Rate my comic (aint't finished yet)

Well so far i've drawn about 12 pages, but i've only coloured one,
so the one i coloured goes right here.
When you rate can you keep in mind that i'm the younger bro on the acc of my bro , and i'm only 13. (my bro is 16)
Thankssss.

thats very good writeing most people would say better than rob leifeild lol

The general is the general? 😕

Originally posted by steverules
The general is the general? 😕

I think he needs a ' ... ' placed in between those generals , like 'The general is....the general is gonna kill us '

Lookin' good...

Looks fine. Anti-alias the text, though.

Shite.

Originally posted by Magee
Shite.

😂

I'm creating my own comic book business as well. Your's looks good but practice a little more on the drawing.

Anone seen the guy drwing on the Batman art thread in batman forum? He is JUST like Jim Lee... sensational... he wrote a brilliant looking comic!

Yeah man he friggin rocks !

Yeah, now i discovred the typo 😆
I'll fix it in the final version , though.

Oh and yes i know the drawing, ain't perfect, but hey, i'm like only 13 and most of you guys already 16 or older.
(don't get a discussion started on how old you guys are)
And plz do read the story.

My idol is Howard Mackie, although you won't find anything that prooves to that i think.

Originally posted by Magee
Shite.

❌ wat a meanie at least he got balls to post it lol i think its quite good

thanks ! second page just began coloring maby sunday or monday ill post it here

Originally posted by Scarlet_Spidey
Oh and yes i know the drawing, ain't perfect, but hey, i'm like only 13 and most of you guys already 16 or older.

😮

how old r u scoobless..... 😐

Originally posted by AJ4LIFE
how old r u scoobless..... 😐

whistling

go on tell us

yeah tell us Scoobless. Man i am probably one of the youngest of this forum. only like a teen. but that is fairly good for someone of your age dude. its a pretty different style then I'm used to but good nonetheless.

It'll still need a lot more work & I doubt he even knows what other things he'll have to do.

well im 15, u scoob, o r u to young to be on here