Potc 6

Started by shannstar797 pages

Originally posted by mmoviejunkie
jackson christopher depp?
using johnny's middle name are we shannstar?

great job you guys!

yep hehehe couldnt help myself 🙂

great job everybody!!
This is turning into a GREAT story

Isabella awakens to find herslf in a place she has never seen before, shes scared, cold, wet, and has a pounding head ache, she thinks to herself, she knows exactly whats happend, shes been kidnapped for the Rose Compass necklace, she reaches down to her chest only to find the necklace is gone
Captian Dasani: you wont be finding your necklace if what you be looking for young missy
Isabella : (the voice startles her she didnt know anyone else was in the room) why are you keeping me her, you have the necklace, why cant you take me back to shore?
Captian Dasani: mmmm lets just say its matter or leaverage (smiles at her and walks out of the room, leaves her alone and scared
Isabella: they will come for me!!!
Captain Dasani: (walking out the door)Yes I know dear, thast all part of the plan

ABoard the Pearl
ABi: Alex I am so worried, what it
Alex: try not to fret dear, were going to do everything we can
Norrington: yes Abi, try and relax I know its hard. you both do know how to handle a sword right?

Inside the Captain's cabin
Jack and Liz are reviewing charts and trying to figure what their next move is, Jackson stares out a port hole
Jackson: father! tell me something, how much do you know about this Rose treasure?
Jack: son, its the trasure of Captain Morgan, every Pirate in these waters has at some point been on a quest to find it, as far as I know we were the only ones sucessfull of finding said traesure, once the tresure was opened, it can never be reopened without the pair of compass rose necklaces that we took from the treasure years ago: Abi has one, and she gave the other to Isabella, One is useless with out the other
Liz: so they will be comming after ABi as well
Jack: Aye, unless they do not know about the second necklace
Jackson: alright so where do we start, where are we heading, to the treausre sight right?
Jack: thats the problem, rememeber the compass I traded for you 6 years ago, we must have that to find the treasure
Jackson: its hopless then
Jack: No son nothing is ever hopless, we will kind it, and rescue Isabella
Liz: keep your head up son, your father knows what he is doing I assure you(smiles at Jack)
Jackson: lets hope so, some one I care deeply about is in danger
Walks out the door onto the Deck of the Peal
Jack and Liz stare at the door as it closes behind jackson
Jack: well, now that we know how he feels, back to work

ooohhh....good stuff....man it's gonna be a pain in the ass getting her back...lol

Originally posted by sailorleo
ooohhh....good stuff....man it's gonna be a pain in the ass getting her back...lol

hehehe true that, but we can do it 🙂

I'm so loving this I'm thinking of working up my courage and writing something after a few more scenes...and surfchikpir8fan? don't say that u don't write good cause you totally do...it's really great ALL OH YOU GUYS

Originally posted by tee_pirategirl
I'm so loving this I'm thinking of working up my courage and writing something after a few more scenes...and surfchikpir8fan? don't say that u don't write good cause you totally do...it's really great ALL OH YOU GUYS

Thanks glad u like it, feel free to write whenever!! put yourtwist on it go ahead!!
😄

It is night time on Dasani's ship, Isabella is locked in the captains office. She scurries about the room to find something that could help her escape. She finds nothing and when she is about to give up she spies sometihng out of the corner of her eye. It is a compass. The compass, but Isabella doesn't know that. She picks it up and opens it.

Bella: This doesn't point north! What type of compass is this? *she looks at the bottom and notices it's been engraved JS.* Jaskson? *she thinks for a moment and blushes* NO! Isabella don't be stupid, this can't be his...wait...the captain, captain sparrow, this must belong to him. I wonder if he needs it. She walks over to the port hole which is dangerously close to the water. She runs back to the desk and breaks apart a chair using its back to hold the compass in the ocean. She lets it free and prays that it returns to its master

OOOHHH GOOD STUFF GIRL
love it

the next morning aboard the pearl Jackson is up looking out into the water, he hasent slept all night, Jack and liz are still frantically looking over charts
Liz: Jack I hate to say this but I think this may be hopeless, with out the compass we are never going to find the treasure
Jack: I know luv, we just have to keep trying to find a way
all of a sudden we hear Jackson yelling: MOM/ DAD COME QUICK
Jack and Liz run out of the captains cabin and see Jackson frantically trying to reach into the water
Jack: son, what re you doing
Jackson: there is something in the water,
Jack: here use this, hands him a sort of net to help him pull up the object
everyone including Abi, Norrington, Alex, and Liz are looking over the boat to see whats happening, just as jackson puts the net under the compass we see the hadd of a mermaid pop up, she tries to grab the compass but she is too late Jackson has it aboard the ship: everyone is startled by this mermaid and jumps back from the side of the boat
making sure jackson is ok, liz looks inside the net
Liz: JACK, LOOK
Jack: Oh my Lord
Liz: Jackson, do you know what this is, its the compass we need to find the treasure site
jack: how in the world did it get here, back to us, after all this time
and what the hell was that thing trying to grab it in the water ?
Jackson: That was a member of Captain dasani's crew she kidnapped me 6 years ago while swimming, and I am certain she is who kidnapped Bella
Abi: Captain, we must set said for that island with all haste
Jack: no need to worry dear, Liz and I are already on it

Jackson stands at the side ofthe pearl looking out into the water
talking out loud, but to himself,
Were comming Isabella, I know you sent the compass on a journey to find us, and now were comming for you

Aboard Dasani's ship Isabella still locked it the room, hears the sound of someone entering the room
Captain Dasani: whats going on dearie
Isabell: Please address me as Miss Norrington, not dearie
Dasani: mmm I wont be stain long missy, just came in for my compass
Bella's eyes get real big and she realizes he left the door open behid him, he turns his back to her and begins looking for his compass, he starts to frantically look for it, he turns quickly to ask her
Dasain: you girl, where is me compass
Only to find Isabella is gone

Isabella runs towards the top of the ship nearly making it before she is knocked unconscious by a member of the crew. Dasani quickly follows

Dasani: Good work *he grabes her and pulls her back to his cabin and chains her up...hours later she wakes up*

Isabella: Damn

Dasani: *pulls out his cutlass and poises it at her throat* What did you do with my compass dearie

Isabella: *spits on him*

Dasani: I'm only going to ask nicely once more. WHAT DID YOU DO WITH MY COMPASS!

Isabella: I don't know what you're talking about sir *curtly* *dasani smacks her with the sword and she bleeds*

Dasani: You're in an extremely compromising position, my suggestion to you is than you do not do anything to compromise yourself anymore

Isabella: Meaning what, CAPTAIN.

Dasani: Meaning I can do just about what I damn well please, so what do you think about telling me what you did with my compass! *he gets up and prepares to leave* you have one hour before i make you suffer a most unprecidented fate. *he leaves*

LOVE IT
I amleaving work It will have to be a cliffhanger unless anyone else wants to take a shot?
Tee Pirate girl
now is your chance🙂

soo pirate girl...go ahead and write if you want to

ok thanks I think I'll have a go with it....
in jack's cabin: jack- oh I MISSED this compass...I mean it was silly how that compass pointed north eh?
lizzie and jack are both working on some charts..they've already pointed out the heading to gibbs and now they're trying to find out WHERE they're exactly headed to.
lizie nodds in jack's response.
jack-this don't seem right...why's dasani doing around in a circle? he's starting at one point and ending at the same..what could tha mean?
lizzie-are you sure that's what you want most?
jack-what I want most is jackson's happiness and what makes him happy is belle so we will conclude that what I want most is finding and or saving miss norrington.
liz nodds agian as jackson comes in the cabin.
jackson-any luck?
lizzie-well we have no trouble FINDING them but it's a bit fishy that they're only going around in a circle instead of heading for the treasure...maybe we should wait to..
jackson-I'm not waiting..belle's in danger I'm SURE she sent the compass to us and for that she is in even more danger savvy?
lizzie- you're like your dad now aren't you? not very patient eh?but we do that we'll have to fight them...
jackson-not if we have the proper leverage.
at that liz and jack both chuckle.
jack-like father like son.very well than set out to find them.
jackson-than what?
jack smiles devilishly-it requires all of you to trust me..I have a plan!
liz and jackson-don't you always?

back in dasani's ship
capt'n-your time's running out missy! you better talk before i loose me temper or I'll...
belle-or you'll what? you still need me you can't hurt me..
capt'n-why can't I?
belle smiles knowingly- I know more than you think I do... you still need me and you know it...so it's me who has the upper hand not you..you must offer me a bargain which I can't refuse in exchanfe for the location of your preciouse compass.
capt'n-is tha so? well what about your freedom?first of all you don't have the compass with you so...
belle cuts him off_but I know where it is!
capt'n-very well..your freedom for my compass.
belle-my freedom AND the rose compass for your compass.
capt'n-now that's just pushing your luck ain't it?
belle-maybe...maybe not!

Dasani: I think it is, you need to be put in your place, very dangerous thing for a women to not know where her place is in this world. *he gets dangerously close to her face smelling her hair Bella tries to swat him away but she can't, she gets nervous He looks at her with hungry eyes* I smell fear *cocky* *he jerks her head back and forcefully kisses her. He throws her on the bed, he stands up and leaves*

Belle: *screams, then begins to cry*

on the pearl

Jacks: *passes* She's in danger i know it...*he sighs* Dammit father, can't we move this any faster? *he shouts*

Jack: Son, were going as fast as possible, the Pearl is the fastest in the Caribbean you know
Jackson walks over to the edge of the railing, and sees something in the distance:
Jackson: DAD Come quick
Jack runs over
Jackson: whats that over there
Jack pulls out his spy glass, takes a look a nd confims
thats Dasanis ship, were cathing up
Jackson: ok lets get a plan of action together: I go aboard and find Isabella, you mom and Mr Norrington can fight off the crew and Captain Dasani: (Jackson pauses because he knows his father wont want him to go aboard Captain Dasani's ship for fear he may be hurt)
Jack: I think thast a great plan son, Ill have your back the whole way, you can count on me
Jackson: (smiles, and realizes its happened, his father trust him to be a man ): alright then to the long boat

Inside dasani's cabin
Isabella frantically crying, she looks up and realizes she MUST find a way out of here, there must be a way, she canntot let this man strip of her of her innocence, because he will if something dosent happen soon
Isabella not knowing the pearl is catching up begins to look for a way out
suddenly the door open and two men walkin
Pirate 1 : its time missy
Pirate 2 :come along dear we dont have allday
Belle: where we going?
Cpatian Dasain walks in behind them: oh your going to open this treasure with you compass necklace
isabella starts to fret a bit because she knows she cannot open the treasure with out both necklaces and her monther has the other one
Isabella: follows without saying a word

Jack:It looks like they have taken to their long boat we must be here at the treasure site, were going to need ABi to come along
Abi: with pleasure Captain

(sits down in the long boat with the look of readiness in her eyes
Jak Rows the boat to the shore line, every one gets off with their swords and weapons
Liz: I sure hope I remember how to do this Its been so long Jack
Jack: darling your a pirate, it will all come back to you believe me: be carefull I know you can hold your own but be carefull anyway
Liz: you know I will
Jack leads everyone into a long cave at the mercy of his ever so trusted compass, there is loud commotion at the end of the cave, we see Captain Dasani and his crew, we pan to the left and see isabella dressed like a princess sitting in a throne with the look of fear in her eyes
Captian Dasani: when this treasure is opened, we will live like kings and Miss isabella you will be my queen
Jackson: (looks at jack,) dad we have to do something,NOW
jack : son you know me were waiting for the opportune moment

Captain dasani: bring forth the Necklace
Isabella gets up and takes the Neclace to Captain dasain
Captian dasani forcfully grabs the neclace and places it in its rightfull place, noticing it dosent fit like it should,and the treasure does not open
Captain dasani: whats going on here, whats the meaning of this, youve had your chance missy, its time you talk or die you choose
I will kill you here and NOW if you don not explain
The entire crew draws their swords on Isabella, Captain Dasani grabs he by the throat, his clench gets tighter and tighter , she cant breathe

Jackson: is this the moment?????????????
Jack: YES
Just then we see ABi running towards Captain dasani
Abi: STOP
captain Dasani drops his hold on Isabella and she falls to the ground motionless and lifeless

Abi: She's not the one you want! It's me *runs up to the motionless bella* It's me..*sobs* *Dasani coldheartedly yanks off the necklace of Abi and tries hers on the key hole when it doesn't work he gets more angry and slaps her*

Dasani: Lyin' wench! Your's doesn't work either

Abi: *through tears* put them together *dasani is confused at this and inspects both of the necklaces, finally he notices that they interlock, he locks them and tries on the key once more, tihs time it does work and the treasure is revealed showing a reiculous amount f gold. he doesn't have much time to enjoy it before Jackson and Alex tackle him to the ground*

the struggle between Alex, jackson and Captain dasani is brutal, Liz is in the corner fighting a few pirates
Liz: ahhhh No need to worry if sword fighting ever left my blood, its alawys been here cant you tell(she asks the Pirate shes fighting just as she stabs the sword through his belly :Beat that says Liz
ABi rushes over to a lifeless Isabella lying on the ground, she tries t awaken her but its no good, nothing happens ABi begins to sob uncontrollably
jack and Norrington are fighting pirates and are winning, jack look overto see Liz kicking butt gives a sparrow grin and then rushes to help Jackson and Alex with Captain Dasani.
Jackson: Give up old man, your not going to win
dasani, I am not aye: at that moment he stabs alex and alex falls to the ground
jackson: you bastard, I am going to kill you, youve reeked havoch on the people Ilove for too long
Dasain: looks like you have no weapon, so how do you plan on killing me son, holds up the sword about to peirce it into jackson's heart
Liz NO
Jackson: Do not call me son, I am not your son
Jack steps in and stabs dasani from behind, dasani falls to the ground bleeding,dying
Jack: no old man, hes MY son
Jackson and Jack embrace in a hug,
Jack: I told you Id have you back son, I meant it
Jackson: where is she
Jack: points to Isabella on the grounds with ABi lying over her montionless body
Jackson: NOOOOO, runs over to where she is, please Belle, wake up, please,
ABi: I cant believe this we were too late, she takes the two rose compass necklaces that had become innertwinned and placed them around Bell's neck, Jackson reaches down and kisses her ever so lightlly
I love you he says softly
everyone is watching: Liz is crying and in Jacks arms, Alex is ok, Norrinton has gotten him up off the ground and has stopped the Bleeding from his wound
Jack: I am so sorry son
jackson: please , a tear falls from his cheek and hits the two necklaces
isabellas eyes open slowley
Isabella: why is eveyone crying
jackson: looking surprised grabs her andkisses her
Abi: Thank God
jackson: looks around eveyone is staring at them: would you all mind giving up a bit of privacy: jack looks disapointed but turns around
Isabella: you came after me, just like you promised
jackson: I promised Id not let anything happen to you
Belle: I love you jackson
jackson: I love you too (embrace in a kiss and turn leave)
everyone is still watching and has a look of love on their faces
Jackson: you guys come one, lets go
everyone begins towalk out of the cave
Liz: WAIT
Jack: what luv
liz: well the treasure, what do we do with it
Jack: has a eveil sparrow grin, are you thinking what I am thinking luv
Liz: you know I am

Jack: Back to the Pearl

On the pearl the crew is celebrating with their new treasure, having a grand ole time drinking and hooting and hollering. Jack is teaching Jackson and Isabella how to twirl coins between your fingers. out of the corner of her eye Liz also watches trying to master the technique. Jacky and Norrington are flirting playfully in the corner. Jacky is very drunk.

Jacky: You know whatsh EIRONNIK (ironic) about dish (this) ? Ish dat Jackshon and Bur-rella are cousins....*she laughs and takes a drink. Isabella hears thins and thinks a moment and recoils in horror*

Isabella: Excuss me sirs, I have to excuse myself *she uns to the outside to get a bit of fresh air. Jackson looks concernd and Elizabeth takes Isabella's place at the table

Liz: *a little smashed* LOOK JACK! I Can do it! *she tries twirling the coin it makes it past the first two fingers than falls into Jack's lap, giggling she picks it up* Sorry love,

Jack: No, feel free to do that again mate, *he takes a swig with rum while twirling the coin in his other hand*