i had a writers block the other day and found myself writing this hope you enjoy
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Denniz234Maybe someday...
PLAGIARIZING IS BAD - REX
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Denniz234Maybe someday...
plz review
BAR
BarkerThorin Fan Club President
It actually seems Pretty Well Written. 🙂
Didn't read it all, but it looks Pretty Good.
ILU
iluvhpsomuch1_7Fourth Year
pretty good!
SIR
Sirius_RulezSenior Member
i think u should add some parts with James in it cause all the fics of James/Lily on mugglenet have stories mostly of her but u don't have too. no pressure, just a suggestion and i think ur story's pretty good by the way.
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Denniz234Maybe someday...
PLAGIARIZING IS BAD - REX
DEN
Denniz234Maybe someday...
PLAGIARIZING IS BAD - REX
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Denniz234Maybe someday...
PLAGIARIZING IS BAD - REX
SIR
Sirius_RulezSenior Member
i think ur story's really good so far and cant wait to read more
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Denniz234Maybe someday...
thanks im now putting next part up
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Denniz234Maybe someday...
PLAGIARIZING IS BAD - REX
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Denniz234Maybe someday...
PLAGIARIZING IS BAD - REX
ILU
iluvhpsomuch1_7Fourth Year
omg thats like awesome i love your story. We started our James/Lily stories at the same time you know. Ironic isnt it. Not in a bad way i think its kool!cant wait for more!
SNV
snv87_30Member
I love this story. Its awsome! I am looking forward to reading more 😮💨
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Denniz234Maybe someday...
PLAGIARIZING IS BAD - REX
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Denniz234Maybe someday...
PLAGIARIZING IS BAD - REX
SNV
snv87_30Member
I loved the proposal part! Keep posting, its really good
ILU
iluvhpsomuch1_7Fourth Year
amazing
SNV
snv87_30Member
I think that this is the best lily/james story written. Its written out so well