A poem for my mother

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A poem for my mother

My Mother
I love you mom more then life itself
And I know you believe that's true
And now that you are gone I am feeling blue
You gave me life and raised me too
And that's just another reason why I love you
We were there for each other through thick
And thin rain or shine and I wish you
Would of stayed with me until the end of
Time,But then god saw you getting tired and
Wanted to take your pain away,and then he
Took you away from us on a saturday,
I remember it so well as if it was just
Yesterday,We were leaving to be going out to
Spend the day together when you passed away,
You fill the big empty spot
In my heart for that will stay with me so we
Will never really part.You will always be
Loved and missed mom with all my heart.

Wow, awesome poem, yet so sad, i almost cried sad

This thread and the poem and the poll...they...they don't work out for me.

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woow very nice 🙂

It is nice to write a sincere words for people who you love them Such as your parents. Whatever the life be harsh you can change it to better dear .

And remember there is also MANY People who care about you ..is not only your mother but I will be happy if you accept me as new sister dear .

we wait more MariaB

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silver heart

its very nice

Loved the enjambments and stuff. Very cool, though I am a bit confused about the poll.