well im incredibly sorry that i havent posted for like a month but i have had a sport that has completely taken over my life i do hope that i can post soon and yes OhILuvHP this is that little story i told you about i hope that ill have enough time to put some more thought into this story soon also Aliies thanks tons for the criticism its great anyways guys thanks so much for reading my story hopefully ill post soon in fact ill write some of the next bit RIGHT NOW! lol thanks again