Batman Esculation

What does everyone else think of this Batman and Joker scene.

I say good but coild be greatly improved

I wanted to make the Joker more sinister in this and also I got the influence for writing this scene after reading Arkham Asylum.

Cool... why's he in Arkham when they first meet? And I hope you have ideas for loads of cameos like...
Seeing Jervis Tetch on trial for the murder of 6 girls, all called Alice!
Harvey, Gilda, Jim, barb and Jimmy Jr at a restaurant and Jim Jr gets fascinated by kiddy entertainment... provided by Arnold Wesker and puppet!
Advertisements for Haley's Circus
A sign for the "Pamela Isley W ildlife Fund" or something...
Think about these ideas...
That sad ass Batman Returns was really taking the piss out of BB for the Zsasz cameo. I say why not, it's not doing any harm and fan boys love 'em!

I am having halfway through the story Harvey playing with a coin which is scratched on one side and then it goes into a flashback with his abusing father and that same coin in the flashback. And I might have a cameo of Harley at the end of the story where she is might be treating the Joker in Arkham Asylum.

Explain how it got scaratched or even better, make it just double sided then it gets damaged on 1 side when the acid hits Harv!

I think I might show the coin somehow getting scaratched in the flashback with Harvey`s abusing father.

Fair deal

I might put in a cameo of Dr Thomas Elliot in the story. Basicully he gets killed by the Joker somepoint in the story and this makes Batman hate the Joker even more. But somehow he survives and in a later point I might write of him becoming Hush and learning that Batman is Bruce Wayne.

Interesting... but I REALLY doubt Hush would be used by Chris Nolan and Goyer, he's hardly a Joker or a Dent or a Selina...

I don`t really think I want to put a Poison Ivy cameo in the story. But I might put a Edward Nigma/Riddler cameo in the story.

How so? He could work for Wayne Enterprises, maybe Wayne's walking with Lucius through the building and they walk past an office with a guy sitting with a pencil and a newspaper and Fox says:
"How's that crossword coming, Eddie?" And maybe makes a comment about how Nigma's always doing puzzles and how it's ironic because of his name: Edward Nigma, E.Nigma!

I most definitely will give Scarecrow a cameo in the story. Either he will get interrogated by Batman about the Joker or might reveal himself at the end in playing a part in the Joker and mob bosses plot to terrorise Gotham.

Originally posted by Knightfall93
How so? He could work for Wayne Enterprises, maybe Wayne's walking with Lucius through the building and they walk past an office with a guy sitting with a pencil and a newspaper and Fox says:
"How's that crossword coming, Eddie?" And maybe makes a comment about how Nigma's always doing puzzles and how it's ironic because of his name: Edward Nigma, E.Nigma!

Those are really good ideas about the possible cameos for Edward Nigma/The Riddler.

Thanks, I might send in a BB idea later...

I will either give the three mob bosses a small role in the story or a large role because they are the other threat to Batman in BB3.

More of Batman Escalation is coming soon I think I might post either the first scene with Harvey Dent or Bruce Wayne`s first meeting Selina Kyle at the Opera or at his house party. I have not decided yet where Bruce and Selina first meet.

Would the Catwoman be:
By night he chases the thief but is also attracted to each other but while day, they are a couple or something else entirely?

Originally posted by Knightfall93
Would the Catwoman be:
By night he chases the thief but is also attracted to each other but while day, they are a couple or something else entirely?

Exactily right. Somehow at the end she is going to find out that Batman is Bruce Wayne.

Maybe she is looting the manor at the end and notices something funny about the grandfather clock?