Underworld RPG story: House of the Tsar

One thing though, the last chapter was meant to be called ADEPTA TRATORIS but as this revealed prematurely that there is a traitor...
so i canned it dots

bravo, bravo, well done Aliies well done.

I must concur. Excellent! I really enjoyed reading it.

But... "Psyke"? 😛

What can I say, he acts serious when needed but he's a playfull Vampire whos been alive long enough to realize that you can't be serious the whole time... 😉

By the way you may have noticed that I've left the possibility open for a sequel... if others think thats a good idea where she hunts for her sister; already thought of the first few pages...

cool man, a sequel would be cool. 👆

Something said... So shall it be done!

I'll get to work on it, do you reckon I could make a second thread so I can tally the popularity of either?

i think it would be wise to make another thread, some people might not pick-up on the sequel. so start as the sequel.

Good, i just started on the second page as i type it in Word first...
Should be able to post it soon! 🙂

kool, i'll be lookin for it.

It is done, I may not post as fast as i did with the last one until i get some more feed back on the idea and the first story...

Need more feedback peoples, please pile

Hey!

I'm reading and waiting for the next one. There's very little I can say except well done on the first part! The sequel sounds good, and it is very well set up.

EDIT - Just saw the sequel - about to read it.

BTW, these have almost nothing in common to the movies;

My characters, (Except for the mentioning of Micahel Corvin and Vickor in the prologue) my settings and all of my ideas 🙂

This is like an alternate ending type of thing, i heven't even seen Underworld; Evolution yet...
Though i hope to soon 😮

So, I'm looking to resume/restart the sequel, any questions/comments before I do?

I had planned the storyline to unravel to a third, the idea still burns within me skull...