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Rhymes

Falling;
She falls into the depths of despair
Crawling;
The woman’s almost pulling out her hair
Screaming;
She’s sick of all the flaws
Dreaming;
For an unknown cause
Fleeing;
A deep and drastic pain
Breathing;
With a mind only partly sane
Praying;
When it only seems to reach the ceiling
Decaying;
Or at least that’s how she’s feeling
Casting;
To the point where her cares are worn
Thrashing;
To the point where hope is torn
She’s crying;
With tears to flow her eyes
Flying;
But slowly falling from the sky
Just Hoping;
That she will get out of this one soon
Coping;
But feeling locked up in this room
Four walls;
To surround her in this dark
Long halls;
That she’s too scared to embark
Light eyes;
That are red from uncried tears
Light sighs;
From a closeness nowhere near
She’s cold;
Yet no stillness in her mind
To hold;
The thoughts trapped in time
Please reassure;
Tell the woman it’s okay
There’s a cure;
Tomorrow’s another day
These words
They are but put in rhyme
But what occurs
Is for her pain to say: sublime
To leave
And give her soul some rest
So please
Hold the girl with tears to your chest
So she may cry
And escape from liquid pain
And maybe try
To feel happy again

Meghan Julie

That was awsome.......i felt it........Shipwreck

The dark meadows whisper sweetly
Almost the most melodious sound
Their hate almost covered completely
And evil almost never found
She wanders among the grey stone rocks
Her eyes wandering to the sea
Her short red hair held up in locks
And a skirt that reaches below her knees
She sees through violet and the lightest blue
With the sun kiss look of white
The one girl that no one did pursue
Like the sweetness did tonight
She sang softly to the horizon
Voice giving a hypnotizing feel
A voice that would never frighten
And that holds so much appeal
And out of the mist he came
Like some dark phantom tall
Whether known or not it was all the same
For he did not care at all
They walked and talked together
Of things they wished they were
And his voice was full of endeavour
To do the things that would concur
And so she sang with the grass
To calm his fretful heart
With a voice as pure as crystal glass
So he took her in his arms
And led her on a dance
To keep her out of harm
It was like they fell into a trance
So taken by their charm
As he danced out upon the waves
And her voice rose above the wind
Out of the blood of his heart he gave
Sorrows melted and thinned
So seek and you shall find
The place where smiles grow
Wipe your tears and clear your mind
Find the place where you know

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I lean against the stone cold wall
Blood draining to the floor
My weakness ebbing through the air
Everything seems darker then before
As the man appears before me
What he expects, is not to come
He takes my hand, I pull away
Get up and turn to run
All my imperfections
Maybe aren’t so bad at all
Perhaps I don’t deserve the beating
Even when I fall
But struck enough my breath is gone
My knees are on the floor
My bodies full of broken bones
And everywhere is sore
The one that chases after me
Seems to have no soul
And won’t even stop to let me breathe
So determine to reach his goal
And so all my life is before me
It flashes through my mind
I can’t believe this is happening
Can I bear this one more time?
The beating that’s been taken
Slurs from all mistakes
I can almost make it through the door
Just one more step to take
The story so surreal
Incorporated with such metaphors
But if it’s a dream then why do I feel
The closing of that solid door?
For sin has locked us in this world
Over and over we stay
And for me it’s become reality
Never too far away
So my knees give in and I fall down
My tears begin to spill
I don’t want to face this whirlwind
It’s souly against my will
But restrain the want to run away
Because death will mean release
So the man behind me catches my arms
And leaves me with no peace
But One day I will leave this
There will be no meaning for rain
And the pain will one day evaporate
And leave but minor stain
So God do hear my silent cry
I wish to be innocent once more
So leave the demons from my side
Because I can’t bare this anymore
I want from me, what was stolen
And returned what was torn away
I want to be unbroken
And left with some array
So please may I ask
Leave the spikes upon my heart
And maybe then the truth,
I won’t ever have to impart.
So stain the soil with tears of acid
And keep me from these lies
Find a place somewhat placid
To save me from these cries.

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🙂 omg, risquer those poems are amazing. i love them. they're really deep, i hope you post some more because i would love to read them.