2 Dark Poems by Turmy

Number One:

I bang on your door,

I hope your awake,

My hand twists the doorknob,

My mind screams "MISTAKE!!",

My eyes fail to close,

My lungs won't release

A gasp as the world falters,

And begins to cease.

An eternity of shrieks, sighs and a scream,

As I try to condemn this as a bad dream.

Number Two:

Forever, darkness will be my abode,

Forever, my soul will slowly erode,

My grief, my pain, my hurt, my toil

It is what I am, it is Eternal Turmoil

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😱 Awesome stuff! I'd love to read more.

Thank you 🙂

Good stuff. I, too, would like to read more 😊

🙂 There should be one hiding in my desk somewhere hehe

Number Three - Demonica

Hell is where she will always reside,

With darkness she is forever allied,

A stroke of blood painted on each nail,

Her soul non-existent, her skin deathly pale,

On their knees her minions quake,

Quivering, trembling, their fear awake.

Her alliances intimidated,

Her home a crypt,

Her beverages ghastly,

And slowly sipped.

The light a repellant,

The shadows a host,

Not possibly human, improbably ghost.

By night she lies,

Waiting for a

Victim for Demonica

And heres a sig I made for it

wow, cool... love the rhyming

Thank you 🙂

nice stuff dude, keep it up.

😄

very nice

Originally posted by Eternal Turmoil
[B]Number Three - Demonica

Hell is where she will always reside,

With darkness she is forever allied,

A stroke of blood painted on each nail,

Her soul non-existent, her skin deathly pale,

On their knees her minions quake,

Quivering, trembling, their fear awake.

Her alliances intimidated,

Her home a crypt,

Her beverages ghastly,

And slowly sipped.

The light a repellant,

The shadows a host,

Not possibly human, improbably ghost.

By night she lies,

Waiting for a

Victim for Demonica

And heres a sig I made for it [/B]

wow - you write so powerfully................ 😑 very strong in word and meaning....

Thx guys! I thought this thread was forgotten lol 😛

Number Four -

I glance around

And hope nobody can see

The cruel fate

You have bestowed on me.

The sleepless nights

And breathless sighs

The eternal lows

And short-lived highs.

I'd love to hear what you think 🙂

Number 5 -

I want to say I love you,
I want to say I care,
But the emotions I am feeling,
Are too hard to bear.

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very nice

Originally posted by Eternal Turmoil
[B]Number Four -

I glance around

And hope nobody can see

The cruel fate

You have bestowed on me.

The sleepless nights

And breathless sighs

The eternal lows

And short-lived highs.

I'd love to hear what you think 🙂 [/B]

Thanks 😄

Originally posted by Eternal Turmoil
Thanks 😄