Interesting. Highly interesting. Curious though why you've decided to make it a twin brother. A bigger twist would have been saying that it was someone who drank a polyjuice potion, saying that he tried to sway him out of it but he wouldn't listen. Or even since Dumbledore's the strongest wizard alive, he could have done some sort of fancy spell that made a mirror image of him.
Well i was trying to say that even though he is the most powerful wizard in there world pretty much he still has family and is one of the most important figures in the war that is going on. By the way i am in the process of closing this story and not writing anymore im going to post it somewhere else or just write it for fun and not online or anything. Thanks for reading
the part you wrote about dumboldore comting back alive i think was a little cheesy. but it was still good. as the editor of the school news paper i would take facts on the 6th book. Like who is R.A.B. i think R.A.B is Regulas .A (whatever his middle name stands for) black. because regulas black was a death eater and then he wanted to stop being a death eater. and dumboldore. dumboldore in the first book it mentioned he had sorser powers but he was to noble to use them. and in the sixth book he was the only one who could shut the apperating thing down on hogwarts grounds. and so when he did he could have had a horcrux or used his sorser power to come alive again and apperate out of the coffon. ok that was a loyt to type in 2 min. so i had a lot of spelling errors. so don't kill me for them. LOL, so what i basicaly said ^^^^ was to take facts and clues form the past books and use them in this story. it was just a sugestiion. so u don't have to take it if you don't want to.
Sorryim grounded until like...friday and then im going to hershey with school Im in school now in tech and i dont want a whole punch of pop princesses seeing what im doing so ill post thsi weekend. Yes i will keep posting on herefor a while but my story kinda sucks need suggestions about the dumbledore thing