Any Good Writers For Spidey Script Out There?

Think of anyway that The host could be connected to this insted of some random pedestrian...

Ex: Eddie dumps her she goes off mad symbiote attaches itself to her they go on a rampage, find Edd beat the crap out of him spidey defends edd she goes off on spidey.... blah blah blah...

LOL she wasn't a love interest of Eddie.This takes place after Spidey separates Eddie and the symbiote.

Oh well you're own your own with this one.

Here is the Carnage/Vivian Scene.

Fade In:
Vivien comes out of her hairdresser and walks into a deep dark alleyway. She is 25 years old; she has long black hair with yellow streams. She also has fairly dark skin. As she approaches the alleyway, a big huge man approaches her from behind her. He is wearing a sea blue t-shirt, he has orange hair and looks in bad shape.

Cletus Kassady: Have you got the package.
Vivien: Yes I have.
Cletus Kassady: Well get it then?

She suddenly takes the package out of her handbag; the object is a small brown box.

Vivien: I had to get through a lot of trouble to get this. Now where is the money you promised?
Cletus Kassady: Ah here it is my dear just as promised.

He reaches into his pocket and takes out $200 and hands it to her.

Vivien: Only $200, I need more then, how do you expect me to pay the rent and bills with this kind of money.

Suddenly he grabs her by the collar.

Cletus Kassady: You think that you are the only person who has got problems, I am a ****ing wanted man on the ran. So I suggest you be happy with what you are given. Now if you don’t mind I need I another one of those packages.

Vivien: No I won’t do it.

Suddenly he takes out a gun from his pocket and points it at her head.

Cletus Kassady: I am afraid you have no say in the matter. Do you want me to tell your father of what you have been doing recently?

Vivien suddenly turns around and groans.

Vivien: No.
Cletus Kassady: Good. Now I will be back in five days. Remember I was so close to pulling the trigger this time, next time I won’t be so patient.

Originally posted by Dazzler619
I need help of a certain Spider-Man script for a character I created in it and I was wondering if anyone is interested to help me

Originally posted by Scarecrow756
Here is the Carnage/Vivian Scene.

Fade In:
Vivien comes out of her hairdresser and walks into a deep dark alleyway. She is a 25 years old; she has long black hair with yellow streams. She also has fairly dark skin.
As she approaches the alleyway, a big huge man approaches her from behind her. He is wearing a sea blue t-shirt, he has orange hair and looks in bad shape.

Claudius Kassady: Have you got the package.
Vivien: Yes I have.
Claudius Kassady: Well get it then?

She suddenly takes the package out of her handbag; the object is a small brown box.

Vivien: I had to get through a lot of trouble to get this. Now where is the money you promised?
Claudius Kassady: Ah here it is my dear just as promised.

He reaches into his pocket and takes out $200 and hands it to her.

Vivien: Only $200, I need more then, how do you expect me to pay the rent and bills with this kind of money.

Suddenly he grabs her by the collar.

Claudius Kassady: You think that you have got problems, I am a ****ing wanted man on the ran. So I suggest you be happy with what you are given. Now if you don’t mind I need I another one of those packages.

Vivien: No I won’t do it.

Suddenly he takes out a gun from his pocket and points it at her head.

Claudius Kassady: I am afraid you have no say in the matter. Do you want me to tell your father of what you have been doing recently?

Vivien suddenly turns around and groans.

Vivien: No.
Claudius Kassady: Good. Now I will be back in five days. Remember I was so close to pulling this trigger this time, next time I won’t be so patient.

Originally posted by Doc Potato
Cletus

I edited that, thanks Doc. What did you like about the scene?

Originally posted by Doc Potato
I can give it a go, i've written various JSA scripts for amateur films and have an English A-Level... 🙂

Thanks man 🙂

Scarecrow, that was a good scipt you did.I can't wait to read the rest of it 👆

BTW guys, I think I have an idea of how Vivian gets her symbiote

Originally posted by Scarecrow756
Here is the Carnage/Vivian Scene.

Fade In:
Vivien comes out of her hairdresser and walks into a deep dark alleyway. She is 25 years old; she has long black hair with yellow streams. She also has fairly dark skin. As she approaches the alleyway, a big huge man approaches her from behind her. He is wearing a sea blue t-shirt, he has orange hair and looks in bad shape.

Cletus Kassady: Have you got the package.
Vivien: Yes I have.
Cletus Kassady: Well get it then?

She suddenly takes the package out of her handbag; the object is a small brown box.

Vivien: I had to get through a lot of trouble to get this. Now where is the money you promised?
Cletus Kassady: Ah here it is my dear just as promised.

He reaches into his pocket and takes out $200 and hands it to her.

Vivien: Only $200, I need more then, how do you expect me to pay the rent and bills with this kind of money.

Suddenly he grabs her by the collar.

Cletus Kassady: You think that you are the only person who has got problems, I am a ****ing wanted man on the ran. So I suggest you be happy with what you are given. Now if you don’t mind I need I another one of those packages.

Vivien: No I won’t do it.

Suddenly he takes out a gun from his pocket and points it at her head.

Cletus Kassady: I am afraid you have no say in the matter. Do you want me to tell your father of what you have been doing recently?

Vivien suddenly turns around and groans.

Vivien: No.
Cletus Kassady: Good. Now I will be back in five days. Remember I was so close to pulling the trigger this time, next time I won’t be so patient.

Can I have some feedback for this scene please??? 😉

Originally posted by Scarecrow756
Here is the Carnage/Vivian Scene.

Fade In:
Vivien comes out of her hairdresser and walks into a deep dark alleyway. She is 25 years old; she has long black hair with yellow streams. She also has fairly dark skin. As she approaches the alleyway, a big huge man approaches her from behind her. He is wearing a sea blue t-shirt, he has orange hair and looks in bad shape.

Cletus Kassady: Have you got the package.
Vivien: Yes I have.
Cletus Kassady: Well get it then?

She suddenly takes the package out of her handbag; the object is a small brown box.

Vivien: I had to get through a lot of trouble to get this. Now where is the money you promised?
Cletus Kassady: Ah here it is my dear just as promised.

He reaches into his pocket and takes out $200 and hands it to her.

Vivien: Only $200, I need more then, how do you expect me to pay the rent and bills with this kind of money.

Suddenly he grabs her by the collar.

Cletus Kassady: You think that you are the only person who has got problems, I am a ****ing wanted man on the ran. So I suggest you be happy with what you are given. Now if you don’t mind I need I another one of those packages.

Vivien: No I won’t do it.

Suddenly he takes out a gun from his pocket and points it at her head.

Cletus Kassady: I am afraid you have no say in the matter. Do you want me to tell your father of what you have been doing recently?

Vivien suddenly turns around and groans.

Vivien: No.
Cletus Kassady: Good. Now I will be back in five days. Remember I was so close to pulling the trigger this time, next time I won’t be so patient.

its great but yea cassady should be a little...different

Originally posted by Spideys Sister
Cass sounds to... [b]sane. Other than that it's great. [/B]

True but maybe he's tricking her 😉

A new drawing I did

Sauucy

Good drawings Dazzler, did you get my PM?

Yes I did and that was a very good radio show.Good work 😄

Did you get my PM about seeing the Dragonheart movie?

Thanks for the comment btw

Originally posted by Dazzler619
Yes I did and that was a very good radio show.Good work 😄

Did you get my PM about seeing the Dragonheart movie?

Thanks for the comment btw

Yes I did, I am about to PM you my foreword on the radio show.

K thanks

Originally posted by Dazzler619
K thanks

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