Batman Esculation

Started by Scarecrow75654 pages
Originally posted by Doc Potato
OK

He will know soon enough. 😈

🙂 Good good... I need to recruit tomorrow for Spectre: Spirit of Vengeance, a radio script I am writing even now...

Originally posted by Doc Potato
🙂 Good good... I need to recruit tomorrow for Spectre: Spirit of Vengeance, a radio script I am writing even now...

Cool post it here when you feel that it is ready. I hope your interview goes fine tomorrow. And remember the advice I posted on the Syndicate thread.

Hey, SC! The interview was fine... I don't think the script is really ready as all it is is a draft... I may well post it later on. However, I was too busy today to recruit...

Originally posted by Doc Potato
Hey, SC! The interview was fine... I don't think the script is really ready as all it is is a draft... I may well post it later on. However, I was too busy today to recruit...

Okay. 🙂

After the show Bruce notices a woman getting raped.

Rapist: Hay Lady, I like what your wearing, how about a little one on one action.
Selina Kyle: I am not interested bozo, why don’t you go get a life instead of bothering people.
Rapist: Nobody ever talks to me like that.

Suddenly he takes a hand gun from his pocket and grabs Selina. He points the gun at her head. Then Bruce Wayne approaches from behind the rapist.

Bruce Wayne: I suggest you leave that woman alone.
Rapist: What are you are going to do if I don’t then?
Bruce Wayne: This….

Suddenly he kicks the rapist in the back, with the impact of the kick the gun falls out of his hand. Bruce picks it up and points it at the rapist.

Bruce Wayne: Now get out of here or by God I would not afraid to shoot you here right now.

The mugger goes off into the cold night after that.

Selina Kyle: Thank you for saving me.
Bruce Wayne: It was nothing Miss.
Selina Kyle: So what is the name of my knight in shining armour?
Bruce Wayne: Bruce Wayne, and who might I have the pleasure of saving.
Selina Kyle: Selina Kyle; Mr Wayne you are quite different from what I hear of you in the papers.
Bruce Wayne: Call me Bruce; yes the papers do have quite an image of me.
Selina Kyle: Call me Selina; is it true you were engaged to a Hollywood actress and were dating two other women at the same time.
Bruce Wayne: No that’s the tabloids talking; they always link me in with Hollywood for some reason.
Selina Kyle: Well what do I owe you for saving my life Bruce?
Bruce Wayne: Well I would very much like to take you out for dinner one evening.
Selina Kyle: Are you asking me out Bruce?
Bruce Wayne: Yes it would appear so.
Selina Kyle: How does Tuesday sound to you, about 8 no 9pm?
Bruce Wayne: Its sounds fine Selina, so it’s a date.
Selina Kyle: So it is. Oh would you look at the time, I have to go home a feed my Cat.
Bruce Wayne: Your cat?
Selina Kyle: She eats so much; well it was nice meeting you Bruce.

What do you think of this scene? Doc. 😉

Very much edited from an earlier scene, bt I much prefer this versioN!

Originally posted by Doc Potato
Very much edited from an earlier scene, bt I much prefer this versioN!

Thanks.🙂 I am thinking of editing the begining of that scene again. I am never happy with any of my scenes, I am always editing them.

🙂 I know how you feel

One scene I have always gone back and forth in terms of editing is the Selina/Holly apartment scene.

I think I remember that... 🙂

Originally posted by Scarecrow756
One scene I have always gone back and forth in terms of editing is the Selina/Holly apartment scene.

I that I have edited that scene at least four different times.

OK. my friends didnt seem interested in doing a Spectre thing as they don't know anything about him. HOWEVER, a Daredevil fan film suggestion went down well and I will post the 1st scene somewhere soon (probably in the comic book movies forum and the fan fic forum)!

Originally posted by Doc Potato
OK. my friends didnt seem interested in doing a Spectre thing as they don't know anything about him. HOWEVER, a Daredevil fan film suggestion went down well and I will post the 1st scene somewhere soon (probably in the comic book movies forum and the fan fic forum)!
Cool, l cannot wait to read it.

Okay people the rough cut of chapters 2 + 3 are now up - does it sound distorted on everyoneelse's computer - please pm any comments to scarcorw 756

Here is my newest Batman Escalation Scene.

Selina gives Bruce pact on the cheek and then goes of into the night. Suddenly Harvey Dent comes towards Bruce.

Harvey Dent: How do you do it Bruce?
Bruce Wayne: Do what Harvey.
Harvey Dent: You seem to be able to ask a woman out with absolute ease.
Bruce Wayne: Well Harvey to tell you the truth it comes with experience.
Harvey Dent: Well you sure know how to pick them. I mean that girl you just saved, she is stunning.
Bruce Wayne: She is quite the heart beater.
Harvey Dent: Also where did you learn to fight like that, that rapist was twice your size?
Bruce Wayne: Well Harvey I did pick it up from here and there.
Harvey Dent: Which women do you prefer I always have loved Asians?
Bruce Wayne: I have always had a soft spot for blondes.
Harvey Dent: Blondes, in my experience all the blondes I have dated are either really stuck up or just generally ***** about their ex boyfriends.
Bruce Wayne: I have never gotten that.
Harvey Dent: Let me tell you one thing that your blonds don’t have, inner beauty.
Bruce Wayne: Well as William Shakespeare said and I quote “Beauty ness is in the eye of the beholder.”
Harvey Dent: I have never been an admirer of Shakespeare work. I can’t believe in Princeton they actually ran a whole class on his work.
Bruce Wayne: Well I have been a casual reader of his work.
Harvey Dent: You were more the Chemistry person I thought Bruce.
Bruce Wayne: Yes I was. The professors offered me a chance to lecture a few classes before I dropped out.
Harvey Dent: I think that you could have become a lot more then what you are now.
Bruce Wayne: Well to tell you the truth I never wanted to follow in my father footsteps and become a surgeon or even the owner of Wayne Industries. I always wanted to go into politics.
Harvey Dent: Well we do need a new mayor; he is not doing anything about the crime in this city. I mean everyday more and more teenage boys are turning towards crime. Also more and more teenage girls are selling their bodies for money. I mean what has happened to Gotham; it used to be a city of elegance and opportunity. Now look at what it has become, a city of crime where the good do nothing and the corrupt rule.
Bruce Wayne: It’s good we have the Batman then.
Harvey Dent: You know what Bruce, normally I am against vigilantes but the Batman he has been a huge help for this city.
Bruce Wayne: He is indeed. Did you enjoy the show opera show Harvey?
Harvey Dent: Opera has never been one of my passions but I like to think of myself as a casual observer of it. The show was okay, I did not get the ending of it though.
Bruce Wayne: Me neither, the lovers just split up with each other even though they loved each other.
Harvey Dent: Well Bruce if you look at it from the character’s point of view (Boris) then you can see what he did felt was necessary. He felt that his duty was far more important then his love for Serena. I mean he had a huge responsibly.
Bruce Wayne: Plus it seemed that he would always be destined to be alone because of his stubbornness.
Harvey Dent: That’s you got it.
Bruce Wayne: My parents were huge opera lover, every year on their anniversary they would come and watch “The Phantom of the Opera.” By the way Harvey have you seen Leslie recently?
Harvey Dent: Yes I have, you should really go and see her. She is really lonely; her husband Bob passed away a couple of weeks ago. She will be very happy to see you.
Bruce Wayne: I have not seen her since I left Princeton.
Harvey Dent: She is still running the hospital near crime alley.
Bruce Wayne: I thought that closed down years ago.
Harvey Dent: No it’s still going. Would you look at the time, I have to go, well see you soon Bruce.
Bruce Wayne: See you soon.

The next scene I am planning to write for Batman Escalation is a scene where Bruce Wayne has a dream and his father talks to him about the choice he must make between being Batman and living happily after with Selina Kyle.

so wazzup?

Hey whats up I have not been here for a while and Doc`s busy with planning a wedding and I have not been really writing any new scenes recently. I sent you some of Batman Escalation Prayerrun, I send you some more soon.

*Doc sneaks past, gives Scarecrow a wedgie and runs out*