Maynards "Little Black book with me poems in"

Well, thats it.. I just started to get into poetry, so heres some of my new/newbie stuff

I killed a man

Today was the day
that i killed a man.
The wrong place at the wrong
time.
He knew it was coming
I didn't.
I didn't.
Maybe there is something wrong with me
Maybe i'm perfectlly fine.
But today was the day
I killed a man

so yeah, i'm new to Poetry so, be gentle.

funky... is my new word of the week... aplies here....

Originally posted by Lovely Murder
funky... is my new word of the week... aplies here....

of funky meaning stinky?

Originally posted by Revernd Maynard
Well, thats it.. I just started to get into poetry, so heres some of my new/newbie stuff

I killed a man

Today was the day
that i killed a man.
The wrong place at the wrong
time.
He knew it was coming
I didn't.
I didn't.
Maybe there is something wrong with me
Maybe i'm perfectlly fine.
But today was the day
I killed a man

so yeah, i'm new to Poetry so, be gentle.

new poem

Friends

Friends are what make you
Friends.
Friends are what may break you
Friends.
Friends change you like clay.
Friends.
Friends make you be what they want you to be
Friends.
Friends are more important than individuality.
Friends.

Good stuff. 😊

funky as in good.... but you i dont like.... your poems are fine though....

Originally posted by Lovely Murder
funky as in good.... but you i dont like.... your poems are fine though....

Originally posted by Ladyluck
Good stuff. 😊

Originally posted by Revernd Maynard
woah...that came out of left field shock eyes

😛

Originally posted by Coldfire
How come I didn't get a batting eyelashes smilie?? cry

😛

w00t 😛

why would you do that? you hate me....

Originally posted by Coldfire
Twas a pretty good my young poet 😛 😊

Originally posted by Lovely Murder
why would you do that? you hate me....

Originally posted by Revernd Maynard
eyes why dont you like me?

Originally posted by Coldfire
yay hehe 😄 Got some more??

Originally posted by Revernd Maynard
droolio eyes naughty

i dont dislike you, you hate me

Originally posted by Coldfire
😂 well I meant poetry but those are good too 😏 😉

Originally posted by Lovely Murder
i dont dislike you, you hate me

Originally posted by Revernd Maynard
I know, i figured that after i posted it...but, meh. 😕 since when?

Originally posted by Coldfire
So give us some more poetry 😛

Originally posted by Revernd Maynard
I've gotta think

Think faster. shock