Under The Sea

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Swirly Girl Antediluvian

Under The Sea

U PLAY AS AN OCIPUS, CUTTYFISH OR SWUID IN THIS EPIC BATTLE OF LOVE, DEATH, VIOLENCE, TORTURE AND CLICHES.

CHOOSE YOUR CLASS:

CUTTYFISH - GOOD SPEED AND ALL ROUNDER

OCIPUS - GOOD STRENGTH, BUT POOR SPEED

SWUID - AGILE, YET WEAK

At god The Terminator

Is this even approved? And not trying to be an ass but, you have sucky spelling.

Here are some tips:

1) Get this thing approved but mostly it won't it needs plot
Where
when
how
why
and who

2) Use a dictionary for god sakes!! Or atleast try to use a good grammer.

3) Learn more about how to rp. Pm Ush he'll tell you how maybe he'll teach you how too.

JacopeX Restricted

Originally posted by At god
Is this even approved? And not trying to be an ass but, you have sucky spelling.

Here are some tips:

1) Get this thing approved but mostly it won't it needs plot
Where
when
how
why
and who

2) Use a dictionary for god sakes!! Or atleast try to use a good grammer.

3) Learn more about how to rp. Pm Ush he'll tell you how maybe he'll teach you how too.

😆 Agreed

~B@ckB0n3~ Dickroll'd.

Originally posted by At god
Is this even approved? And not trying to be an ass but, you have sucky spelling.

Here are some tips:

1) Get this thing approved but mostly it won't it needs plot
Where
when
how
why
and who

2) Use a dictionary for god sakes!! Or atleast try to use a good grammer.

3) Learn more about how to rp. Pm Ush he'll tell you how maybe he'll teach you how too.

Number 3 you don't need. By the looks of this, she's a good RPer, just needs plot ideas and spelling and grammer. 😬