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Tar's comments

If you have any comments on my stories, please post them here. Currently I am writing one story, "The Amulet of Calliban". I will probably write more stories in the future, but right now you may post comments on that one.

Looking good so far. One mistake I caught. The world will be over, I know what you meant by it though 😉

keep up the good work

Lmao, that completely changed the meaning, didn't it? Thanks for catching that...

No problem. looking foward for more