behind Jack looking at the man in red cloak.

- "And I'm Brittany Moore" - Brittany said.

~recap, please.~

(You just can't read 5 posts?)

"Thy shall not enter the forbidden city," the man responded.

...................what !?!?!?! you must be kidding were ..........

Balkan stopped and looked at Alex, "behold the legendary city that was said to not exist, Atlantis."

..........holy crap ............

"For thousands of years Atlantis has been hidden from all that sought it but now I have finally discovered the legendary city," Balkan said.

"Why can't we enter the city?" Jack asked.
"Because you are not holy. You will corrupt are sacred city," the man in the red cloak replied.

o and i sapose you are !?!!? i worship god very much thank you * walks past him*

(You do know you are not with Jack?)

Originally posted by Monthor
(You do know you are not with Jack?)

"For thousands of years Atlantis has been hidden from all that sought it but now I have finally discovered the legendary city," Balkan said.
(Balkan isn't in the city yet)