Organization XIII, but XVI (?)

This is my Organization fanfiction. It has no connection to the game i just think it would be fun to make this. All the characters are here and NOT dead (for those that are).
(*(These are my files on the organization. I based them on the wikipedia information i got from them. THere is really no need to read them. IF you dont want to read all of it, then dont read the Bios which is letter "e."
Not all Organization members lived on Earth.
Example(Example is fake!):
VII (Org. #7) Laxaur (some japanese name)
a(weapon). Dagger
b(element). Mountain
c(Title). The jagged Soul-stealer
d(name unscrambled *note!* some organization names unscrambled are made up, and some i found online).Laura
e=biography

I. Xemnas (Zemunasu)
a. energy swords
b. Nothingness
c. The Seeker of Darkness
d. Ansem
e. Xemnas's real name is Xehanort. Xehanort is Ansem (the wise)'s assistant for studying the heart. When there seemed to be no prgress in Ansem's research, he stopped in his place. Xehanort decided to proceed with the research and stole all of Ansem the Wise's credit and his name. In his studies he found out about the heartless. He studied and studied. He was believed to disappear from being a person. His heartless became the antagonist in Kingdom Hearts. His Nobody became Xemnas and he became part of organization thirteen.

II. Xigbar (Shigubâru)
a. Gun-arrows
b. Space
c. The Freeshooter
d. Braig
e. Braig was a bully. He liked tormenting kids where he lived. He decided to pick it up a notch and invented the crossbow. He had made so many of them. He put them all up on the walls of his house. He wanted t make something even better and something that shot something else faster. He invented the gun. He put those up in his house too. When a bunch of heartless had entered his house, he was surprised and the Heartless deeply scratched his left cheek. He fought back with all his weapons. When shooting his crossbow, the arrow was shot and bounced off a gun which shot Braig in the eye. From there, the heartless had taken his heart and his Nobody was left to become Xigbar.

(I have a hard time doing this one. Xaldin's a tough nut to crack. pm me some more ideas as i try to make him cooler)
III. Xaldin (Zarudin)
a. Lances (6)
b. Wind
c. The Whirlwind Lancer
d. Dilan
e. Dilan was a jock. He played football, Basketball, and Tennis. He always played some sport. He couldn't stop doing some sort of sport.
Dilan was the most popular jock in the school he attended. During the summer after he graduated he played some soccer and such with his friends. During one of his games, he was playing against a heartless somehow. The heartless Piled on top of him and he became a heartless and a Nobody.

IV. Vexen (Vikusen)
a. Shield
b. Ice
c. The Chilly Academic
d. Even (pronounced as Evan)
e. Even was the smartest kid in his academy. He focused only on his schoolwork. Other kids kind of labeled him as cold-hearted. But, Even did not really feel any emotions. He was much too busy. After he graduated, he became a scientist. He studied the Heart as well. He was not distracted by any heartless, like Xehanort. He studied other things. the heart became a mysterious place to him. A heartless came in the night and took away Even's heart. He, Lexaeus, and Zexion are of the oldest mebers of Organization XIII. (I'm not sure if that means that they were older when they died, or the more elder members of Organization XIII.)

(Just for a note, if yoiu want to, you can pm me with any questions)

V. Lexaeus (Rekuseusu)
a. Tomahawk
b. Earth
c. The Silent Hero
d. Elaeus
e. Elaeus was a hero. He protected his city from giant creatures that came to attack. Elaeus didnt like publicity much. After a very long continuous day after day fighting, he started to become weary. He was hoping to soon retire, but the next day was his last. It was his last because a huge swarm of Heartless came into the town and while Elaeus was fighting he was jumped. He didnt get to protect his town very much.

VI. Zexion (Zekushion)
a. unknown (for now)
b. Shadow
c. The CLoaked Schemer
d. Ienzo
e. Ienzxo was also one of Ansem the Wise's lab assistents. He was basically a test subject. After Aswem (tW) stopped continueing the reasearch on the heart, Ienzo was out of a job. After Xehanort had taken Ansem's name, Ienzo thought that he was the real Ansem. He persuaded "Ansem" into broadening the horizons of the research. Since Ienzo was a test subject, he was only alive for a little of the time Ansem was. HE ended up as food for one of the heartless being tested with.

(ok if you havent figured it out, i am Axeron. I changed my name)

VII. Saix (Saikusu)
a. Moon
b. Claymore
c. The Luna Diviner
d. Ais
e. Ais was good at his job. He studied his best and was second best in his profession. The profession was nocturnal studies. He was the only one that had a secret file that he studied. He somehow found enough time for it. Inside this file, he had pictures of vampires and heartless. In his world, heartless rarely appeared and only appeared at night. He was a lucky one. He had come in contact with a heartless on his way home from work at night. During that time he had driven it away, and he ended up with a scar upon his face. Si nce then he studied the creature intently. He ended up being fired from his job, but he kept with his studies. On night when he went out for a walk, he came in contact with a heartless. The heartless took his heart and his nobody, Saix, became part of Org. XIII.

VIII. Axel (Akuseru)
a. Fire
b. Chakram
c. Flurry of Dancing Flames
d. Lae
e. Lae was an indian. He always used to have fun in the camp. He always like to be informed so he always found a way into the cheif secret meetings. In the meetings they would talk about some of the tribe members, or battles that are being fought, or any other such interests. It was to the cheif's attention that one of the battles were headed there way. Lae had listened in real closely. The cheifs had issued a plan. The plan was leave a lot of the women and children behind to make out that the battle was indeed coming this way. Lae was appoled by this decision and he spoke up. He was Burned because of his disloyalty to the tribe and everyone who loved him danced around his flames. The flames went out and heartless climbed over the body as everyone else ran away from the sudden surprise. The heartless consumed him. HIs body was left and a Nobody was let out.

(kind of creepy, right? Didnt really ave any connection to the element or weapon though. That''s why its like that)

IX. Demyx (Demikkusu)
a. Water
b. Sitar
c. The Melodious Nocturne
d. Dyme
e. Dyme was a wonderful musician. He had all the things he needed. He had such good songs, but he never actually put them to any use. The world was cruel to him. He tried to make his singing debut on a boat. He had a wonderful time. He had a record company producer come up to him and asked him if he wanted to record an album. Promptly, he said yes. He was so happy with joy. Suddenly the boat raddled, and since Dyme was near the side of the boat, he was thrown over board. All the people got him out. Dyme was alright. Heartless appeared out of nowhere. SOme were on the boat, others in the water, and the rest were in the air. Dyme had run to get his Sitar before he got off the ship. He grabbed it and he tried to get to a lifeboat, but he was too late. He was left on the boat to die. The heartless got to him and the boat sank.

X. Luxord (Rukusōdo) (Not getting where they get "L". Or Luxord for that matter)
a. Time
b. 52 Playing Cards
c. The Gambler of Fate
d. Drulo
e. Drulo was obsessed with gambling. He had wonderful was of cheating the system without getting caught. He got loads and loads of money. With tat money, he built his own casino. The casino was a huge success. Everyone went there. One night havoc wrecked upon the casino. People were riotng because they had felt that they were being cheated for there money (which they were). Drulo came out of his office to get some order. He didnt get the chence because after he had come out, everyone ran away from the heartless that came out of his office. The heartless grabbed Drulo and his heart was stolen.

((I(n my last post, remember taht bot Saix and Ais are spelt with an ï. It took me too long to remember that i could do that in the post))

XI. Marluxia (Mārūsha)
a. Flower (or nature, depends on what you want)
b. (pink) Scythe
c. The Graceful Assassin
d. Lumaria
e. Lumaria was a very graceful Assassin (lol). He was a ninja. It helped his stealth mode out that he was able to kill his prey with ease when using some sort of piece of nature. He liked to use flower poison mixtures and he kill most people with that. His signature from klling his victums is that he leaves one yellow flower petal, one blue and two pink. One day, he was going through his inventory when he notice that he need a flower of lotus. He went out to get some, and was confronted by Alrenè. She went with him and he was very happy that she was with him. They were both confronted by heartless and both died trying to live.

XII. Larxene (Rakushīnu. Again, how did they get that name)
a. Thunder
b. Kunai (throwing knives)
c. The Savage Nymph
d. Alrenè
e. Alrenè was a wonderful child. She was smart. She had perfect grades, perfect friends and pretty much a perfect life. People idolized her. Her only problem was that she had something missing in her life. She wanted someone to care for. She spent a lot of her short life looking for that someone when she came across Lumaria. He was her perfect soulmate. The quickly hooked up. With Lumaria being busy all the time, they could never really further their relationship. Alrenè liked him because Lumaria was all about flowers and killing people with them. All that Alrenè knew was about the flower part. She knew nothing of the killing of people. SHe had come over to his house one day to apparently getting some lotus flower. Heartless had attacked them and they failed to live. When in the Organization, they were not able to make a relationship without hearts. So they sided to turn on the organization.

XIII. Roxas (Rokusasu)
a. Light
b. Dual Keyblades (Oblivion and Oathkeeper)
c. The Key of Destiny
d. Sora
e. Im pretty sure we all know the story of Sora. Recap- Sora had become the keyblade master and fought many heartless and his major task for now was to find Riku and Kairi. He found Kairi but learned that she lost her heart to the Heartless. After he fought Riku in Hollow Bastion, Riku had left his keyblad that unlocked peoples hearts. Sora took it and used it on himself to free Kairi. Kairi came back and Sora became a Heartless. It was then, Roxas was born. He is the youngest Org. XIII member. Since Sora was only a heartless for a short time, Roxas did not remember his past, inlike all the others.

((The actual fanfic will begin shortly. HOpefully i will have some people looking at this))

So when does the story start?

Who are the extra three?

(( The "inlike" is supposed to be "unlike". Don't know if you guys caught it. I have yet to add this stuff. Just let me start this up, the three people that are the main characters will be the extra three. PLease let me get to it. There is school in the world and I Don't have much time as it is.

Usually i have fanfics typed up before i actually start posting these, but this time its gonna come from my head right here when i write it. HOpefully it will be enjoyed))

...Since Sora was only a heartless for a short time, Roxas did not remember his past, unlike all the others.
The organization's goal is to collect hearts and become a full human again. But to do this, they have to kill lots of people. Since Roxas is the key of destiny, he leads the group in finding the hearts they need. The other members kill the regular people, and Roxas uses his keyblades to destroy the heartless so the Organization can capture the hearts left. Before the people are killed, they have one dream where one organization member appears. That is the member who will take their heart. The problem is, is that they need a whole lot more hearts than they thought they did. They have to get 50 hearts per member and then they will be one...

This is how it all started. After the three of us found out about the files, we were pissed. We had to find our way into the castle. When we found our way into the castle we tried to eliminate the Organization. We failed. But right now, Im getting way too ahead of myself. Let me start back a little earlier.
We lived in the World that never was. I, loved to work with music, and other types of things. I loved to make different voices fit into characters that weren't their own. One of my friends, Brittany, loved to explore the different types of metal. Pretty self exclammitory. My other friend, Kyle was crazy about volcanoes. He had plenty of posters. He knew what all the economic advantages and disadvantages for them. I had come across the Organization XIII files by accident. I found them in the library. The library was a tall building. It had different color tv screens on top of the building. After i had gone inside i looked for informationa bout soundwaves. Inside one of the books, I found a manilla folder. I brought it up to the front desk.
"I have never seen this folder before. You may keep it if you'd like." That's all she said to me. I brought the folder home and looked inside. There were pictures of people dressed in black cloaks. The first one there was a darker skinned man with white hair. He had these red sword looking things coming out of his hands. I read what was beside the picture.
"No.1 Xemnas element: Nothingness Weapon: Energy swords" Under that, he read his file (up above). "I've got to show them this!" I said.
The next day, I brought the files to our hideout. We went over the files and read the last parts. "The organization's goal is to collect hearts and become a full human again. But to do this, they have to kill lots of people..."
"That is horrible," Kyle said, "I feel like i need to hit something!"
"Well there isn't much you can do. We can only hope they dont come after us." Brittany got up and put her hand on his shoulder.
"I just hope it isnt us," Kyle responded.

(now's a good time to stop 1st person and do 3rd person) (I also am planing to right at least a little everyday)

That night the three of them had dreams about the organization. Each one had a different person killing them. Lexaeus killed Greg, Luxord killed Brittany, and Xaldin killed Kyle. None of them knew what had really happened to them though.
The next day was decided. They were gonna take on the Organization. they each grabbed a weapon from their homes. Greg grabbed 2 sonja's revenge (if you need reference, go to swords online. The picture was decieving. I figured it was a small handle. That's what it is in this. Two hand weapons), Brittany took a thick metal rod (about 3 ft from the handle, and Kyle took two hand axes. They went into, and up to the top floor of the castle. The top was the Proof of Existence (no need to explain who was where). All the doors were shaped like keyholes. The frames were grey There were six on one side, and six on the other .There was one in the middle(this is different). It had a black frame. They each went up to one of the portals.

"Look at this," Said Gregory. He pointed to the top of the portal. "Each one has a number on it. Mine says V- which is five."
The looked up. Brittany was in front of X- ten, and Kyle was in front of III- three. "Want to see where these portals go?" Brittany asked. "Well if we do, then how do we know if we need to contact eachother?"
"We'll just have to deal." Kyle said. They each went in. Where Gregory went in, he was inside some sort of tunnel. The tunnel was full of dirt. He didnt see anything ahead, except a small light. He went toward the light.

Brittany went into the portal and came out from a casino. There wer a lot of people gambling and winning. She looked around she saw a sign "No gamblers under age 25" She wasn't gambling, so she was safe.

Kyle came to a blimp, but instead of being in the bottom, he came out on the top of the blimp. It was a fast surface. There was a dark area ahead of him and he figured it was the skyline of where day ended and night began.

Gregory noticed that there was a sound of a train whistle. The light had been getting brighter than he was going. For a second he thought, then looked down. He saw train tracks. He ran back to the portal.

Brittany went through the floor looking for something to watch. Two security guards went to her and said "You are not allowed on this floor. We now must take you to the police." She didnt want to go so she ran.

Kyle saw that the dark image was getting more clear to see. He saw that there were bricks. The blimp he was on, was onlt low enough to actually get through without any extra room for people that would be on top.

(Long story short) They all got out just in time. The Organization members were standing there in front of the entrance. Clapping...
"Good to see that you can withstand going in there and coming out alive." ONe of them in the blackened hoods. Th only ones that weren't wearing hoods were LExaeus, Xaldin, and Luxord.

You cut a long story short?

That ruins the point of writing the story in the first place! Anti-climax to the extreme - you set up te situations, and then just say "they got out in time". Sorry, you've lost my interest.

Shouldn't you have explained the characters INSIDE the story. If you've ever read a book (I'm not saying you havn't) then you will notice how authors tell the story of a characters background somewhere at the beginning of the story.

As long story short, i mean i dont want to go into very long, very boring detail of about two seconds in each area.

2nd post:
Yeah i should've done that. Sorry. Didnt think of it. I just wanted to rush this story to the parts i keep thinking about. Of course, very few parts are in my mind right now and i need a chance to jot them down.
FYI: I am not done. I just havent been able to write recently with all the commotion of end of the school year fever. i need some time to gfet my head back into the correct order so i know what im doing.

Originally posted by Demyx Stone
... "Good to see that you can withstand going in there and coming out alive." ONe of them in the blackened hoods. Th only ones that weren't wearing hoods were LExaeus, Xaldin, and Luxord.

"so how do you know what we can withstand?" Kyle asked.
"We know a lot about you three."Another one of the black-hooded people said. It sounded female.
"HOw much do you know?" asked Brittany.
"We know a lot. We know that you are trying to destroy us. If you knew your true destinies, then yoou wouldnt be hear to eliminate us." The same person talked, but then she took off her hood to reveal blonde, slicked back hair.
"Then what are our true destinies?" Gregory yelled at them with intensity. Another took off his hood to reveal dirty blonde hair with shorter length on the sides then the hair facing straight up then said, "You three actually already nobodies. The reason we had our images in your dreams was to get you three here."
"It was all a plot? And we have been nobodies?" Kyle demanded an answer "Yes. YOu didnt know you have died? Strange. YOu probably dont know that, because you had the same lives until you came here.
And now you will know what you are capable of." As Axel took off his hood. Suddenly a burst of light surrounded Brittany's, Gregory's and Kyle's clothes. When the light faded, they had Organization robes on. "I dont believe it" -Kyle. Xemnas took a step forward and brought his arms up. "Your names as nobodies are and always have been Rexyggor, Nattribyx, and Lyxek."

(Now come the other three files. There is no history because the history isnt really important all that is important is the personality traits above with what they liked. They dont know much about their old lives, considering it was like they had never died in the first place.)

XIV. Rexyggor
a. Sound
b. the Sonja's revenge (double handed)
c. The Hostile Muter
d. Gregory

XV. Nattribyx
a. Metal
b. The metal rod
c. The Shinning Warrior
d. Brittany

XVI. Lyxek
a. Lava (If you think lava is cheap, then ice is just as cheap)
b. hand axes (2)
c. The Molten Knight
d. Kyle

does anyone want me to continue this? I'll just leave it be if no one wants to read anymore, i dont mind it. I really dont feel like doing it

If you don't feel like doing it, then don't. Don't feel pressured into writing, a story's better if the author wanted to do it.

But if you're gunna, I suggest writing it in word first, then posting.

So i think im gonna just not continue the story and just start over in a little while

When you start over, this time dont rush your story. Plan it out so it makes things easier for yourself.

im gonna try. I really want to delete the posts that were made so people dont have to read it and then be like "oh come on! and then not want to read anmore cause they dont want to read again without more story