DARKs DragonBall Z King Piccolo-Dead Zone Game Thread

Android 4:
Gah! What the hell? How could she still be standing, no matter, Android 4 had a plan. He waited for her to come closer; activating his Android Static he waited for her to hug him, in which she would receive a violent electric shock.

Terriban:
Terriban looked on in shock… “But, but he looks like a Namek… Which is impossible none of us have left Namek in a long time… at least to my knowledge anyway.”

Anthony:
Anthony woke up and sighed… What in the world did Malak want? Anthony doubted Malak would call him just for a pleasant chat, the power must mean something big. He picked up his bag and raced towards Malak and Terriban.

-----------------------Jeon-----------------------------------------
Your raft is moving slowly but surely into te middle of teh ocean.
---------------------ANdroid 4-----------------------------------------
She does come closer, andteh shock hits her, she seems unfased but her hair is sticking straight up.
-------------------------Terriban-----------------------------------------
"I dont know, but teh cavalry has arrive-" as he speaks teh Namekian figure shoots a blast at You and Malak. He seems to mean business, he isnt the token peaceful Namekian.
----------------------------Anthony--------------------------------------------
You fly up to see Terriban, and Malak, you soon notice a Green man, closely resembling a much older Terriban who shoots a larg eenergy blast at Malak and terriban.

(Master Roshi's island. Dang, three pages since I last posted.)

Zenthous: "HEY FISH!!! YOU"VE JUST BECOME MY LUNCH FOR THE DAY!!!" Zenthous then gets out one of his swords and dives in after it.
(Yes, Zenthous is crazy.)

jeon sat back bored as he hoped for some wind . Jeon looked out to the shore to see if shore was visable he saw nothing he had gotten really far out . " well i hope this roshi guys cool" jeon said with a sigh . jeon lay back hungry as his stomace growled.

looking down in the ocean he saw plenty of fish swarming in schools " maybe i should go catch somthing. " jeon said . jeon jumped off into the water and swam deep . " gulp" jeon mumlbled swimming . ' a fish!" jeon said swimming after .he reaches for it and trys to grab it .

(There's an edit button you know.)

~what hapopenend to denku? an Jeon please do not change environments, if I wanted you to find fish you would have.~
--------------------Zentheous---------------------------------------------------
The Fish is carved into and begins to bleed into the water. Roshi calls you inside.
--------------------Jeon------------------------------
You grab the fish, but looking around your boat has drifted off and away, you cannot see it anymore.

Jeon made it too the surface ..." my- my raft of crap whered it go ?!?!?!"
jeon was now in the middle of the ocean and had no idea where he was ..."i-i'm stuck here no way ! " jeon sighed and shook his hair off .

"gues i gotta swim ..." jeon muttered swimming forward he continues swimming as the water was freezing he shivered and swam upwards.
" this would be great if i could fly ..." Jeon muttered . " wait! i can use my kamehameha as a propler !!!" Jeon yelled . started kicking with his feet making him stay above water ( droping the fish ) "KA-ME -HA-ME!" Jeon yelled as a ble ball formed around his hands ."HA-ME-ME!!!!-" The ball was close to ready to fire now . "HA-ME-HA!!!!!!!"He yelled as the blast fired him across north. "ha!!!!!" he had enough speed to start running on water and he did. he was running at a high speed and contuned running till he reached a small island. " AM i there?!" he yelled falling at the shore line knocked out in the sand .

what teh holy **** was that!? you dont have a Kamehameha Wave!

( wait you said argh no im not retyping that dangit you said you let the kamehameha wave slip when my dude was training ill even quote i thought i had the ability ! thats how i kn0w about roshi in the first place! cuz i wanted to train under him to improove the attack !!!)

~I sid about Ki, not teh attack, I said i would let you make a large stride in traiaiang without me saying so that one time~

(the kamehameha wave is developed by ki ! it was the best i could think of you let me do the attack once i thought he could do it agian in a bad sitation(sorryif i spelt that wronge))

~you never did it before, you just spoke abotu Ki and floated, do teh post over~

jeon swam up to the top noticsing the raft was gone he blinked and yellemy boat whered it go!" jeon got angry and screamed " im gunan find this roshi guy if it's the last thing i do !!!! Jeon satrted swimming north where the wnd was blowing and conitnued swimming as hard as he could .

" i gotta get there " jeon muttered as water spash all over the place from his feet . jeon's arms where in perfect condishion he felt no tirendness and he had gone about 15 miles north thanking god for no animals . he continued swimming till he saw a small island with a pink house that said" KAME" on it " is that it it was still quit a ways but close enough to swim too ..

jeon began getting tired he had swam hard and was almost ready to take a break ." NO not now im almost there !" he yelled as he continued swimming going a little bit slower ." should - of - pasted my -self" jeon muttered struggling to get to the island .

~please do it over, only I can tell you when you are to teh actuall area~

( my guys PL is still 560 aftwer all he's been thew what would you say its at now eh ?)

(ok then say i saw the friggen place jesus ! don't make me retype it !!! why are you giving me such a hard time !!! you not giving anybody els not even denku and he's speaking in 1st person !!!!)

jeon swam up to the top noticsing the raft was gone he blinked and yellemy boat whered it go!" jeon got angry and screamed " im gunan find this roshi guy if it's the last thing i do !!!! Jeon satrted swimming
( there i fixed it jezz )
north where the wnd was blowing and conitnued swimming as hard as he could .

" i gotta get there " jeon muttered as water spash all over the place from his feet . jeon's arms where in perfect condishion he felt no tirendness and he had gone about 15 miles north thanking god for no animals .

---------- Boki Kuro ----------
"Well, It has been awhile since his master's death. Boki must hone his skills to a greater amount so he can revenge his Master's death. Those damn Saiyans, He'll kill them to avenge his master. He must seek the Red Ribbon army." Days later when he is finally at the base. Now that he is there he will begin the training.

~ I think I screwed up somewhere, I cant tell though >< ~

~Denku does not type in First person you are thinking of Sojaken, and he fixed I think~
-----------------------Jeon------------------------------------------
You see a small island ahead of you it has a pink shack on it.
------------------------Boki-----------------------------------------------------
(dont post travelling long distances unless you can fly)
The doors of teh RRA are closed and locked tight.