Originally posted by silent dreams
no you think? glarecamille, sword is not spelled sored. I would like to use proper word instead of replace ment words. plez and thanx and any other words like that is fine when your talking to another person, not character. and try not to do
camile:
camile:
just write it like everyone else.
Camile was wandering around the forrest. She unfortunatly got lost while trying to reach the La Naan castle. "Where am I?" she said to herself.
^ that would be fine. or if you want to do it like me,
Duzzie was sucking on a tomatoe, when he heard Ishtar say something.
* I can't hear whats she's saying* he thought.
I left a space between my characters thoughts.
and....use quotations(""😉when character is thinking, periods(.), commas(,), question marks(?), exclamation marks (!)
and if you want, Leo, you can put, example:
Kage walked down a dark alley. [He saw] instead of Kage saw in each new sentance. I'm not telling you too, it's a suggestion.
no, it's just a joke I have with my firends. If you've read Demon Diary you'd understand.
Demon Diary 2~
Dream sequence:
Raenef- " Cool!! A giant tomato!"
Eclipse- "Something like that can be taken care of with one eye."
Raenef- "NO! Mr. Tomato..."
~tomato explodes~
Raenef(wakes up)- "TOMATO!!"
Eclipse- "Master?"
Raenef (crying)- "The...tomato...."
Eclipse- "....."
Raenef- "Poor tomato..."