Rate my poem.. please?

Hey there.... A very special freind wrote this a long time ago... rate my poem? what do you think?

The memory of you
I’ll never let go
The feelings I hold
Are more than you know,
I live to breath easy
Thanks to you
To wait for you soon
I know I’ll pull through,
Your just so great
Your all I adore
I’ve given you a hug
You deserve more,
To kiss your lips
Would be a treat
Warm yet so tender
Lovely and sweet,
Look in your eyes
As I hold you tight
Whenever I’m with you
The world seems right,

simple, a little sappy, but pretty good. i'm impress.

yeah I know it sounds like an obsession to me but it's still a pretty poem
thanx

"Your just so great
Your all I adore"

watch the yours. Should be "you are" or "you're" 🙂

But other than that, yeah it was quite sappy (even though I shouldn't talk! haha 😛 ), but I enjoyed it 😊

Yup I made that point too ✅

The memory of you
I’ll never let go
The feelings I hold
Are more than you know,
I live to breath easy
Thanks to you
To wait for you soon
I know I’ll pull through,
You're just so great
You're all I adore
I’ve given you a hug
You deserve more,
To kiss your lips
Would be a treat
Warm yet so tender
Lovely and sweet,
Look in your eyes
As I hold you tight
Whenever I’m with you
The world seems right.

There we go tat's much better isn't it? ✅

Originally posted by Coldfire
"Your just so great
Your all I adore"

watch the yours. Should be "you are" or "you're" 🙂

But other than that, yeah it was quite sappy (even though I shouldn't talk! haha 😛 ), but I enjoyed it 😊

short and nice

Thank you

Prettyful.

I thought it was a very nice poem. thumbup

Thank you guys a friend That I was really close to wrote it for me....