James and Charizard were walking on a dirt road leading through a forest "we're almost there buddy!" james said excited and threw his arms behind his head then stopped at a sudden ruffle in a bush then Charzard noticed it... an injured Treeko protecting it's territory "poor little guy those cuts are bad and the way your walking that leg must be broken, Blaze we have to get it to a pokemon center" James said as Blaze nodded (the Charizard) James pulled out a Nest ball and released the pokemon inside "just nock him unconsius okay Zephyr" James said to the Swellow that was flying above who used a weak wing attack on the Treeko who fell to the ground totally unconsius then James threw a Luxary Ball and caught the Treeko then continued walking except at a faster pace
*Wakes up and prepares for the day.*
"Hey there. You're up early."
*Gets dressed and ready to leave and heads for the door*
"We can't keep the people waiting. Come on Dratini."
(I think you may have been a little to strict with the reporting)
(Not all of your sentences have been perfect either ya know)
is it comprehensible.....
(eh?)
[raven was walking on a road, she had her hood down so no one couldn't see her face, she didn't know where the road went but she didn't care where she ended up just as long as she kept on moving. she takes out one of her pokeballs out, she stareed at it]
raven: we will get stronger, its only a matter of time [she looked up and saw one in the distance]
( umm... gardevoir evolves at lvl 60 or something in the game is that ok)
Originally posted by InnerRise{ it is comprehensible 😊 }
*Wakes up and prepares for the day.*"Hey there. You're up early."
*Gets dressed and ready to leave and heads for the door*
"We can't keep the people waiting. Come on Dratini."
(I think you may have been a little to strict with the reporting)
(Not all of your sentences have been perfect either ya know)
is it comprehensible.....
Originally posted by rare_fox{ oh...sweatdrop i won't get involved..i don't handle those kind of things well. 😛 }
((nope he wont listen to the ****ing rules and now he is being a ****ing baby beacue he cant be a good rollplayer and write 3 realy sentece or more in a ****ing rollplay he kills all ****ing rollplays..))
Haze bid her brother a long and heartfelt goodbye. When she exited her home, her whole clan stood before her. As she walked by them, each bowed. At the end of the path she follwed the Dragin master stood. She kneeled before him, and then stood. She lifted her fingers to her lips, a shrill whistle piercing the air. A loud, playful set of roars echoed through the sky as two Dragonites came into view. Both landed before her, still playfully nipping at each other.
" Night fire "
The male, a young, playfully thing he was, looked skeptically at the pokeball the Master had just handed to Haze, but sighed and let himself fade into it. Hazel's eyes moved up.
" Wind song...."
The female dragonite, a bit older and much more stern, annoyedly obliged. She too was warped into the small red ball Haze held. Hazel then stood, placing the two pokemon carefully into a cloth bag she had been given by her brother long agao, and made her way to the lake at the valley before another rising mountain. The lake was huge, and stretched far across the vast land. She dipped her fingers in, snapping them below the wate ronce. That was all it took to send the experienced old garadose flying to the surface. With one great leap he made his way towards Hazel and the group behind her.
His eyes said no, but he knew it was for the best as she held out the pokeball. He too had been given a name by the sacred village dragon whisperer, a position all thought Hazel wa sin line for, if not Master. His name was Moonscar, due to the huge mark across his eye, much identical to both her own. His though, was given to him long ago in his prime, before Hazel was born.
The dragon whisperer was currently a thirty five year old man. When he was fourteen he had wandered away from the dragon clan to , like Hazel, observe Rayquaza, to listen to his powerful cries. At this time he sat by the lake. There was a full moon, and some strange pokemon who he had never seen before were lurkning about. He had tried to be friendly, but wound up being attacked. A large Garadose rose from the sea in order to defend him. This garadose was one who priorly had never been friendly or open at all. He defeated the mystery bird like pokemon and saved Haru. He left the battle with a huge scar over his face, it shone in the light of the full moon.
A moon scar.
Hazel sighed remembering the story, and the wonderful dragon she would be leaving.
" Rayqaza."
She whispered as everyone waved while she walked away. A sudden tug at her skirt caused her to turn. Charmeloeon, who she wa seffectionatly calling ' Chars ' Gazed at her with saddened eyes.
" Char char"
She looked at him, confused. " You want to come? but i..."
He interrupted with a sharp growl and tugged her bag so a pokeball fell out. She chuckled. No, thats Wind Song's. I have no more. "
Chars refused ot give up, growling at the master behind them. The master looked up, smiling.
" Let him tag along.it will give him experience. "
Chars happily tugged at her skirt, so that she had to lift him up so it would not fall down. She smiled at him.
" Guess you'll be tagging along Chars. "
She said, placing him down. He sang happily as he followed. His voice was drifting out of her mind when she noted somehting green and sleek in the distance.
Raquaza.
He stared at her. It was broad daylight, and he had come out? To see her? She was filled with joy as the creature roared loudly, a proud call. something about it frightened her though...he seemed agitated. She wondered.
" I'll be ok.i promise!"
She whispered, waving her hand in the air for him to see.
" I promise..."
The huge dragon roared agian, this time nodding somewhat graciously, and flew off. Meanwhile the whisperer smiled.
' She truly has befriended him.'
And Hazel was off. One ambisous girl, two playfull Dragonite, a faithful garadose, a determined Charmeleon, and a mysterious gaurdian, keeping constant watch over the girl who had one his heart and soul.
Roy wakes up and watches the clock 9.30am
roy😖hit the program has already started.
He says and runs to the tv.
Roy: Come on guys Dratini, Pikachu, Oddish, Cyndaquil, Squirtle and larvitar comeon the show has started.
The pokemons comes out from the bedroom smiling.
They watch the Pokemon league on tv...
Roy: That was a show now comeon a new day lets go to the mall....
James ran the along the forest's dirt road until he came to a clearing, a city "finally, i'm here" james said looking around for a pokecenter, and after five minutes of walking around he finally found one and went in looked around then walked up to the counter area at set Treeko's pokeball down "he needs medical treatment bad, lots of cuts, bruises and i think a broken leg, i found him in the forest like this and caught him" james said as Charizard nodded
Originally posted by The big EH~sorry for the triple post i was in a rush to finish the last one~ the nurse took the pokeball then walked into the hospital room and released the pokemon "oh my! he is in a bad codition" the nurse said calling a doctor in the patch up the wounds and examine the treeko. james walked in beside the nurse "i'm going to go to my apartment, and unpack my furniture and stuff, buy groceries, if you need me you can reach on my cell" james said joyfully and wrote his cell number down on a slit of paper then went to leave but stopped and turned around "by the way is there a gym in this town?" james asked "yes, yes there is" the nurse said james and charizard exchenged glances at each other and nodded then left
James ran the along the forest's dirt road until he came to a clearing, a city "finally, i'm here" james said looking around for a pokecenter, and after five minutes of walking around he finally found one and went in looked around then walked up to the counter area at set Treeko's pokeball down "he needs medical treatment bad, lots of cuts, bruises and i think a broken leg, i found him in the forest like this and caught him" james said as Charizard nodded
Originally posted by rare_fox
"i battle some times""i catch pokemon some times right now i cant even handle these raskles.Eevee chirped of that being insalting"its not a insult its..neaver mind..sorry" eevee chirped under standing and laid her head down agen.Camille felt eevee chewing softly on her ear"stop eevee please"eevee stop her ear was wet but it was fine she clean the sloper of her ear.
Kage started laughing seeing Eve. "Oh well you're welcome to come with me to battle wild Pokemon. I need to get my Pokemon stronger." He said smileing. Mudkip smiled. "Mudkip!" Kage turned looking at Mudkip. "Mudkip wants you to go as well." Mudkip began to climb onto Kage's head smileing.
(She did state the rules clearly. And he still doesn't follow them why? I don't remember her saying spell your words correctly. Or have everything be perfect. Just post more then 3 or 4 sentences. 😬 But give em a break it is his birthday.)
Camille smile at kage"i will go keep a eye on me thouw because i will wonder and get out of sight and its hard to find me 0.0" she smiled she did wonder alot.Eevee was still on camille's head resting her ears where up listening to what the 2 where saying.Eevee jumped down and opened her pokeball and went inside and dissapierd camille's castform pokeball rattled"no castform" .
Kage's Mudkip stayed exactly were it was. It then began to climb to Kage's shoulder. "Oh i see. Mudkip never leaves me with out telling me. Even when he gets lost we have to thing that can help me or him find each other." He said smileing thinking about there Sonar that he had also learned to do with Mudkip over the past months. "Well let's go." He said smileing and began to walk out the room they were in, he held the door to the outside for Camille. Mudkip smiled wanting to get a level up.