DMC deleted scenes

Started by sccch24 pages

Hmmm,I'll try.Can't promise that all my D.L.S. will be funny.

Norri:The heart of Davy Jones.
Cuttler: How did you get it?
Norri: Does that REALLY matter?
(Cuttler smirks)
Cuttler: I suppose not.
Norri: So what do plan on doing with the Heart?
(Cuttler evil smirks)

oo me likes. what happens next?!

We wait until the third movie for that. Another scene anybody?

ahh ok umm...how about when Will finds Jack Liz and Norrington at the chest.

hehehehe! (thinks of EVIL plan) MWHAHAHAHA! OK.Give me a few minutes.

hahaha ok...hurry!

Ok.

(Liz is hugging Jack)
Will: Elizabeth?
(Liz and Jack look over at him)
Liz: Oh,hi Will.
Jack: 'ey mate.
(Will looks over at Norrington who shrugs)
Will: What's going on?
Liz:Not much.
Will:Not much?
Jack:What's wrong mate?
Norri: What's wrong is that he sees his fiance hugging another man.
(Will nods)
Liz😮h...
Jack:What's wrong with that?
Will: (sarcastically) Oh,nothing Jack.
Liz: Will, I've decided to go with...Jack. We have alot more in common that I thought.

Umm,I don't know how to continue it.

ill try to .... might take some time though

that's ok

Originally posted by sccch
Ok.

(Liz is hugging Jack)
Will: Elizabeth?
(Liz and Jack look over at him)
Liz: Oh,hi Will.
Jack: 'ey mate.
(Will looks over at Norrington who shrugs)
Will: What's going on?
Liz:Not much.
Will:Not much?
Jack:What's wrong mate?
Norri: What's wrong is that he sees his fiance hugging another man.
(Will nods)
Liz😮h...
Jack:What's wrong with that?
Will: (sarcastically) Oh,nothing Jack.
Liz: Will, I've decided to go with...Jack. We have alot more in common that I thought.

Umm,I don't know how to continue it.

im not very good so sry if u dont like it...

Will:...(has a confused look on his face)
Liz:Will? do you have anything to say?
Will:....
Jacl: 'ey mate, whats wrong with you? your all quiet.you always have somehting stupid to say and ruin things.
Will: i do not! now let go of my fiance
Liz: will, jack does have a point. and no i dont want him to let go of me.
Jack: yeah she doesnt wnat me to let go of her. if i were to let go of her
she could go to you and i would no longer have her. and i wnat her. so NO!
Norri:everybody stop babbling! do you remember what we are here for?
Jack: oh right the heart! Will, give the key.
Will: Give me the girl!
Jack No. give me the key. (they go on for about 5min.)
Norri: why dont you just give me the girl and the key and we will all be happy!

its the best i could do. im not very good

Norri: why dont you just give me the girl and the key and we will all be happy!

😆

lol.

ok somebody else !!

anyone?!

...I got nothing.

diddo!

somebody think of a scene then...

nvm i decided to change the curiosity scene a little

Jack: My tremendous intuitive sense of the female creature informs me that you are troubled.
Liz🙁sarcastically) And you would know so much about that...
Jack🙁confused) Yes. I know that. Thar's exactly why i said it....
Silence
Liz (breaks silence):I just thought I’d be married by now. I’m so ready to be married.
Jack: Yeah...ok...well..umm...I'm here for you love.
Liz: Soo....that wont bring Will back. And thats not going to solve my marriage problem. I will probably just marry the next good looking man i see.
Jack: (pops up in front of her face) Hi....You know, Lizzy. I am captain of a ship. And being captain of a ship I could, in fact, perform a marry-awge right here. Right on this deck. Right now
Liz: Sure. Why not! It's not like Will will care anyway.
Jack: (laughs uncontrollably)
Liz: Why are you laughing?
Jack: you said "Wil will" hahaha. I'm sorry, love, what were you saying.
Liz: um..no thank you. I dont think getting married right now is the best thing.
Jack:Why not? We are very much alike you and I, I and you, us.
Liz:Except for a sense of honor and decency and. . .and a moral center. And...and...and..(she looks at Jack, who is pretending not to listen to what she is saying, and is looking as sexy ever!)and...wow you are incredibly hot right now!..i mean personal hygiene. u have none of it.
(jack smells armpit)
Jack:Trifles. You will come over to my side. I know it.
liz: Why doesn’t your compass work?
Jack: My compass works fine
Liz:Because you and I are alike, and there will come a moment when you have the chance to show it. To do the right thing.
Jack: I love those moments. I like to wave at them as they pass by. And i only do it to be nice.
Liz: And you’ll have the chance to do something. . .something courageous. And when you do you’ll discover something. That you’re a good man
Jack: im not a good man....just a good looking one.
Liz: Oh, I have faith in you. Want to know why?
Jack: Do tell deary.
Liz: Curiosity. You’re going to want it. A chance to be admired and gain the rewards that follow. You won’t be able to resist. You’re going to want to know what it tastes like
JAck: I do want to know what it tastes like. Does it taste yummy?
Liz: Oh its delicious. Here, ill give you a taste.(she kisses him lightly and pulls away slowly)
Liz: But seeing as you are a good man, I know that you would never put me in a position that would compromise my honor.
[As Jack caresses Elizabeth’s face he sees the black spot reappearing and pulls away.]
Elizabeth Swann: I’m proud of you Jack. Even after i gave you that small kiss you didnt want more?! i cnat believ you! (she slaps him and she storms off)
Jack stands confused but delighted by the kiss

sry it was really long but it would have been a lot longer! its not even good but i was bored

CUTE!

thanx but its really not good. i was just bored. you should write more deleted scenes. your really good.

Hmmm,I'll try.Can't promise that all my D.L.S. will be funny.

"Norri:The heart of Davy Jones.
Cuttler: How did you get it?
Norri: Does that REALLY matter?
(Cuttler smirks)
Cuttler: I suppose not.
Norri: So what do plan on doing with the Heart?
(Cuttler evil smirks)" ----------------------------------sccch

Mmm, continuation

Beckett: I know exactly what I'm going to do with it.
Norrington: Care to include me? Are you going to rule the ocean with it?
Beckett: Follow me (he walks to the billiard room and places it on the pool table)
Norrington: What the...?
Beckett (gets stick): Heart, corner pocket (hits the heart with the cue ball into the pocket)
Norrington: That was bloody brilliant!
Beckett: Shut up.