Thank you for commenting.
im not trying to mimick anyones style, i just write how i feel like it.
i can only write when im, i dont want to use this word but, "inspired".
actually, i have thrown away a lot of my stuff in the past, but i cant really care, i think ive gotten better, at least a little, since then.
He came and went.
He came into my life like a solar flair,
bursting poisonous radiation of love
that made me rip out my hair.
a bright fiery flash against dark space,
his energy bringing power and life
a warmth to my cold pale face.
he left my life like a solar flair,
his energy spent, a silent star,
i never thought i could care.
his life was short, his run was brief,
he taught me courage and love,
his last was a sigh of relief.
he left my life like a solar flair,
his energy spent, a silent star,
i just thought i should share.
I'm working on an epic at the moment, simply for my own enjoyment and of course to put it up on this site. I don't want to put it up until it is done and I am sure it is perfect.
I am telling you this now because I haven't contributed anything in a long while, and I may not for a long while now because both of my grandad and my gramma are in the hospital and I don't feel like writing because of this. I am sorry.
this next one was just practice, not a poem in the normal sense...
The stars glisten like dew covered flowers in a field of sapphire, the setting sun paints the ocean foam clouds in fire. Waiting on the warm sand for someone who will not come. Time flows like a cyclone, summer, fall, winter, spring... by day the sun warms me, by night the stars comfort me, the moon sadly watches on. I wait and watch the ocean as it waves hello. Perhaps it is beckoning me, as lonely as I. It recedes rejected, but returns, always.
Fate passed me by as the seasons had, I took that moment and abandoned mortality. The moon shyly retreated in the sky, leaving me and the Earth behind. The ocean retired, ceasing its perpetual heartbroken cycle, never to return. The stars endlessly blink, yet over time each closed its eye in turn, forever. And night is silence, I wait alone. The Earth turns searching for the light of a sun.