Kats poetry corner

umm...... alright then. i really love poetry, but im really not that good at it. i read all these differant poems, and mine cant even compare lol 😂... but... oh well, here are just a few of mine, i didnt trash yet lol 🙂 please comment, good or bad, id just like the truth 😄

i wrote this forever ago: ermm

Shes gone

She walks alone
on down a road
never uttering a sound
she doesn't look back
only at the ground
she cries as she walks
her cares and feelings in her tears
that fall to the ground
her feet are torn and bleeding
from the rough road shes on
no one notices she's gone
her soul is ripped and broken
partly left behind
always hoping for the friend
she'd never find
she hopes to fly as she crumples to the ground
never uttering a single sound
as she slowly dies
she is alone on the
rugged path she's on
but i am afraid
that no one notices shes gone

heres another:

I trusted you
you turned your back
my whole world is shadowing black
you promised me you'd always care
you swore to me you'd always be there
but where are you now
as i cry alone
trying to find my lonely way home
my only companions are my deepest darkest fears
the hand that used to caress my face is now only tears
my tormented soul wreathes and screams
hoping for the end
my heart shatters
as i search for a long lost friend
i scream aloud in pain and fury
death glides along
i pray for it to hurry
what have i done to you thats so wrong
why cant we dance to just one last song
i lay down to rest for one last time
i begin to bleed from my body soul and mind
im shrouded by shadows of hate and dread
i gladly welcome death and the dead
i cry one last tear full of misery and pain
but to you all of this is only a game

and yet another lol:

Would you

Would you catch me if i fall
help me live if it lost it all
wipe my many tears away
Keep all my fears at bay
if i jumped off a building just to see if i could fly
would you try to stop me
or would u watch me die
if i held a gun to my head
would you pull it away
tell me to live just 1 more day
if i held a knife to my wrist
would u hold me close, and never let go
if i tried to die
would u stop me
or simply say good bye
if i loved you
would you love me to
or would you turn the other way
if i said i needed you, what would you say
i cry every night
as i think of you
i scream until it hurts
not knowing what else to do
im sorry for the pain ive caused
the hate you've felt
the love you've lost
and now im afraid i must say good bye
through this poetic note of suicide

like ive said b4, not very good, but please comment anyways lol 😊

okie dokie here are some more poems

Im sorry

Theres something i feel i need to say to you
something that before i just couldnt do
everynight i sob myself to sleep
no longer praying the lord my soul to keep
i put up these walls so people wont see me cry
everyday i wonder why
why did u have to go
and leave me here all alone
they said ur in my heart and soul
and watching over me
then tell me please
why do i hurt so badly
im racked with feelings of anger and guilt
as i realize you dying alone was all my fault
i should have stayed
yet i was the one who walked away
i left you there huddled over crying
little did i know that in a few hours you would be dying
as i slept soundly in my bed
the doctors told ur family that you were dead
when i learned what happened that night
i tried with all my might
to not show weakness to anyone
i left the house running through the rain
i would give anything to stop the pain
the rain that masked my tears
began to wash away my fears
i prayed to god to kill me now
i was no longer afraid, i didnt care how
i sat and cried alone outside
though i said nothing i was screaming in my mind
its all my fault that i couldnt save you
its all my fault i thought there was nothing i could do
i would give my life for yours
yet here i sit alive
writing out this poem
wiping the tears from my eyes
theres something i have to say to you
i say it from the bottom of my heart so you kno its true
this is something ive held inside for so long
but i kno if i dont say it, i would truly be wrong
im sorry
those are the words
i needed to say
but i also felt they needed to be heard

and another:

You held onto me
and said see my dear
look around
theres nothing to fear
but when will you see the dangers are all too real
these are the feelings of hate and pain i feel
im still afraid
you slowly begin to walk away
im all by myself, afraid and crying
baby i love you, but my heart its dying
i look around, im all alone
i truly thought that you were the one
i see how wrong that i have been
to even think that u were my friend
i thought we would last
just you and me
now i see how wrong that i could be
i look into your eyes
they glitter with tears
i look into your soul
i see your fears
you look away pretending nothings wrong
but baby i see hows its been all along
you hide your fears and insecurities
i see the truth hidden behind ur mask of hate and impurities
you show me indifferance and act like you dont care
but how would you feel if i wasnt there
if i off'ed myself tonight
would you be sad
or would you put up a fight
agaisnt ur feelings
ur anger and pain
if i left you alone
like you've done to me
would you miss me? tell me baby
please
i wish i could hold you
i care about you with all my heart and soul
with you around i feel whole
im picking up the peices of my shattered dreams
im holdin my life together just at the seams
id lose my grip on life but id miss you so
i promise you baby i wont let go
you told me this fear i hold inside
was just a figment of my mind
you told me all this pain i feel
that there was no way it could be real
its all real, but dont you see
this is exactly what you've done to me
these tears i cry are over you
because you told her this same shit too
you told her you cared
that she was the only one
baby i loved you
but whatever have fun

COOL! Nice work! Neat stuff this! Though I didn't really catch the rhythm on the one before the last 'I'm sorry' and couldn't you change the last line of the last poem? It's out of place with the rest of the it. Other than that it's great!

😱 wow.... thank you so much. I see wat you mean, ill work on changin that 😊 ... in the meantime, i wrote a couple more lol 😛

this one is very random lol but oh well

My best friend is the one winged angel sitting by my side
with the blackened soul
and a tainted mind
the blood red rain that falls from the sky
burns my skin and blinds my eyes
The fire that burns inside is a shadow of the demons that reside
in my very soul, and mind
and while i scream aloud in pain
i struggle with these ropes and chains
my eyes are covered i cannot see
my mouth is held shut, i cannot speak
release me from the lies that hold me back
and the hate that holds me down
i scream and bleed into the ground
im so afraid to learn the truth
yet more afraid to wonder
how i could be so stupid
as to make such a fatal blunder
ur lies have destroyed my heart and soul
never again shall i feel whole
these words i write in my own blood
pour out from within my feelings of hate and love
though i speak these words im afraid they're not heard
they're my feelings of guilt and pain
littered across the paths i take
are the bodies of the slain
once so alive and free
they were the hopers the dreamers the givers
the ones i once hoped to be
my future is dark
but my past is even darker
forever i shall bear a mark
showing where you hurt me so
as im swallowed by shadows of hate and fear
people scorn and look away from me
but when will you realize
i am what you caused me to be

and heres another.... its pretty dark tho

My final good-bye

I drop the gun
my hands are shaking
people are screaming
this earth is quaking
i blink the blood outta my eyes
all i hear now
is a few feeble cries
then screaming bursts forth blocking my mind
its so hard to think
tho i kno this screaming is mine
I turn to the cracked mirror
to see who i am
ive lost myself
was this all just a part of ur plan?
im covered in blood
tho this blood is not mine
i stand alone
no longer thinking of time
Your eyes glaze over
as you slowly let go
you collapse back
into the blood soaked snow
how could i have done this?
this monster isnt me
these tears fall down my face
as i no longer wish to see
you were the only one who cared
but i killed you to
i pulled the trigger
there was nothing
you could do
i pick up the gun
my battle is over
my demons have won
you said all that shit just to make yourself feel bigger
but here i stand alone, about to pull the trigger
i place the gun in my mouth
i shut my eyes tight
i shiver from the cold
so much blood was spilled tonight
i say my final good- byes
i no longer cry
its better if im gone
ill be forgotten before long
i pull the trigger and hear a loud noise
i wake up in my bed
it was just my mothers voice
i dont kno wat to do
im so afraid ill end up hurting you
theres only 1 way to protect the world from this monster that is me
just promise me baby that you wont cry
right before i pull the trigger
ill say my final good-byes

Hey Katz Love Your Poems They Are Soo Deep
~Sierra~

HEY GURL!!!!! 😱 .............. spank you berry much cutehug. OMG, since ur a member u should post sum of ur poems 😊 cause urs are so frickin kick ass 😛

Nice ones👆

Thank you hun sooo much cutehug

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
Thank you hun sooo much cutehug

Your welcome😄, you write good ones😄

Spankies, they arent that good tho lol...... ur poems are better.... u should really post them demonic 😊

Originally posted by Weeping Fairy
Spankies, they arent that good tho lol...... ur poems are better.... u should really post them demonic 😊

They are😛.......Nah, they aren't good😛........Nah, I'm too lazy, it's a drag to type them out😛

I must say, I thought I resided in dark! Nh, just kidding, some real talent here! Nice work!
I like the fact that the one before 'My Final Goodbye' was written in red, it really brings out the line "these words i write in my own blood". Cool.

Originally posted by Demonic Phoenix
They are😛.......Nah, they aren't good😛........Nah, I'm too lazy, it's a drag to type them out😛

nah 😛.......... THEY ARE GOOD 😱................ PLEASE DO!!!! they are sooooo good 😄

Originally posted by Immortality
I must say, I thought I resided in dark! Nh, just kidding, some real talent here! Nice work!
I like the fact that the one before 'My Final Goodbye' was written in red, it really brings out the line "these words i write in my own blood". Cool.

Thank you soo much!!! 😱

No problem. Keep 'em cumin

aiight, heres one i found today while cleanin out my desk. its pretty old, but its not too bad, but ill leave that up to u pimps to decide 😛

Release me

Never again we have said
yet our lies are shown by the number of dead
we have failed to hold true
to what we promised the world
to what we have promised ourselves
i say no
we cannot back down from the truths that we hold
i try to speak to warn you all
we have seen with our own eyes
the torture of fellow human beings
yet we stand silent
not a word is spoken
i try to shout
to speak out
but my mouth is covered
and my eyes held shut
release me from the bonds that hold me back
and the chains that hold me down
i scream and bleed into the ground
how long must we ignore the truth
families are dying cryig for help
we ignore their pleas
as they are tortured and killed
release me from the hatred, the fire, the death
release me from the bonds that hold me back
let me go, let me cry, let me save their lives
let me speak, and let me see
let me change the world let me leave

OMG that is freakin good

chyea right.... i like ur avvy *cough* monkey man *cough* lol jpjpjp 😛, i was gonna put a pic of my baby as my avvy, i was gonna put the one of him at the pep rally, but his hairs all over he place in that one 😂

It is and hes not a monkey and u should put that pic of justin as ur avvy

its not, but lance is a monkey lol, i will put that pic as my avvy h/o

but... in the meantime, i just wrote this one, i guess i was thinkin wat it would be like to be truly alone 😬

She fought

She fought against
those who scorned her
against those who cursed her
against those who tried to help
against her life
against death
against the crowds
she pushed everyone away
until one fateful day
she awoke to find everyone gone
now she wished for help
for care
for kindness
for love
for hate
for life
for death
as she realized
she was the only one left
she fought too hard
she fought too long
as she realized
everyone was gone