Ritoshi's Poems

Started by Coldfire5 pages

Originally posted by Ritoshi
Yes you did, or why else would the poem be good 😱

It's good because we did it together 😱
Originally posted by Ritoshi
Poem i wrote like just now on DA

As Long as my Love is there

Love that needs no repair, as long as my Ambie Bambie is always there.
When you are there by my side, I look up at the stars and thank God that I am still alive. From your gentle words to your smiling face I wish I was with you now, but that is not the case. Almost there almost there, soon I will be with you and once I am there is no need to fear because my love for you Amber can not compare.

You are the sweetest person I know,
even forgiving those who hurt you so
false love from a lie,
only ended up in pain and made my love now cry
it will never happen again,
because I will make sure to never be like them.
How could I ever lie about loving you,
like the others that left you alone, saying that they were through.
Forget about the past
because my love for you Amber will always last.

Many adventures for us still await, but aslong as I am with you, I know they will be great <3


aww 😍 hug

Originally posted by Coldfire
aww 😍 hug

ill second that...nice poetry...you two together could be very famous..😄

Thanks 😱

Originally posted by MadMel
ill second that...nice poetry...you two together could be very famous..😄

Aww thankies 😱

Originally posted by Ritoshi
Poem i wrote like just now on DA

As Long as my Love is there

Love that needs no repair, as long as my Ambie Bambie is always there.
When you are there by my side, I look up at the stars and thank God that I am still alive. From your gentle words to your smiling face I wish I was with you now, but that is not the case. Almost there almost there, soon I will be with you and once I am there is no need to fear because my love for you Amber can not compare.

You are the sweetest person I know,
even forgiving those who hurt you so
false love from a lie,
only ended up in pain and made my love now cry
it will never happen again,
because I will make sure to never be like them.
How could I ever lie about loving you,
like the others that left you alone, saying that they were through.
Forget about the past
because my love for you Amber will always last.

Many adventures for us still await, but aslong as I am with you, I know they will be great <3

awwww....that was so sweet, i think i got a cavity 😛

Originally posted by Fëanor
awwww....that was so sweet, i think i got a cavity 😛

You're just jealous because you never thought of it first boi 😛

Originally posted by Coldfire
You're just jealous because you never thought of it first boi 😛
jealous? jealous? riiiiiiiiight! 😉

dearly beloved...we are gathered hear
to speculate the obvious of our dear
friend and so lovely lady...
that to all of us is not....a Brady?
but ho! i digress, for lack of a better word
to Ambie Bambie, a beauteous bird.
A bird? My bad...i did not mean to say
or intend that you were such...
for its obvious love is full and much.
For i am a friend, a friend indeed
I will end my prose if you say, "Oh please!"
😛

Originally posted by Fëanor
jealous? jealous? riiiiiiiiight! 😉

dearly beloved...we are gathered hear
to speculate the obvious of our dear
friend and so lovely lady...
that to all of us is not....a Brady?
but ho! i digress, for lack of a better word
to Ambie Bambie, a beauteous bird.
A bird? My bad...i did not mean to say
or intend that you were such...
for its obvious love is full and much.
For i am a friend, a friend indeed
I will end my prose if you say, "Oh please!"
😛


😱 😂 Aww thankies hun, melikes it hehe hug

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Originally posted by Ritoshi
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Get your butt in gear and write more poems!!! 😛

It's been awhile ahhh

Originally posted by Ritoshi
It's been awhile ahhh

You write poetry 😐

Originally posted by A.J
You write poetry 😐

Yeah he does 😱

❌ I thought you was a real man.

Originally posted by A.J
❌ I thought you was a real man.

*slaps* Take that back boy

I attempted to use one of Ritoshi's poems and it got me slapped cry

Originally posted by SpadeKing
I attempted to use one of Ritoshi's poems and it got me slapped cry

🙄

Originally posted by A.J
❌ I thought you was a real man.
Sit down little boy before you hurt yourself. ✅ You are 15 😐 you can't know what a real man is if you are still a little boy 💃

Originally posted by SpadeKing
I attempted to use one of Ritoshi's poems and it got me slapped cry
It wasn't the poem that failed, it was you 😱