Tristan & Isolde:The ultimate betrayal trilogy: part one mixed blessings

"Tristan", Isolde called though the dark? Hearing no reply Isolde moved farther into the dark. "Tristan?" Before Isolde could turn around someone came up behind her and grabbed her coverring her mouth with their left hand to keep her from screaming."Calm down it's only me." Her fears were almost instantly soothed at the sound of Tristan's voice. Letting her Isolde turned around and looked Tristan in the eye. "Oh Tristan!" Taking her in his arms Tristan gave her a passionate kiss. "We are not safe here", Tristan said when the kiss ended after an all-to-brief-eturnity. Taking Isolde's hand in his the two lovers vanished into the forest. Once they were they were out of sight of any onlookers they finally let themselves sink onto the grass. "Are we safe now", she asked? "Yes."
"Good." Isolde snuggled closer to Tristan, laying her head on his sholder. He held her in his arms for a moment, then once again kissed her. She laced her arms around his neck. Tristan flipped her over onto her back and began kissing her neck. Before long they were making love in the grass.

The next morning Isolde awoke to find that she was still laying in the grass and that Tristan was still laying besides her. Isolde began to panic.Oh God I must've fallen asleep last night. Oh no what if Mark wonders where I was last nigght? What do I tell him? As quickly as she could Isolde gathered up her cloths, put them on and ran as quickly as her legs could carry her back to the casstle. Once there her plan was to slip into the casstle and into her bed before King Mark awoke to find her missing. Her plan backfired however when she entered the room she found the bed empty. "That odd why is he not in bed?"
"I could ask you the same."
"My lord", Isolde said starttled.
"And where may I ask have you been all night?"What should I say? Should I tell him the truth? No he would surly kill Tristan if he knew. I"I was taking a walk."
All night?"
"The stars were so beautiful night I must've fell asleep watching them."Well that's half true at least. Mark's only reply was a hard .

stear.She's hiding something what? A few moments passed and Isolde began to wonder if he would even answer at all.He knows! Oh God he knows! "Next time", he said Isolde was suddenly caught off gaurd at the sound of his vioce. "Try not to stay out all night watching the stars." Getting up Mark left the room. Once she was sure he was far enough away Isolde breathed a sigh of relief.

Sounds like a great start. Keep it up!

That night King Mark held a great feast for all the noble men in the country. "Friends let us drink and be marry for tomorrow we may die." There was a loud roar of approval from the guests as they clashed their drinking glasses on the wooden tables. Sitting down King Mark signaled for the orchestra to begin. No sooner had he sat down he noticed Isolde was fidgeting in her chair besides him. "Are you alright Isolde", he asked leaning in to whisper in her ear?
"Forgive me my lord I seem to be a little distracted."
"Maybe you should go and rest."
"No I'll fine I just need some time to gather my thoughts." As soon as Mark had turned away Isode's eyes darted around the room. A moment later Isolde saw who she was looking for. She looked just in time to see Tristan sneaking out the back door. "Forgive me my lord but I think I will rest after all." Getting up Isolde followed Tristan out of the banquette hall.

I'll put up more soon but right now I have major writters block. So please be patient.

ok

Sorry everyone for the long wait I was working on another story and just started this one back up again. Again I'm sorry.

When Isolde reached the stone arch that has been their meeting place for as long as Isolde has lived in Cornwall she was overjoyed to see Tristan there waiting for her. Smiling she ran to him. "For a moment I thought you would never come", Isode said once she was close enough for him to hear. "You know that I will always come to you", Tristan said taking Isolde into his arms and kissing her. A few hours later Tristan and Isolde lay together in the grass, contently wrapped in each others arms. "Oh I wish we could stay like this forever... but I know that's impossable!"
"We may not have forever but we should cherish what little time we do have and make it last."
"I should go the feast should be over by now and Mark will wonder where I am, should he come to my room and find me not there. And should he arrive before me he will certainly know of us and what little time we do have will be gone forever." Saying goodbye the two lovers parted ways both praying that fate would not keep them apart for long. That night Isolde let Mark into her bed but even as she lay with the man she called husband she could not erase Tristan from her thoughts.

That cheating little *****! Lol

One week later Isolde awoke with the dawn and called her ladies-in-waiting to attend her. "Well my lady it's going to be a lovely day", one of the ladies-in-waiting said while dressing her. But the Queen did not hear her maids words for her mind was on something far more urgent "I did not bleed today", she said half to the maid half to herself.
"I beg your pardon my lady?"
"I should have bled today but I haven't. For the past four years I have bled the day following the full moon without fail. The full moon has since passed yet I have not bled."
"That can only mean one thing my lady you're with child."
"With child..." The words rang hollow in her ears.With child by whom? Mark or... Tristan! It has to be for I only slept with Mark once since his return from Rome over a month ago. Oh God what have I done! Mark will surely kill Tristan when he finds out I am with child. There will be no escape for him this time Mark will surely know the child not to be his.
"Get out",Isolde said snapping back to reality.
"My lady?"
"Out, all of you now I...I wish to be alone for a moment."
"Yes my lady." The maids curtsied and left the room leaving Isolde alone.

I saw it coming. Nice writing. 😛

Nice storyline. Even though it is just a netfic, try not to rush things though. You could have perhaps expanded some of the scenes - the banquet scene, for instance.

Also, try and start a new line for each person that speaks.

Tristan awoke to the sound of someone knocking on the door. Getting up Tristan clumsily made his way to the door. Upon opening it however, he found no one there. Just as he was about to close the door and go back to bed Tristan noticed an unmarked note laying in the doorway. Picking it up he brought it inside, wondering who it was from. Braking the seal Tristan read it to himself silently.I need to see you. Meet me in the garden in an half hour, It's important,
Isolde
Something's wrong otherwise she would not risk contacting me like this. With that in mind Tristan dressed as quickly as he could, saddling his horse he rode off towards the garden.

Isolde walked silently through the garden. She came upon a rose, bending down she took in the flowers sweet scent. Plucking the flower from the bush Isolde twirled the delicate flower in her hand before placing it in her hair. Suddenly Isolde felt someone lightly brush her hand. Half startled Isolde turned around and was almost immediately relieved to find Tristan standing next to her. "Tristan!"
"I didn't mean to scare you", he said leaning in to place a gentle kiss on her lips. Isolde backed away shaking her head forbiddingly. "What's wrong", asked? Almost as in reply Isolde broke down in tears. "Isolde what's the matter?"
"Something has happened Tristan, something that will change our lives forever."
"What are you talking about?"
"Please don't make this harder then it already is."
"I don't understand?"
"Tristan", she sobbed "I'm with child."
"With child?"
"Oh Tristan please don't hate me."
"Hate you we both knew this would happen someday Mark needs an heir."
"No Tristan you don't understand."
"What's to understand you're carrying Mark's child."
"No Tristan you're the only one I've let into my bed for over a month save once."

"Well if i'm the only one you let into your bed and you're with child then that must mean..." Isolde began to cry harder.
"I'm sorry Tristan please forgive me." He took her into his arms.
"It is not your fault I am the one to blame."
"We are both to blame you and I made this child togeather it is both our responibility." They held each other in silence both afraid to speak as if speaking would make their harsh reality all the more real. After a few moments however, Isolde finally got up the courage to speak, she looked into his eyes. "Tristan what are we going to do?"
"We'll figure out something."
" Tristan I'm so scare."
"Don't be everything willl work out fine you'll see."
"Hold me."

This is probably a dumb question but is this jsut a fanfic or something because isnt there a movie that just came out called Tristan and Isolde?
I havent seen it so i wouldnt know, just looks similar.

Quite a few of the stories on here are fanfics of one sort or another.

Yeah it's based on that movie that just came out. You should go see it it's awesome. Plus it will help you understand the story better. Anyway I'll put up more tomorrow okay?

Yeah I figured it was based off of that. Love to see more of the story though. 😉

sorry to keep you all waitting. I haven't forgotten about you my story got deleeted and I'm in the process of rewritting it. Thank you all for waitting.