LZ's Poetry Thread

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LZ's Poetry Thread

Well i suck at poetry..and have no idea how to structure poems but Supernovadragon does them so meh.. πŸ˜› every so often i shall post a poem, please feel free to tell me if they are crap or not lol

Heres one i wrote to my girlfriend heaven. (she liked it so i was happy lol)
I feel loves sweet embrace, forever am I ensnared in the warm feeling that you make me experience every time I hear your voice. The way your beautiful green eyes look up at me can make me weak with excitement. Slowly your black hair drapes down your back instilled like a waterfall. Similar to a siren of myth you enchant me with you irresistible charm. Your lips are so soft and smooth with the countenance of a goddess. Slowly you walk catching my eye i stop and stare lost forever in your radiance.

I wrote this for this girl i used to like lol
I care for you deeply, forever I will
Just to be beside, to hold you forever
There will always be a place for you deep in my heart
I have always loved you right from the start
This love is forbidden, my heart aches for you
A moment without you is like living in darkness, a long cold winter
Without my bright sun, I must be strong hold on to the memories
In my lifetime I want to hold you at least once, feel your sweet embrace
And your loving touch.

😱 Love them both hun 😊 hug

Thanks Amber 😊 hug

Originally posted by Lord. Zidane
Thanks Amber 😊 hug

You're quite welcome 😊 I want to see some more!! 😱