Murder Mysteries

Started by TheKingofKINGS!5 pages

Originally posted by d-fly_girl008
Then it should be in Harry Potter Fiction.

But no matter where it should be, I loved it!!

Then you have low standards. 😬

You're just jealous that you can't write that good.

Originally posted by d-fly_girl008
You're just jealous that you can't write that good.
Fine, I will say it. You have low standards. And you can't say I write bad because one, you never seen my work, and two, I have people to back me up that I am a good writer. 😄

I never said that he wrote bad, I just said he was jealous of the fantastic writing. And I've never seen his writing either.

Who's going to back you up?

Originally posted by d-fly_girl008
I never said that he wrote bad, I just said he was jealous of the fantastic writing. And I've never seen his writing either.

Who's going to back you up?

He has seen my writing actually, and when I informed him I wouldn't be writing for a while he said "aww.....I enjoy your writing"

That's nowhere near fantastic writing. It had bad grammar, plot, scentence structure. It was an overall failure. I'd give it an F- -

D-fly. You fail at being a good judge of writing.

I'm going to back him up. Phantom is a good writer. He's good. I've read a few of his stuff that I liked.

Originally posted by d-fly_girl008
I never said that he wrote bad, I just said he was jealous of the fantastic writing. And I've never seen his writing either.

Who's going to back you up?

Him, Saratn, people who have read my work. And that, no offense stormlover, take this as criticism, was not fantastic. It was poorly written kinda. But hey, keep writing and you will get better. That's how I got good at writing.

Saratn? Okay, maybe, I don't know. I was just curious.

Originally posted by d-fly_girl008
Saratn? Okay, maybe, I don't know. I was just curious.
Yep. Saratn. Anyway, Stormlover, keep trying. But not here. In the General Fiction Section.

Originally posted by d-fly_girl008
Saratn? Okay, maybe, I don't know. I was just curious.
You still fail 😒

Me?? Fail?? You wish.

Originally posted by d-fly_girl008
Me?? Fail?? You wish.
Actually no, I wish the opposite. Because if you didn't fail, KMC would be a better place. However....none of my wishes ever come true cry

He is. KoK, be more kind. Everyone has bad taste in something.

Originally posted by The Phantom
He is. KoK, be more kind. Everyone has bad taste in something.
Me kind? Pah!

You can both go diaf!!

Originally posted by d-fly_girl008
You can both go diaf!!
diaf? That english?

Originally posted by d-fly_girl008
You can both go diaf!!
diaf?
That's not a word. You fail twice for that.

It's computer language... DUH. You know like... lol. Yeah, if you were smart you would have figured that out.

No, you see, we spell things out. So tell me, what does it mean?

Originally posted by d-fly_girl008
It's computer language... DUH. You know like... lol. Yeah, if you were smart you would have figured that out.
Actually no. BECAUSE we're smart, we ignore that mundane "txt tlk." You fail THREE times for using that moronic babble on a forum of (hopefully) smart people.

Originally posted by The Phantom
No, you see, we spell things out. So tell me, what does it mean?

If you're so smart, go look it up!!