My Other Newest Song Death Be My Name

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My Other Newest Song Death Be My Name

Hi guys, I wrote these lyrics for this new song, could you please give feedback, its not perfect but comments would be nice. 😄 It is supposed to be a power metal song.

Death Be My Name by Scarecrow756

Intro:
Hello girl I am here to take you away, your time has come; your sins and good deeds have been measured now I must take you to Hell for your sinning against others. Don’t know who I am then let me tell you.

Chorus
Let me introduce my self Death Be My Name Ladies and Gentlemen, no I am not what see on TV kiddies’ infact I am not what you think I look like. I am not made up of bone and I don’t wear a black cloak. You may not be able to see me at all but just like the silent slasher Jason Voorhees I am always there watching you. I hear you fear the Devil but the real person you tremble in fear to is me because I judge your sins as well as good deeds. So if are thinking of committing a sin just remember I be counting it.

Verse One
Never wanted to become this way but unusual circumstances brought be to where I am today. I was once happy carefree and young. I had a girlfriend and was about to get married until that fatal day. While I out on my motor bike this stud started taking the piss, angry like I was often I took him on in a race. But I guess my ignorance as well as the excess alcohol got to my head. I was involved in a full on collision with his bike. The accident left me paralysed from the neck down.

Chorus
Let me introduce my self Death Be My Name Ladies and Gentlemen, no I am not what see on TV kiddies’ infact I am not what you think I look like. I am not made up of bone and I don’t wear a black cloak. You may not be able to see me at all but just like the silent slasher Jason Voorhees I am always there watching you. I hear you fear the Devil but the real person you tremble in fear to is me because I judge your sins as well as good deeds. So if are thinking of committing a sin just remember I be counting it.

Verse Two
As the months passed my condition worsened eventually my girlfriend left me because of my disabilities. I even went into a coma due to the damage done to the brain. The days passed, weeks turned into months and soon when I was in darkest hour there was a light at the end of the tunnel but from the most unlikely person imaginable.

Chorus
Let me introduce my self Death Be My Name Ladies and Gentlemen, no I am not what see on TV kiddies’ infact I am not what you think I look like. I am not made up of bone and I don’t wear a black cloak. You may not be able to see me at all but just like the silent slasher Jason Voorhees I am always there watching you. I hear you fear the Devil but the real person you tremble in fear to is me because I judge your sins as well as good deeds. So if are thinking of committing a sin just remember I be counting it.

Verse Three
Even in my comer state he was able to contact me, one night in one of my dreams I prayed to him for a pact, no it was the not God because he never answered my ****ing pleases. But instead it was the Devil. I made a deal with him, I asked to be cured and exchange I had to serve him for all eternity as well as pledge my soul for eternal damnation. Eventually I agreed and now I caring out his bidding.

Chorus
Let me introduce my self Death Be My Name Ladies and Gentlemen, no I am not what see on TV kiddies’ infact I am not what you think I look like. I am not made up of bone and I don’t wear a black cloak. You may not be able to see me at all but just like the silent slasher Jason Voorhees I am always there watching you. I hear you fear the Devil but the real person you tremble in fear to is me because I judge your sins as well as good deeds. So if are thinking of committing a sin just remember I be counting it.

Verse Four
With my new body I served the Devil, all he asked was for me to do was to judge the souls of the recently deceased and ship them of to hell if their sins outweighed their good deeds. This was the pact that he and God had; I was just the deliver of souls.
As well as the new body the prince of darkness gave me his women and a chance visit the earth sometimes.

Chorus
Let me introduce my self Death Be My Name Ladies and Gentlemen, no I am not what see on TV kiddies’ infact I am not what you think I look like. I am not made up of bone and I don’t wear a black cloak. You may not be able to see me at all but just like the silent slasher Jason Voorhees I am always there watching you. I hear you fear the Devil but the real person you tremble in fear to is me because I judge your sins as well as good deeds. So if are thinking of committing a sin just remember I be counting it.

Verse Five
This is my life now, there is no going back I sold my soul to the devil long ago, I can’t go back. The memories of my previous life seem to be fading every second, I am becoming something more then just human, I am the messenger, the deliver of souls. So remember all this sin you do will land you an eternity in hell just like me so don’t go down the same path as me, go down the path of righteous this is for your own good, I am trying to save you.

Chorus
Let me introduce my self Death Be My Name Ladies and Gentlemen, no I am not what see on TV kiddies’ infact I am not what you think I look like. I am not made up of bone and I don’t wear a black cloak. You may not be able to see me at all but just like the silent slasher Jason Voorhees I am always there watching you. I hear you fear the Devil but the real person you tremble in fear to is me because I judge your sins as well as good deeds. So if are thinking of committing a sin just remember I be counting it.

No comments guys!!!!!!!!! 😕

It's too ****ing long.

It's not very good either, you're trying way too hard.

Originally posted by el_barto
It's too ****ing long.

It's not very good either, you're trying way too hard.

Ouch

Originally posted by Scarecrow756
Hi guys, I wrote these lyrics for this new song, could you please give feedback, its not perfect but comments would be nice. 😄 It is supposed to be a power metal song.

Death Be My Name by Scarecrow756

Intro:
Hello girl I am here to take you away, your time has come; your sins and good deeds have been measured now I must take you to Hell for your sinning against others. Don’t know who I am then let me tell you.

Chorus
Let me introduce my self Death Be My Name Ladies and Gentlemen, no I am not what see on TV kiddies’ infact I am not what you think I look like. I am not made up of bone and I don’t wear a black cloak. You may not be able to see me at all but just like the silent slasher Jason Voorhees I am always there watching you. I hear you fear the Devil but the real person you tremble in fear to is me because I judge your sins as well as good deeds. So if are thinking of committing a sin just remember I be counting it.

Verse One
Never wanted to become this way but unusual circumstances brought be to where I am today. I was once happy carefree and young. I had a girlfriend and was about to get married until that fatal day. While I out on my motor bike this stud started taking the piss, angry like I was often I took him on in a race. But I guess my ignorance as well as the excess alcohol got to my head. I was involved in a full on collision with his bike. The accident left me paralysed from the neck down.

Chorus
Let me introduce my self Death Be My Name Ladies and Gentlemen, no I am not what see on TV kiddies’ infact I am not what you think I look like. I am not made up of bone and I don’t wear a black cloak. You may not be able to see me at all but just like the silent slasher Jason Voorhees I am always there watching you. I hear you fear the Devil but the real person you tremble in fear to is me because I judge your sins as well as good deeds. So if are thinking of committing a sin just remember I be counting it.

Verse Two
As the months passed my condition worsened eventually my girlfriend left me because of my disabilities. I even went into a coma due to the damage done to the brain. The days passed, weeks turned into months and soon when I was in darkest hour there was a light at the end of the tunnel but from the most unlikely person imaginable.

Chorus
Let me introduce my self Death Be My Name Ladies and Gentlemen, no I am not what see on TV kiddies’ infact I am not what you think I look like. I am not made up of bone and I don’t wear a black cloak. You may not be able to see me at all but just like the silent slasher Jason Voorhees I am always there watching you. I hear you fear the Devil but the real person you tremble in fear to is me because I judge your sins as well as good deeds. So if are thinking of committing a sin just remember I be counting it.

Verse Three
Even in my comer state he was able to contact me, one night in one of my dreams I prayed to him for a pact, no it was the not God because he never answered my ****ing pleases. But instead it was the Devil. I made a deal with him, I asked to be cured and exchange I had to serve him for all eternity as well as pledge my soul for eternal damnation. Eventually I agreed and now I caring out his bidding.

Chorus
Let me introduce my self Death Be My Name Ladies and Gentlemen, no I am not what see on TV kiddies’ infact I am not what you think I look like. I am not made up of bone and I don’t wear a black cloak. You may not be able to see me at all but just like the silent slasher Jason Voorhees I am always there watching you. I hear you fear the Devil but the real person you tremble in fear to is me because I judge your sins as well as good deeds. So if are thinking of committing a sin just remember I be counting it.

Verse Four
With my new body I served the Devil, all he asked was for me to do was to judge the souls of the recently deceased and ship them of to hell if their sins outweighed their good deeds. This was the pact that he and God had; I was just the deliver of souls.
As well as the new body the prince of darkness gave me his women and a chance visit the earth sometimes.

Chorus
Let me introduce my self Death Be My Name Ladies and Gentlemen, no I am not what see on TV kiddies’ infact I am not what you think I look like. I am not made up of bone and I don’t wear a black cloak. You may not be able to see me at all but just like the silent slasher Jason Voorhees I am always there watching you. I hear you fear the Devil but the real person you tremble in fear to is me because I judge your sins as well as good deeds. So if are thinking of committing a sin just remember I be counting it.

Verse Five
This is my life now, there is no going back I sold my soul to the devil long ago, I can’t go back. The memories of my previous life seem to be fading every second, I am becoming something more then just human, I am the messenger, the deliver of souls. So remember all this sin you do will land you an eternity in hell just like me so don’t go down the same path as me, go down the path of righteous this is for your own good, I am trying to save you.

Chorus
Let me introduce my self Death Be My Name Ladies and Gentlemen, no I am not what see on TV kiddies’ infact I am not what you think I look like. I am not made up of bone and I don’t wear a black cloak. You may not be able to see me at all but just like the silent slasher Jason Voorhees I am always there watching you. I hear you fear the Devil but the real person you tremble in fear to is me because I judge your sins as well as good deeds. So if are thinking of committing a sin just remember I be counting it.

i like long songs.. but maybe you should make the text a little simpler? but then again its up to you. 😮‍💨

The lyrics are very flat. It's like your talking about life to a friend on a Saturday night.

''As the months passed my condition worsened eventually my girlfriend left me because of my disabilities. I even went into a coma due to the damage done to the brain.''?

Come on. I mean. Come on.

here is a song with lyrics sounds like the kind of lyrics it seems you want to make. just so that you can compare. with blind guardian ofcourse.

The Bard's Song - In The Forest

Now you all know
The bards and their songs
When hours have gone by
I'll close my eyes
In a world far away
We may meet again
But now hear my song
About the dawn of the night
Let's sing the bards' song

Tomorrow will take us away
Far from home
No one will ever know our names
But the bards' songs will remain
Tomorrow will take it away
The fear of today
It will be gone
Due to our magic songs

There's only one song
Left in my mind
Tales of a brave man
Who lived far from here
Now the bard songs are over
And it's time to leave
No one should ask you for the name
Of the one
Who tells the story

Tomorrow will take us away
Far from home
No one will ever know our names
But the bards' songs will remain
Tomorrow all will be known
And you're not alone
So don't be afraid
In the dark and cold
'Cause the bards' songs will remain
They all will remain

In my thoughts and in my dreams
They're always in my mind
These songs of hobbits, dwarves and men
And elves
Come close your eyes
You can see them too