Words can't describe...or maybe they can

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/814694/

This author's name is sleepy lotus and if you want to feel absolutely overcome by Jack/Liz-ness, read her short stories. I don't know her any way but through her postings, so I thought most people here would enjoy them. Get ready to orgasm, people!

Ahh omg yeah I love her stories.

"get ready to orgasm." you crack me up. but seriously, this writer is intense like that.

People, read it. you'll be glad you did. except, don't read it at work. read it when you have time to soak it in and then rush to watch the movie again afterward.

thanks for posting, Willo. This is a sparrabeth staple.

Oh yeah I think I read some of her stories. But you need the time to sit down, have some capuccino, and settle down to read these stories. Because they are just amazing.

I also like that most of them are fairly short, only two or three chapters. She doesn't need really drawn out sentences to get her point across. That's the mark of a really gifted writer. We should invite her to join the board.

She doesn't break it into peices. She just gets to the point and it doesnt leave you incomplete.

I should learn from her, I have a story written but its not as talented as her.

She should definitely come here 🙂

Is your story on fanfiction, chiki? We'd all like to read it.

Yes its fanfiction. Im a member there. Its written but its not complete, it is not even posted. My problem is if I should make it a T rating or a M rating. It's not a porn with Jack/Liz its just some angst, and love scenes.

I make the ones we write on here T to let people know there's adult content, but not porn. You'll lose a lot of your audience, I think, if it's rated M.

I thought you have to rate it M if its angst. Its not porn I promise you. I love Jack and Liz together but I don't like those stories that stays out of character by adding something that will soil the Jack and Liz romance. I have love scenes.

I could have sworn I've seen stories with angst rated teen or lower. If you want to play it safe, could you make it "tragedy" instead of "angst?" Angst rated M implies someone's loins are aching instead of their heart.

Thank you, willo. I sure could use the help. I never posted any stories in their.

I don't want to loose that touch of character. I want to make it as Jack as possible but with him still changing in character. Oh and Will is definitely going to be in my story.

Ah... I've read all her stuff I can get my grimy little eyes on. It's wonderful. It's great. It's a guilty pleasure, what can I say... 😄

I wish she would join. She probably has some fun things to say about J/E.

Some fun and interesting things indeed 😄.

Im having writer's block lol.

I love her references to smells, especially. Has anyone noticed that? With every new setting, she makes sure to use all the senses, how things taste, the sounds, the smells. It's especially intoxicating when she uses all of them to describe Jack and Liz's reactions to each other.

Alot of specific details on that.

I Must say i am a big fan of Sleepy Lotus......i've read most of her stuff and i am addicted to her Jack/Liz stories......sometimes when i Talk about Jack and Lizzie so passionatly it's because her stories are running through my head....and then i remember that that stuff didnt happen in the movies.....lol....and then i get sad because we may not ever get it!!!

Originally posted by willofthewisp
I love her references to smells, especially. Has anyone noticed that? With every new setting, she makes sure to use all the senses, how things taste, the sounds, the smells. It's especially intoxicating when she uses all of them to describe Jack and Liz's reactions to each other.

Oh yes i appreciate the fact that she makes it soooo easy to visualize exactly whats going on!!!

She's just Great!!!!

Yeah I'm a big fan too! I'm a member of fanfiction butr I haven't posted my story yet...but I'm a big fan of hers. Good thing you posted this here cause she gives an exact discrebtion of the scene and the feelings without giving "too much" she keeps it simple and classic but very discreptive. She's great..maybe someone should PM her and invite her on here...maybe I will later this week when I get a chance.