I just made a character, woopie! Look at him go!

Started by long pig7 pages

I just made a character, woopie! Look at him go!

So, out of nowhere, I got an idea for a character. He's powered by a tiny blackhole in the middle of his chest!

It affords him weird compel/repel powers, very small time/reality manipulation powers, worm hole portals, matter containment and flight.

To make him vulnerable, he's not going to be superhuman durability, he will have the ability to create shields, but they won't be uber powerful. He'll also be vulnerable to mental attacks.

Oh, I don't know what to name the bastard, so someone help me....and yes, the artwork is modified Solar.

hmmm......

HoleInChestMan!

😐 bieng serious though?
um....i like Nictitate (it's another Word for blink) or Rebuff (another word for Repel)

Not bad...you can call him Singularity (assuming there isn't already a guy like that out there).

I like the simplicity of his appearance; I'm very partial to characters whose looks are natural, ie, not a costume. But change his color: not brown, brown is earthy (not cosmic) and it's a dull vibe.

It would also be cool if that insignia on his chest was dynamic not static.

Also, unless that black hole is subatomic, this guy's gonna weigh more than a mountain.

jerry

Originally posted by Mindship
Not bad...you can call him Singularity (assuming there isn't already a guy like that out there).

I like the simplicity of his appearance; I'm very partial to characters whose looks are natural, ie, not a costume. But change his color: not brown, brown is earthy (not cosmic) and it's a dull vibe.

It would also be cool if that insignia on his chest was dynamic not static.

Also, unless that black hole is subatomic, this guy's gonna weigh more than a mountain.

jerry

that's very true...so he should have mastery of gravity, so he won't crush things as he walks

Originally posted by NiñoAraña
that's very true...so he should have mastery of gravity, so he won't crush things as he walks

Nah , just make it so he hovers about an inch off the ground. Then when he's fighting and actually hit's someone they really feel the weight of the punch.

look here for more ideas:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Black_hole

Originally posted by NiñoAraña
i like Nictitate

That makes him sound like a tobacco addict.

However, the character is pretty cool. I actually like the brown-ish colors. The only odd part is how it contrasts with the black hole. Also, perhaps there should be a tad more then just borwn with a black dot in the middle... but thats all your decision.

Now for a question...

How would the black hole be contained in his chest? Would ait be a pocket-dimension sort of mumbo jumbo? Makes me think of Abyss...

Re: I just made a character, woopie! Look at him go!

Originally posted by long pig

So, out of nowhere, I got an idea for a character. He's powered by a tiny blackhole in the middle of his chest!

It affords him weird compel/repel powers, very small time/reality manipulation powers, worm hole portals, matter containment and flight.

To make him vulnerable, he's not going to be superhuman durability, he will have the ability to create shields, but they won't be uber powerful. He'll also be vulnerable to mental attacks.

Oh, I don't know what to name the bastard, so someone help me....and yes, the artwork is modified Solar.

Well done.... you just "invented" Graviton!

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Re: Re: I just made a character, woopie! Look at him go!

Originally posted by Scoobless
Well done.... you just "invented" Graviton!

😛

Aww... come on give the guy a break! He, like myself, does not about every single comic character ever created! I like to think that guy that can switch places with anyone would be kind of weird. Or what about the power to "static cling" any part of your body to any surface? I don't know I like thinking of weird powers, not necessarily huge powerful stuff...

Can he suck folks into his chest with his super powers now!

Originally posted by Soleran
Can he suck folks into his chest with his super powers now!

Didn't that happen in a Justice League cartoon? a guy had a black hole or something stuck in his chest and it kept swallowing everything.... it was that episode that featured Booster Gold as the star

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This better?

I like the idea of him not touching the ground, kinda like how Black Adam refuses to touch the ground.

Originally posted by Scoobless
Didn't that happen in a Justice League cartoon? a guy had a black hole or something stuck in his chest and it kept swallowing everything.... it was that episode that featured Booster Gold as the star

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The fat black guy with the teleportation device in his stomach? A Flash villain I think.

Originally posted by Scoobless
Didn't that happen in a Justice League cartoon? a guy had a black hole or something stuck in his chest and it kept swallowing everything.... it was that episode that featured Booster Gold as the star

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I remember!

It was some random scientist, with some weird explanation that basically meant he would suck everything into his chest... and Booster Gold had to save everybody!

I think the episode was called 'The Greatest Story Never Told'

or something like that

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Originally posted by SpunkySmurph
I remember!

It was some random scientist, with some weird explanation that basically meant he would suck everything into his chest... and Booster Gold had to save everybody!

I think the episode was called 'The Greatest Story Never Told'

or something like that

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Yeah, and they had Mordru destroying the JL, but is beaten by....Elongated Man. 😐

Some names come to mind.. Vortrax, Vortex, or "First name" "Last Name" - " Alias".. like Vincent Vando the Vortex Man...lol

Ok, explain how, what, and when did he get the black hole in his chest? Can this guy can control the gravitational force he puts out? Black holes can't be seen, but they are detected by noting their gravitational effect on the stars and gas in a galaxy.

Also wouldnt he HAVE to have Superhuman Durabiility? So he doesnt get,, y'know... sucked inside out. 😐

Originally posted by Ethereal
Some names come to mind.. Vortrax, Vortex, or "First name" "Last Name" - " Alias".. like Vincent Vando the Vortex Man...lol

Ok, explain how, what, and when did he get the black hole in his chest? Can this guy can control the gravitational force he puts out? Black holes can't be seen, but they are detected by noting their gravitational effect on the stars and gas in a galaxy.


V-Tex? I'm not good at naming characters.

How he got his powers: I'll take the easy way and use the fact that no one knows what exactly is at the other side of a black hole. Well, this guy found out while in a space ship he was sucked into one and while in it, it radically altered his physiology to the point where he had basically a sub-atomic black hole inside himself. (Uh, help me out folks, trying to explain a black hole in a guy's chest is not the easiest thing to do.)

I'll try to explain his powers:
Since a tablespoon of the matter inside of a black hole would weigh 100tons, he can't have a black hole that size in him. Sub atomic like mindship said would be the only way and he'd still weigh a couple tons. I could see him using that mass control to give a good 75-100 ton punch.

He'd have complete gravitational control over himself and medium level gravity control over anything in, say, a 50 foot radius(I like the idea of him being physically unable to lay a foot on the ground. Maybe because it would disrupt his control over his fluctuating mass?).

He'd have low level time/reality bending ability in the same 50 foot radius (prince of Persia type thing. Black holes actually bend time and space around them, so it fits. He could slow down his own time making him seem matrix-fast). He can teleport with worm holes and suck massive quantities of matter and energy (black holes can pull in light) into his inner sub atomic black hole, but if he takes in too much, he'll be unable to control his mass and he'd implode.

That's all I have now, chime in and tell me how wrong I am. I can take it. 🙁

Originally posted by SpunkySmurph
Also wouldnt he HAVE to have Superhuman Durabiility? So he doesnt get,, y'know... sucked inside out. 😐

Well, yeah. His body's density/durability can grow with the amount of matter he takes in as well as just having superhuman durability. His control over his inner-black-hole is good enough that he wouldn't have to worry about being sucked inside out.

Call him.........

THE SPOT!

GASP!