dream world
i'v started this story as an assignment 4 years ago, but i liked it so i added more to it hope you like and plz give me some advice or some thing
In LA, California 2040. there lived a girl name Terra Salinas who loved to play video games all day to escape the real world she had raven black and brown eyes. Her mother was an alcoholic she was in her late 30, Terra looked a lot like her but the alcohal made look ugly and older the she really was, her father left them right afer Terra was born she doesn't really know what he looks like. this is where her stary begins.
[the mother walks in to find terra reading on the floor]
mom: dam kid [she wobbly towards Terra with a beer in her hand] why are you always here
Terra: [she looks at her mother and rolls her eyes] why do you always drink
mom: you talking back to me soiled little brat!?
Terra: [sigh] no, mother
[she walks to her room saying witch under her breath]
mom: you say some thing
Terra: no [she walked to her and turned on her computer that her grand parents gave her] this game has every thing [she looks at the cover of a game called dream world that her father sended her out of the blue] this is the best game ever, it even came with virtual glasses
[the mom walks in as Terra puts on the glasses]
mom: aren't you 16 shouldn't you be in an ally some where doing drugs [she says playfullywith a beer in her hand]