ok this is an add on
rp sample:Len stands on the balcony of the upper deck of the acadume
watch all the recruits train as the second in command walk up behind him
"sir the commander would like a word with you"
"tell the commander i'm on my way"Len says to the second in command
"yes sir" and he walks off into the shadows of the dimly lite acadomy
Name: Pal Jetsam
Age: 21
Race: human (25% Civian)
Class: Jedi Knight
Weapon: Blue lightsaber
Alegiance: New Republic
Description: 20 year old with long blond hair (Liam from Resident Evil 4)
Obi-wan's jedi robes.
History: Pal accidentilly killed his master, and was an outcast for some time then he became a soldier and finally back to a jedi where he was given the rank of Jedi Knight.
Rp sample: Pal waited in the dark alley patiently, gripping his saber. Then he saw her, the mysterious dark jedi. Pal sprang from the shadows with his saber drawn over his head, he barrel-rolled to the side and slashed off the enemies legs, he was triumphant.